[OOC] Fourth Dimension

[Jollan]

alright edits are done! if you want to shoot a summary or something like that you can just pm me. I implemented the hammer into a limited use function on the sword!

[Teknonick]

Username: Jollan
Character Name: Garsin
Character Age: 32
Character Gender: male

Appearance: Though, make his hair darker and ignore the weapons.

Hider

Fourth Dimensional Power: sight and sound
Bio: From a foreign family, but raised in Japan. Garsin used to be part of Team Alpha. Ever since he had his operation, he had found that he could see things other people couldn't, but it was written off as impossible because, originally, he was told he had amplified taste. However, it wasn't until his home was attacked and family killed by forth dimensional creatures, that his power was re-evaluated to confirm he had the power of sight, not taste, and surprisingly enough he was starting to develop sound as well.The mistake was from a mix-up in documents. Due to this, Garsin was annexed from civilian society and placed under lockdown for his and others' safety until he was needed by Team Alpha. Though he is in an underground cell, it is made quite cozy like a small cabin on the inside with fake windows that are screens that display the outdoors. His was involved in the first military engagements against the strange creatures as a field medic. Loss after loss, however, had him retire early. That was when Team Alpha picked him up. However, after being part of the group for a little while one of the few freinds he had was horridly injured on the field. When asked to leave him, Garsin disobeyed orders and tended to the man's injuries and extracted him as well. He was promptly fired upon his return, but Garsin quickly shot back, saying that it was fine by him because if their weapons weren't such crap that they wouldn't have been in that situation in the first place! After so much death and failure, he decided he would stay in his "cabin" until he finally died. But as fate would have it, that would soon change as well...

WHEN DEPLOYED: He is equipped with a heavy two handed energy sword (think phantasy star) and a sidewinder-like heavy gun (like the weapon on titanfall, but uses bullets), both magnetically held onto his back. He also carries extra energy cells for his blade. He also has a medical satchel that hangs at the back of his belt. His sword can last a bit on one cell, but has a special ability to turn into an energy hammer. once it is in hammer mode, he can deal a devastating attack but it eats up the whole cell on contact. He carries a total of 5 energy cells. one already loaded, and four extra.

@Jollan

Okay, I like this a lot better! I was going to point an issue out before... but later on, it fixes that.

I will say that mentioning he was part of Team Alpha before mentioning he used to be in the military is a little confusing. I have bolded and underlined those parts in the quote for you to spot them easier.

So, let me get this straight. Garsin was part of the military cell trying to take out the monsters (That all failed), back when they thought he had the power of taste. Then, his home was destroyed, at which point they found out he had Sight, and not taste. Some time later, maybe around the same time, he also had Sound. At which point the secret facility discovered him (They are only interested in people with multiple powers, and ALL people with more than one end up with all of them at some point), and then assigned him to team Alpha.

If all of that is correct, then you are ready to be accepted! We'll, after you read the rules too.

[Jollan]

You know, I scoured the rules looking for that stupid fourth dimentional toe cheese thing earlier today because I know I saw it before when I first checked the rp, but for the life of me I couldn't find it today and thought I just might have seen it elsewhere, lol. I re-read them again to be sure and there it was, lol

as far as it being in chronological order, its been bugging me the whole time at work, lol. I'll fix that right quick

[Teknonick]

Looks good to me now Jollan! You're 1/2 accepted now! Now to wait for Unraveller to look over it, and give his opinions.

[Jollan]

@Unraveller

You know you just want to go ahead and accept it. We all know you just want to go ahead and accept it. So why not just go ahead and accept it. No reading or evaluating and stuff. Just acceptance..... dang I need to brush up on my jedi mind tricks, lol.

[Teknonick]

@Jollan @Unraveller

Here's one for the book: Spoilers. Incoming. Take a look at the app and respond... OR SPOILERS.

[Gambit]

Cool, I will try to get my first post up later today then :)

[Jollan]

[Jollan]

So... can we say im accepted till he responds and then just edit the character later if Unraveller disapproves of something?

[Teknonick]

Sure Jollan.

As for your PM you sent me, that can work out. But, I did just remember a flaw.... The rules of the facility we are at, state that every personnel remains on campus, until retiring. They don't want people who work for them to wander among the regulars... for several reasons I'm not willing to explain until IC, ;)

[Jollan]

its all fine, thats what these pms are for! Idea bouncing!

Now... how to drop him in the story...

[Teknonick]

Good post Jollan. I also have a map posted somewhere around here if ya like to look at it. Helps with the layout. I think our group is in the changing area, not the training area. There also aren't a lot of windows everywhere, except for in Fukui's lab.

[Jollan]

hmm, ill have to start scrounging around for that map, lol. sorry I guess i mixed that part up. rereading and I think i got it. I'll edit it

edit: ok, good to go! I'll look for that map when I get back from my class today

[Teknonick]

Okay, thanks. I should probably upload that to the OP Page. lol. I'm a little picky when it comes to making sure things don't conflict. Like, if this were a show, I'd like to think of this as a script almost. Gotta be perfect. *Grabs OCD by the throat and punches it, pulling hand out through it before waving to the other guy next to him*

[Jollan]

I found it and saved it... I hope the others post soon.

Edit:

[Teknonick]

Where have I seen that GIF before? :3

[Jollan]

lol I dunno, i promise its the only time I've used it

[Unraveller]

Forgive me, for keeping you in anticipation. I have no problems with your character Jollan. (And I still don't know why I'm, "Co-GM")

And yay! The RP continues at last. I'm only a little bit scared with Garsin's raw strength, perhaps he and Kristof could be good friends. I suppose we'll find out.

[Jollan]

Hey, you got big monsters, you gotta have big muscle, am I right? lol

Ok, I'll add my character to the characters tab.

It's all yours @Teknonick*thumbs up*

[Teknonick]

Kk! I'll post after I get home. Small promise though, I am currently holding up EVERY RP I'm in right now. :/

Aaaand, posted!

I found the map again too. I'll post it here for references. Anyone thing I should add color lines to indicate where you can and can't feel the Fourth Dimension? Because both the lab, and all four A,B,C,Z training rooms have it, but nothing else inside of Sector Zelta. Well, and the deployment tunnels.