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The ability to control the force, especially to send comprehensible ripples through it, is not something an untrained mind can do.
After six years among the Jedi, especially considering that the average Arkanian Offshoot lives only 55 years, she would have been taught combat. This RP is set during a war. Even if only for self-defense, she'd have been taught to wield a lightsaber.

At this point in the RP, most of the Jedi who will become captives haven't been captured yet. Darth Nyiss, the Sith in charge here, isn't interested in slaves... She's got access to an abundance of that from elsewhere.

Your character seems lacking. It does not look like she'll add anything to the RP. She has no skills of note, crippling flaws and a fairly weak mind. In other words... Why would the Sith bother to keep her alive at all? It'd be obvious to even the densest Sith that she would not survive training.

What do you seek to achieve with her?
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like I said, she's not finished. I'll take another look over with the details you mentioned, but there is one thing about her that I'll only share with you for the time being, which I'll send by PM. (It needs to be approved by you anyway)
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We know. we provided criticism so you could have a bit of a guideline for your continued construction.

You'll need to make her useful in some fashion at least for the Sith to bother keeping her alive. Or at least for her to have any chance of survival.

Don't be afraid to PM us. its better to do it early so you won't have as much rewriting to do if its not something that readily works.
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As she's so in tune with others emotions and was formerly a slave, has Leena got any long-term emotional damage from the on-going negative mental pressure she's been under for most of her life?
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Okay so this is my official expression of interest in playing one of the Jedi prisoners *waves at fallen, rtron, and echo* I'm still toying with ideas but it has been brought to my attention that aliens and near humans are in short supply so I will be aiming for something in that General area. Currently I'm looking at either a Kel dor, Selkath, Zabrak, or perhaps a really good moment of inspiration will bring me something else. It will for sure be a Knight. So lots of room for growth. Hopefully you guys will liken what I put together. I should have it up in the next 24 hours God(s) willing
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Okay so this is my official expression of interest in playing one of the Jedi prisoners *waves at fallen, rtron, and echo* I'm still toying with ideas but it has been brought to my attention that aliens and near humans are in short supply so I will be aiming for something in that General area. Currently I'm looking at either a Kel dor, Selkath, Zabrak, or perhaps a really good moment of inspiration will bring me something else. It will for sure be a Knight. So lots of room for growth. Hopefully you guys will liken what I put together. I should have it up in the next 24 hours God(s) willing


If you go Selkath thats some nice interaction with Koren who was the Jedi Watchman of Manaan more recently (likely though you would have been recruited by his master or him and his master together).

It also means both you and he will feel the loss of Manaan and Koren will feel guilty when speaking to you. Despite that I don't think there were many Selkath Jedi especially in this period due to their neutrality.
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those species could all be interesting.

we've got a couple of zabrak, but no kel dor or selkath
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As she's so in tune with others emotions and was formerly a slave, has Leena got any long-term emotional damage from the on-going negative mental pressure she's been under for most of her life?


It's a factor in her anxiety, but for the most part she's learned to manage it.
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It also means both you and he will feel the loss of Manaan and Koren will feel guilty when speaking to you. Despite that I don't think there were many Selkath Jedi especially in this period due to their neutrality.

I was going to say that if Koren had saved the Selkath Jedi's life he wouldn't feel so guilty, but the weight of a world on your shoulders is still a burden even if one drop has been caught.

As for neutrality, America was neutral for the first few years of the Second World War (not that we hold it against you at all you lazy tardy bastards :P) and we still had plenty of Americas flying fighters and pounding the ground as extra-national volunteers.
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I was going to say that if Koren had saved the Selkath Jedi's life he wouldn't feel so guilty, but the weight of a world on your shoulders is still a burden even if one drop has been caught.

As for neutrality, America was neutral for the first few years of the Second World War (not that we hold it against you at all you lazy tardy bastards :P) and we still had plenty of Americas flying fighters and pounding the ground as extra-national volunteers.


The difference is the Selkath as a species wouldn't get involved. In fact after the JCW they made up their own force organisation, and while there is the possibility of them existing likely they wouldn't have gotten involved in the war to prevent Manaan from getting dragged into things.
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Dear lord. The selkath is currently being dissected for concept. So no body jump on that ship quite yet. I'll work out details when concept is finished XD
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Dear lord. The selkath is currently being dissected for concept. So no body jump on that ship quite yet. I'll work out details when concept is finished XD


Sep... Tends to do that often. :p
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Sep... Tends to do that often. :p


As a doctor with no official license dissection needs to be performed to make sure everything works properly.

Also in seriousness I am just trying to help him get an idea that will work and not get Ellri-raped.
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@Sep

Ellri is not that bad, most the time.
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its only when the execution of a good concept is bad (read: written by Sep without sufficient thought to lore) we do that.

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As a doctor with no official license dissection needs to be performed to make sure everything works properly.

Need to borrow my rusty machete to get through the tough gristly bits, or can you make do with a steak knife?

Also in seriousness I am just trying to help him get an idea that will work and not get Ellri-raped.

I heard @Genni quite enjoyed her @Ellri-rape, but that's @Genni.
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Need to borrow my rusty machete to get through the tough gristly bits, or can you make do with a steak knife?

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I heard @Genni quite enjoyed her @Ellri-rape, but that's @Genni.


Considering Genni is into females, I doubt it.
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Finis
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Alright. So after bouncing ideas off of Fallen's head like rocks from a potato canon it looks like I'm going with a Kel Dor Sentinel. *Braces for impact*
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Alright. So after bouncing ideas off of Fallen's head like rocks from a potato canon it looks like I'm going with a Kel Dor Sentinel. *Braces for impact*


Dude I wasn't trying to be a tool I was tryna make the concept help fit with the time period :P

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