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It isn't a bad read. ^.^ I skimmed over the parts I remembered, read the parts I didn't and the parts I really enjoyed. Lol
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I'm like muiti task reading, cause I'm making lunch lol. xD I see you already made the thread.
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I didn't make it. I found it. :) it is the same one as before I just went through my posts until I found it.

Are you enjoying the read?
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Oh you just moved your character! Lol I thought you made a new thread.

Haha so far I am!
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Nope! Lol. I'm thinking of moving all the characters over and leaving my first post blank. What do you think? Or maybe put her background there...

Yay! ^.^
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I think that moving all of the characters over is a good idea, that's what I plan on doing!

I'm in the middle of the woods fight part. I can't believe all the spelling errors I had made so far.
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You and me both! I really wanted to go edit them a few times. I found that more then spelling mistake, I made errors that did not make sense. Such as repeating words, and unclear sentences. xD Oh-well, we don't rp to be perfectionist, we do it to have fun!

I love the fight in the woods! I love how it ended too. ^.^
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Haha yeah, I'm just surprised I never notice before haha.

Me two though I love the part where they are in the city before they go to Logan's too. I just finished rereading.
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I like how tender Devin is with her, even when he is mad. I think it is safe to say that I like any moments when Devin and Avina are talking just the two of them. I am thinking of creating a reason behind why they connected so easily and quickly. Not sure where I want to take though, other then just give a reason that somehow contributes to the plot.

I think I am just going to drop my other two wolves. I will use them like true side characters, come when they need to and mentioned only once in a while. What do you think?
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Yeah, I know and the funny is that to anyone else. He is mean to them, and a smartass. Avina just really seems to get to him I guess, I know I love when the two of them are together alone. Our mains always do that xD Hmm interesting, I'd like to hear it when you are done making it. Unless its a surprise.

Okay that's fine with me, I will two.
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I just don't want to be dragged down with three main side characters and a main. Trying to make a post for four people like that can be daunting. I would rather double only or stay with just one.

It isn't a surprise ^.^ Once I get a rough idea, I will probably ask you to help me iron it out. I just think their connection is so strong it should have a reason behind it.
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I'm going to keep my side characters, I am just not going to put them into every post. I want to focus on our mains is all I was meaning... I didn't mean for you to delete them :(
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Okay haha I will happily help you out! I posted a question on that thread xD

I didn't delete I still have them but I'll put them back up then I have to go for awhile.
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Oh, okay. Then I will talk to you later ^.^
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XD I might be on later though you well likely be in bed :/
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Probably. And we have a sever storm coming through so I might have to power off my electronics.
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Ah that's sucks I hate storms. Hopefully you don't lost power.
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It was a thunderstorm. It was great to listen to while I was falling asleep!
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Thunderstorms are always so relaxing. Though I have trouble falling asleep with them because of the booming sounds.
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It was the flashing light that's gets me! It was starting get to hurt my eyes. Lol
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