@SomeoneSomewere It's fine this idea I've wanted to do for awhile since my other partner left .,.
Many centuries ago, a dimension hovered above Earth, it had no solid form to those who say it in the sky -it appeared as a large cluster of stars, however it wasn't just that. The dimension was known as Lux to those who lived within its bright glow.
The inhabitants of the dimension varied but were those of light and purity, Angels were the governing force within the realm and helped guide those new and old on living a peaceful life. The Elders ruled all, royal families were picked to govern their own lands and things progressed with no incident, until newcomers brought the stable, peaceful existence of the Luxians into chaos.
The race of Light beings as were usually kind, outgoing and spoke to anyone, however with this new family, they hesitated and kept their distance. The first and only on to go near the family of three was a daughter of one of the six royal families, things seemed to calm after that. Until one night while the princess and the newly named prince were playing within the garden, ash suddenly began to fall from the sky, the sounds of screams filling the air as creatures of shadow and darkness emerged from nowhere and began to attack. The prince valiantly tried to protect his friend, however he still wasn't strong enough to keep them away for long, one managed to sink its claws into the boys flesh before ducking past and aiming for the princess. This wasn't a random attack, they were attacking the royal families.
The Elders managed to step in and send the beasts away, however that was only the beginning. A few days after, the prince that had helped protect the princess, began to change, his wings going from pure white to ink black, the scars that should of healed darkened and sealed after releasing a burst of darkness that seemed to signal the next attack.
A battle began between the Lux and the Umbra -as they were now called- which tore the realm in half, the royal children that managed to survive - only two of the seven- were encased in a sphere of Light and sent down the Earth while the battle raged on.
No one knew that the princess and now Fallen prince would lose their memories, that their power would be sealed away until they unlocked it, they only hoped that their race would continue on. The Lux managed to stay remain in battle for two more years before the dimension ripped completely and vanished from the sky.
Our story begins in the present time, 2015 with the two now attending school and leading normal lives, however darkness never fades. The Umbra are beginning to emerge once more, can both fight the beings of darkness of they don't know of their power?
@Arista Yeah, s'not that it's bad, it's just the way it gives information is a little more tell than show, and it feels like pieces of information are missing, or skipped over. For instance, "this new family," being mentioned seemed really out of place considering the paragraph prior you'd simply called them newcomers and didn't give much information regarding what they were. To me, it felt like it was supposed to be more than three people with the verbage used.