[OOC] Dance in the Night - A Vampire Society Role Play

[ViolentViolet]

Well if you're too unsure about it then you can PM it to me. You wouldn't be the first.

[ViolentViolet]

@Wraithblade6
So first off, you posted it in the wrong tab first. The Characters Tab is for accepted characters only.

Second, he's very vague honestly. I know that a biography is not required - I personally hate bios so that's why - but if he's really 700 years old there must be more things to say about him. If you're going to add the biography, you should have fun with it a little bit. If he was an adviser to the Kings, how did that come to be? The Juran and all the other Pure Bloods look down on Turned vampires. Who turned him? Wtc.

[Wraithblade6]

@ViolentViolet
Alright. There is a lot to say about him. I didn't want his entire story to be about his past, but I will write more that you could connect to to make a history with him. In fact, actually... I could use more information on the Juran clan to be able to tie them together.

[ViolentViolet]

@Wraithblade6
Alright. That might be a bit. I have to actually get around to writing a history on them. There's a brief synopsis on them on the first page but that's probably not enough is it?
Is there anything specific you need to use to write?

[Wraithblade6]

@ViolentViolet Well, how about who the previous king was before the queen? When did she come to power? Was there a great inter-family war? Did the slayers kill him? Maybe Mithias tipped the slayers off...

[ViolentViolet]

@Wraithblade6

I see. . . .

The previous King became at a very young age after his father died with his elder brother, after they had been captured by a rival family of Pure Bloods - the Shiyumi - who want to take their place as the royal family and rulers of vampires. They're bodies were sent back as a warning, burned and in boxes and that was when Tarren came into power. He was the youngest of three sons, but with his surviving older brother away, tracking down their killers and training new, turned warriors to fight for them, he became king while his mother raised her final child. Tarren ruled alone for a very long time, while his mother raised his younger sister in secret, in a house far from where they knew he was and brought her to him when she was ready to become queen. He was reaching his four hundredth year when he met the girl. She was two hundred years his junior, but beautiful and willing to learn and rule. They revealed her to the public only when she was already married to him and very much in love - and very pregnant with their first child. There were no open threats, not with the aristocratic families so clearly endeared with the innocent woman who had become the Queen so suddenly, seemingly overnight.

Their first son was the only son the two had though there first three children were girls, all as sweet and beautiful as their mother. There forth came four hundred years after she had first come to be his Queen, the boy would be the King and the second last child the two would bare in this life time. They didn't try as hard for children anymore, she drank less blood when she did not need the bonuses it granted. He was raised away from society, where none would know of him while his sisters attended balls and soirees, courted by other Pure Blood young vampires. All of the other families had gathered when they thought that there was no male heir, looking to have their sons marry the daughters in hopes that they would come to power because of it and rule when the Juran died out.

Fortunately, this was not the case and after the family had ceased to see the public for several years, they appeared again with the son married to their youngest daughter. He had had his choice of girls and picked the smartest of the three, albeit the most humble in nature. And now, here we are, with them and their children.

[Wraithblade6]

So Virdiana and Matthieu are their two children?

[ViolentViolet]

@Wraithblade6
Yes, they are. Along with their yet unclaimed brother.

[Celaira]

@ViolentViolet I've completed the abilities and personality portion of my CS (as well as the appearance portion). All I have left to do is history, but I wanted to get the abilities approved before I moved forward. The CS I should note that her abilities--how she got them, I mean--will be explained in her history once I write it, I just want to make sure they're not too bad power-wise. ^^

EDIT: I have a question about a vampire who binges on blood and has offspring? Does that make the offspring a Pure Blood?

[ViolentViolet]

@Celaira
If the offspring is the child of another pure blood vampire then the child would also be a pure blood. If it is not, then it would simply be another vampire unless the child is born of one of the aristocratic families. Circumstances like this may lead to the pair to founding their own family as well. Why do you ask?

So I took a look at her and I want to say something. For a turned vampires she has an awful lot of Gifts and I don't like this very much since those who are turned are normally the weakest of the vampire breeds. Her personality is well thought out though and I enjoyed reading it.

I want to ask though. How is it that you are making this? I'm curious to know since I've never seen it done like this before.

[Celaira]

@Celaira
If the offspring is the child of another pure blood vampire then the child would also be a pure blood. If it is not, then it would simply be another vampire unless the child is born of one of the aristocratic families. Circumstances like this may lead to the pair to founding their own family as well. Why do you ask?

So I took a look at her and I want to say something. For a turned vampires she has an awful lot of Gifts and I don't like this very much since those who are turned are normally the weakest of the vampire breeds. Her personality is well thought out though and I enjoyed reading it.

I want to ask though. How is it that you are making this? I'm curious to know since I've never seen it done like this before.

@ViolentViolet

To your question of why I was curious, I was going to make Caerina a binge-eater type of turned vampire.

To the Gifts, I gave her abilities based on her age, as most of them (all except one) are sensory in nature, I thought it would be okay especially since I was going to explain how she got them in her history. However, I will gladly remove some if you would like. :3

As to how I'm making it: I'm coding it by hand using CSS and HTML.

[ViolentViolet]

@Celaira

Well I don't want you to go through a bunch of trouble writing up a long, nice bio only to have it denied because there's a lot of powers there but I was thinking only a few powers per character. So that things didn't get too crazy and no one was over powered or anything.

Oh wow. I could never figure out the coding thing.

[Celaira]

@ViolentViolet I've been teaching myself coding for the last three years. Also, that's fine, would having only three powers be all right with you? Or should I knock it down to two?

[ViolentViolet]

@Celaira

Uh. Two would be preferable. Since she's the first of her lineage.

[Celaira]

@ViolentViolet All right~! :3

EDIT: I've kept Blood Tracer and Empathy for her abilities. :3

[ViolentViolet]

@Celaira

Okay that's fine

[Celaira]

@ViolentViolet This does take place in 2015 right? I'm asking because I need a reference point for the 200 years of my vampire's life lol.

[ViolentViolet]

@Celaira
Yeah probably. Or maybe a few year back.

[Celaira]

@ViolentViolet Okay :3

[TheHangedMan]

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