@ViolentViolet"Quote"
Appearance
-Brina is a slender individual. She is nearly 5'9, but barely even 100 pounds. She wears a elegant Victorian aged dress, of silver and red colors. She has bright red lips, and silver long hair. Her eyes are blood red, and her smile is eerie and unsettling to any human. She has a haunting beauty.-
Name: Stribrina(Brina) Julial
Age: appears 15
Sex: female
Sexual Preference: male
Family:Julial
Significant Other: none
Gifts
-she can turn her skin to a silver like substance, that is very hard. She can phase through anything at will, and she can cause people to forget things(of course I will ask if that's okay before she does it)-
Personality
-she is quiet and reserved. She has a very elegant politeness to her. She is shy, but tries to hide it by being a bookworm.-
It's not finished. Plus it needs to be formatted and made to be neater than it it is. When you put 'male' in the sexual preference spot you should be putting 'straight' or 'heterosexual'. At 100 lbs and 5'9 would make her extremely boney and with no fat on her bones. She'd essentially be dead so she wouldn't be that pretty either. I would also prefer that you had a picture as well, since you're description is a little vague. You don't have a quote either. Silver is actually pretty pliable, did you know what? Phasing through anything is a little bit too much for my likes as well and controlling a human is already a vampire power. It's called 'Compulsion'.
*clears throat* I think that's it right now.