From my guess I would think that@CrimsonWarrior55 cs should be a assassin or a thief
Hmmm.. actually... both could work. I may alter that "no-killing" thing, since, ya know... pirates, and Steve could be the thief (he had to live somehow), while Mr. Vein could be an assassin (gotta earn money somehow).
@TalijaKey
Not sure whether or not to say anything on approval. Your fruit may do a little too much for a Logia, so I'm going to kind of wait on final approval to see what anyone else thinks.
I could change the DF to for example just one type of clouds? Maybe just rain clouds or just fog?
Would that fit better.
Devil Fruit: Juden-Juden Fruit Type: Paramecia Ability:The Juden-Juden fruit grants the user the ability to increase, decrease, and change charges. Techniques: Mark(Starting skill):Jack can freely create marks on his body, or through Physical contact, mark a space or object. Once marked, he may freely change the areas charge(-/0/+,) and increase said charge's strength. Currently Jack can only create and hold a total of four marks. The less marks he has charged, the higher their attraction/repulsion, he can generate in a mark, and his tendency of confusing fantasy with reality.
Personality: First and foremost Jack is what many would a coward, and a loser, but not by choice. It's just that's the way he came out. He's failed at pretty much everything he's tried his hands at(basic labor, carpentry, ship building, acting, thieving, being a librarian, singing, telling jokes, begging, chef, waiter, cleaning houses, writing, reading to the blind, marines, etc, etc.) The coward is easily explained. He hates seeing anyone he cares about hurt, and he loves himself, A lot! He's also pretty sensitive to the emotions of others so when there's dissonance amongst people, its hard for him not to shut down. Being a loser, that's a bit harder to explain, but he's almost certain it has something to do with his inability to pay attention. The one exception to his constant lack of success is the sheer volume of information he's able to absorb and retain. It's all useless of course, because nobody will pay you simply on the principle of knowing what a lot of other people claimed to know.
Background: Jack grew up in a typical home, and went to a typical school. He got below typical marks. He had to repeat a couple of grades, and quit school a good four grades before he would've been able to graduate. The next couple of years were spent bouncing around from one place of employment to another. Eventually he found himself in the marines, and that looked promising. It wasn't, of course. Not just because he couldn't deal with the constant bullets and blades that were aimed at his head, which was bad, but it was the killing that shouldn't have happened that made things worst. After one particularly bloody battle, something was pulled from one of the pirate wrecks, a devil fruit. It looked like a bunch of grapes, but with black, white, and yellow fruit instead of the traditional green and purple. The captain wanted to eat it, right away, and would've if someone knew what it was. So the captain, not wanting to devour something useless, decided to wait, and had it stored in a safe, in his quarters. There was a big party that night, and everyone was happy, and drunk. Nobody cared about the bloody water, or the stains that the land would never be free of. Jack did. He couldn't take any more, and he decided he'd needed to get out. So he did, and he took the fruit with him. It wasn't difficult, because the guards were drunk and passed out, and the captain had the code written down on a slip of paper he kept under his pillow.
@malmshodes Well the roles that I saw are gunslinger/cannon user, Ship Right, Doctor/Chemist/Swordsman, Cook/Scout and a suggested a assassin or a thief. Hope I didnt miss anyone.
We do need a navigator and a musician are a must too XP Maybe even a scholar?
@malmshodesI'm going to veto that on the sheer overpoweredness that that fruit could present and the fact that, as Crim pointed out to me, we aren't messing with D's for this, since we still don't know WHAT they are exactly.
Wait.... I just realized... We keep messing up our names. It shouldn't be Steve Habasaki, but Habasaki Shuya "Steve". That wouldn't be Jack Lemon. It'd be Lemon Jack. Whoopsies.
@malmshodesI'm going to veto that on the sheer overpoweredness that that fruit could present and the fact that, as Crim pointed out to me, we aren't messing with D's for this, since we still don't know WHAT they are exactly.
Lol Alrighty. I had a feeling that could happen, but it was worth a shot:P. Is it the creating of electrons, manipulations of electrons, or the two abilities combined that's too much? As for the D. initial, I'm new to the show so I didn't know it meant anything special. I just thought it was cool because my dogs are named Jack-Daniels and Lemon, and the main character had that initial. So I'll change that too.