[OOC] Naruto: Beginning of Glory [Closed for now.]

[DaDrummer676]

Whatever you feel like doing although we could just do both, I make a girl and you change Masota :P And yeah I think we have, your name also sounds familiar.

[Ves]

Feel free, guys. I see nothing wrong with Edgeout, so accepted. Edit: Wait, question. Is Dark Release even a natural Chakra Nature?

[DaDrummer676]

I'll start creating the CS right now and Dark Release was actually a canon kekkei genkai if I remember correctly.

[Aeris]

Yo. Just going to go ahead and note that I'm remaking my character entirely, so expect some big changes in a few.

[edgeout]

@Nero thx ^^ Strider FTW! And yea I want to avoid a sausage fest myself haha~ but you know it will be all action then with bunch of guys :P

[DaDrummer676]

Pfft who says girls can't kick ass? Mine shall be, how do you say.... Bad Ass :P

[edgeout]

@Ves Dark release is a kekki genkai that indeed manipulates the natural chakra to absorb and release. If you want a natural chakra - one of the five element. I can change that too. My reasoning for the Dark release is that it is a family inherited trait from the clan since Nen had to get Fury embedded into him anyway. @DaDrummer676 Haha nice :3 can't wait to see it lol

[Aeris]

The basic of my new character has been updated into my previous CS. Before I continue; what is the general view on ice release? I ask all of you, naturally. • Is it too strong? (Note, I will NOT use any cannon jutsu, because they suck anyway - except Haku's mirror, but that's just overkill in a genin) • Two chakra natures (due to the KG, still) is too iffy on a genin? • Is it not cool enough? :D @edgeout Ha, no problem. I found that image yesterday while image-hunting and thought it was funny how you used him xD I was like; "GOTTA SHOW THAT TO HIM"

[BranchOfSin]

The basic of my new character has been updated into my previous CS. Before I continue; what is the general view on ice release? I ask all of you, naturally. • Is it too strong? (Note, I will NOT use any cannon jutsu, because they suck anyway - except Haku's mirror, but that's just overkill in a genin) • Two chakra natures (due to the KG, still) is too iffy on a genin? • Is it not cool enough? :D

@Nero

Yeah I was thinking the same thing, I was planning in having two Nature Transformations with Branch, but I didn't want to put it before asking.

[DaDrummer676]

I'm fine with Ice Release, I even considered using it for my girl :P Oh and would you mind switching to squad 3 so my girl can be in squad 1? I don't want to characters in the same squad, but it's fine if you don't want to.

[edgeout]

@Nero I don't think two natures is too bad of a thing. Couple of releases require two chakra types like storm (lighting, water) and scorch (fire, wind), but they are like Junin masters when they use it. Also I think you can change your nature(?) or add onto it. Like Naruto - he added Yang release later on to his Chakra. I don't know how powerful that would be though at the current state.

[Ves]

I believe that genin do not have two natures until later, but since the times are hard, I don't think two natures is a bad thing. I'll accept it. I'll add everyone later; I've been a bit busy, and now my girlfriend is on her way, so gonna be a bit busy. {{Also, Rank C means they're around Chuunin rank, which is sorta moot since they're genin, so you guys can take the Rank out completely - or, better yet, put Genin as ranking instead. Edit: Also, nero, I'd prefer genin have only one C-Rank ninjutsu for now, to keep it fair.

[edgeout]

Yea man think Naruto when he started out. He so weak. They were just learning the shadow clone jutsu, and naruto only had sexy jutsu lol. Compared to him we are like an elite class lol

[Aeris]

I agree with everything said here, Also, changed her to squad three, bro. By the way, Ves; it's all good. We're setting up, I think. At least I still am xD About the two chakra natures; well, while that's iffy for a genin (I agree on that myself), everyone with a kekkei genkai was born with them. To balance things up, the only water technique she knows is a very simple/weak one :3 I will finish the CS, brb.

