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I've edited the NS. As requested I tried to explain Eden a little more, expanded a little on the history, structure and command of the Immortal Fleet and updated culture (I removed religion entirely). The Ascended Archon ritual has also been explained. If there are still points that can be approved please say so. Also, I'll admit that Eden's explination is more meta-science than actual science. I hope that's not too much of a problem.
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We can't all have degrees in theoretical physics. If you say your science works that way, it works that way.
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Its accepted, put it in the dump.
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The edits tidy things up nicely, I have no further comments for the app other than: Accepted.
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The edits tidy things up nicely, I have no further comments for the app other than: Accepted.


You can go and and move to the dump Legion02.
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It should be noted that Flagg's NS and mine are complimentary.
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It should be noted that Flagg's NS and mine are complimentary.


Yes. The details will be expanded on in my History section.
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Collective symbol, designed to represent Collective Society.

Name of nation: The Collective of Civilised Species










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For the sake of my sanity, use hiders.
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Done.
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@AlfhedilDid you read my NS, BTW?
Does it look fine?
Technically I still need to fill in the history and I will when posting up the actual thing to the character page.
I just lost my post when trying to cut/paste this for the first time and I still didn't find the inspiration to write a background story as good as my first.
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@AlfhedilDid you read my NS, BTW?
Does it look fine?
Technically I still need to fill in the history and I will when posting up the actual thing to the character page.
I just lost my post when trying to cut/paste this for the first time and I still didn't find the inspiration to write a background story as good as my first.


I skimmed through it a while ago when you first posted it, but I'll give it another go over when I have a moment free.
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I skimmed through it a while ago when you first posted it, but I'll give it another go over when I have a moment free.
It didn't change much since then so you don't need if you already did.
The one big addition will be Morte's history, basically mention of the Kilonova Catastrophe, Morte's early struggles, formation fo the empire, some wars and so on.

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Accepted.
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So, that IC?
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So, that IC?


I asked Alfhedil to do the first post, IC is open when he gets that done.
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IC is go, if you're accepted already, then you are clear to post away.

Also! Time to begin with the mutual histories between the Synchronicity and anyone else who decided to listen to Cytherea when she roamed across the region. Basically, when she met with each nation that would give her the time, she left a way to make contact again, and vague promises of anything from mutual non-aggression to full-on military aid. It's really up to you guys just how far discussions would have gone1, but take into account here one thing. No matter if the Synchronicity has promised full military support in some war, or the trade of materials between nations, every deal Cytherea/Ba'al has made is beneficial primarily to them. It's there somewhere, even if it looks like the Synchronicity has really taken a loss by providing something to a faction somewhere, it benefits Cytherea/Ba'al.

Factions will also start to rapidly become more defined in the Synchronicity, and where each Precept stands. For the moment, the only two factions that would have contact with the outside nations, are the Precepture of Ba'al and the Promethean Council.

1:I reserve the right to say "There's no possible way she would have traded all that tech." or some variation of that.
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Oh yes please. Let me tie that shit in, I need somewhere for my plot to go.
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Also, what is the normal maximum subluminal acceleration of small craft in the galaxy? I might need it to start fleshing out weapons systems.
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