[Ves]

Gotcha. I edited Satoshi; His jutsu list has been made more specific, to avoid any confusion, and his Lightning Touch Technique will scale as he grows stronger. Right now, it's around C-Rank. Similarly, he has been attempting to truly master Shunshin - it will most-likely be called Shunpo when he gets done with it. I'll be back later tonight, or so. ^^

[LetterA]

i did this on mobile and it all deleted so excuse me if i rambled or if it souNds sTU PID its because I AM duMb //cries and i gotta redo the history so ill edit that later //lies down

Claws of the White Tiger

Generic Information

Name: Oukami Anei Age: Sixteen Birthplace: Unknown, Presumed to be Konoha Clan: The Oukami clan is relatively small compared to other great clans, but have at least a handful spread in many of the other villages. Most of this is madeup of the fact that many of their members are orphans adopted from their respected villages, or children bred by said adopted orphans. A people whose origins were rooted in betrayal, they are raised to lie and cheat, and while they may pledge allegiance to their respective homes, their final loyalty stands with their family. As such, the clan is often taught at a young age to think ahead, to plan routes that will in the end help more than harm their people, if not affect them at all. Though they do not have any Kekkai Genkai to be known of, much less known at all by the populous, their line has become famous for trickery and lies. Weight/Height: 100lbs/5'4 Squad: Squad Two

Combat Information

Kekkei Genkai: N/A Chakra Nature: Water Release Techniques: Anei has learned the standard Academy techniques including shunshin, and is currently being trained to learn Suiton: Teppōdama Weapons/Tools: Anei carries the standard ninja tools and is especially adept at the wire and senbon, but has been trained as a(n even younger) child to use his own hands. His nails have been sharpened and he has several hidden packs of poison on his body which he can easily stab into, thus making his own hands poisonous. It's troublesome to use when he has a cold, let me tell ya-- For emergencies sake, he carries two small knives on him, one hidden on his right leg, and another on his left arm. Weaknesses/Strengths: Due to much practice, Anei has gotten adept with sleight of hand and lying, and has managed to slowly work it up so that even by simple body movements he can make himself "disappear" while actually simply tricking the eye. His stamina is not one to be joked about either, spending many days nonstop jogging to keep himself at tiptop shape, making up for his slightly smaller chakra pool. Although his chakra pool is much smaller, he makes good use of what he has, careful only to use it when he feels the need, otherwise using tricks or bukijutsu and taijutsu to help himself. Along with others in his family, he's been trained at acupuncture, and is slowly becoming more and more accurate with his needles but is obviously heavily reliant on his nails and close combat. He, noticeably, is also rather petite and while it makes for swifter movements and he's handy with his claws, would be quite easy to literally break in half.

Personal Information

Personality: Anei is the poster person for averageness. He laughs in crowds and is silent when the situation calls for it, his eyes and ears sharp in social cues. He's very easy to befriend, as his interests seem to always match with yours, and just when you want to introduce him to your friends, you realize too late that you never knew his name and that whatever he said was always whatever you said, but just worded differently. He's not exciteable to say the least, but is very good at faking it, and is also very good at faking solemness or respect. There's not a trace about him that reeks of untrustworthiness, his small and simple presence almost a relief to be around. Anei always smiles when he can basically, and is a generally happy kid, but it's obvious when his family is mentioned or if he's in front of them he's a bit more professional- which is kinda backwards but hey. Backstory:

too long ahh

The earliest memory Anei has of his past is crying when he skinned his knee after being pushed aside and having his dinner stolen. He was a doorstep baby, raised by the orphanage and though many past memories of his melted into a haze, this one memory is the clearest. He was adopted at the age of four, along with two others a year older than him, by the Oukami family. It was then that his life truly started. Upon arrival at his new home, he was greeted by a decently sized family, and for the first year he had fun and felt loved. Even the other kids he'd been adopted with, who had once bullied and pushed him around in the orphanage due to his size, ended up becoming close friends. When he was five, he and his two "siblings" were taken to the basement. This was a mystical place, for in the year they had lived, people always went to the basement to train, coming up exhausted but with smiles so kind. So, obviously, the kids were excited. Arriving at the basement, the three found four other children their age, with eyes as wide and curious as theirs, locked into a room. They spent some time in there, a long time, and soon the basement felt more a prison than a room of wonder. All attempts of escape were found futile, and soon tears started to be shed, some complaining about hunger. When this started, a stranger opened the door and beat them into silence. This continued for how long, the children fed only water, and only if they answered questions that were similar to the lines of, "Who in the Oukami clan gives the warmest hugs?" that slowly lead up to, "Who in the Oukami clan is worth dying for?" The children, who had been so thoroughly loved before, used these questions to remember the warmth, always answering one or two people before agreeing with the conclusion that "All of them, everyone is worth dying for". It seemed like ages before their first experience at the basement ended, and they learned why everyone always looked so exhausted and happy- it was a relief to see the familiar kind and loving faces instead of the large stranger that beat them. Training continued in this way, and when Anei was eight, he and his "siblings" were given their weapons, Anei's involving senbon and poison. Creative boy he was, he suggested the use of his nails, to which his family lauded him on and supported him, giving him nail files to sharpen his claws, training him for a fitting regime. In the basement, his training escalated as well. As he continued to grow, he was forced to read through scrolls about acupuncture points in the body, and to practice with increasing speeds at slashing at a dummy. The stranger changed every few months, so that Anei never got comfortable enough with one, each of their regimens varying in degrees of pain. One of them was a man who enjoyed torture, and when Anei was twelve, he was the one that said for every strike against the dummy that Anei missed, he would have a needle struck into one of his pressure points, to send inside him pain. Anei got much better at using his claws after that. With age obviously comes the need to go to school, and when Anei did so, his basement trainings refocused on loyalty. When being whipped from the back, the strangers would ask him personal questions- no more of warm hugs, but more about if so-and-so had done something or if Anei had ever caught whatsherface doing another thing. They were all truths that Anei had learned to deny or agree, his mind being melded to find a way to cause the least damage to his family. He learned this lesson after his first mistake, admitting that he had in fact seen dubious documents in his auntie's room, to which the lashing he received was so rattling he accidentally recieved a killer scar under his left eye. Thankfully it didn't damage his sight, but he was taken out of the basement afterwards, coddled by the very aunt he had outed. Immediately a rush of shame overflowed him- how could he have betrayed her like that?- and it was then that his loyalty to Oukami was fortified. His basement trainings afterwards lightened up on the loyalty training, focusing more on poison, Anei training by lying in bed and intaking a number of his specified poison in small doses, hoping to train him into not dying by his own hand. At the moment, Anei resumes poison and loyalty training, the latter during only every few months or so. He still gets a bit of a numb sensation if he accidentally intakes his poison, but at least doesn't straight up pass out and vomit like the first time around.

Allies: His loyalty will always stand with the Oukami clan, but will also become an ally to any who ask of it. It is more whimsical, his allegiance with others, able to turn on you in mere seconds after finishing a deal. He is more likely to be loyal if he's made to sign an actual agreement instead of just saying it out loud. Enemies: Anyone who stands against his ally. Other: clothes wip

[Ves]

It's fine~ He looks perfect. From what I see, he's accepted.

[Aeris]

Finished Tsumei.

[LetterA]

It's fine~ He looks perfect. From what I see, he's accepted.

@Ves

AHH thank youuu and lmaoo can squad two be the shady a'f squad ��

[edgeout]

@LetterA lol. Then our squad should be the colorful-personality squad haha @Nero the girl char seems gud. Her personality like ice XD. It also contrasts well with my char, sort of like Sasuke - Naruto thing lol