[OOC] Fire Emblem - The Reclaimers of Peace

[Juka Gearsworth]

Ohh yeah, lets get going! By the way, whats the minimum of lines/paragraphs in a Casual RP?

[Lugubrious]

Anyone should be able to do two paragraphs.

[Juka Gearsworth]

I'm used to writing one, but I'll try for two

[Lady Seraphina]

Does the Basileus have a name?

[Juka Gearsworth]

@Prince of Seraphs I was about to ask that, xD, by the way, I didn't add Elena as a Character, too late for doing so or there's still chance?

[Lugubrious]

Does the Basileus have a name?

@Prince of Seraphs

Yep, Gustave Truculenter, though 'Basileus Truculenter' is what he's commonly referred to as.

@Prince of Seraphs I was about to ask that, xD, by the way, I didn't add Elena as a Character, too late for doing so or there's still chance?

@Juka Gearsworth

Sure, anyone can add a second character anytime.

[ToadRopes]

@Lugubrious...in living color
Let me take you for a ride
Yes, I'm live in living color!
So sit back and let me be your TV guide!

I couldn't resist.

[Crimson Raven]

So, I have a question, how do you do the large title? I haven't figured it out yet. I know how to change the color but not the font size.

[ToadRopes]

@Crimson Raven

Quote me and find out.

[Crimson Raven]

@Crimson Raven

Quote me and find out.

@ToadRopes

Like this?

[Lugubrious]

Raven, I'd recommend having both characters in a single post in the future, separated by a header perhaps.

[Lady Seraphina]

We're not in such a hurry that we need the first post exactly when it is completed. We can wait twenty minute for you to finish the second one.

[Crimson Raven]

Sorry, only after I posted the second one, I realized that you put both of your characters on one sheet.

[Juka Gearsworth]

Quick question, how do I centralize the Header?

[Crimson Raven]

quote me

[Lugubrious]

Use [*center][/center].

Also, I didn't approve Elena's sheet. You post it for my approval before you put it into characters, and way before you start playing. Namely, I have a problem with Elena's age. In the Fire Emblem series, woman aren't treated much differently from men in the realm of physical capabilities, but even still, it is highly unlikely seventeen-year-old girl could bear the weight of full-sized Knight-class armor unless she were rather heavily built. Even Kjelle from Awakening is in her mid-twenties if not older.

[Lady Seraphina]

Elena Crowmor - Askaran Castle

@Juka Gearsworth

Hey dude, there's no such thin as Askaran Castle. We're all at Basilmeron Castle.

Coming from the village of Askaran, a village that connects commercial routes between Augur and Acarid, Elena was always fond of war, seeing battles as an art and the battlefield as a huge stage, she was daughter of a powerful family that ruled over the shipments and routes of Askaran, her life was based on a strict rule of never forgetting her family and never abdicating from her honour, Elena apsires to join the Reclaimers one day, and fought to improve her art of war, so she was worthy enough to join the group.

@Juka Gearsworth

Also a couple of things. Firstly Lug said you could post the character for approval, not that you could assume it was accepted without running it by him and start ICing with it.

Secondly with regards to the CS itself, where exactly did Elena see all this war that she would idolize it in such a manor. Her village is on a central trade routes between two kingdoms who are definitely not fighting. Where could she possibly have witnessed battles such that would inspire her to devote her life to the art of war.

Lastly, the Reclaimers are new. The ruler called for the groups formation at a maximum of a month before the RP starts, so there would be no "aspires to join the Reclaimers one day". She hears about it, she goes to the capitol to see if they'd have her. She wouldn't have had time to do any sort of extra training to make herself worthy of them.

Also your CS is riddles with spelling errors but that's more a personal gripe than anything. And if you've got more than one CS in a single post could you put them in hiders or use headers to separate them or something, just so it's clear where one ends and the next starts.

@Lugubrious Do you think you could put a list of the classes used so far and the number of people we have occupying each class in the OP of the character tab so that people creating new CSs will have an idea of what we need more of and what we have too much of?

[Juka Gearsworth]

Hmm I see, well I'm not that skilled at making characters or writing in english, so pardon my mistakes, but thanks for pointing them out, I'll currently remove Elena from the game, perhaps I can bring her out again in the future, but for now she's out, all good?

[Lugubrious]

The OP of the characters tab already has all of the classes listed by their characters, but I can add what we have enough of.

Hmm I see, well I'm not that skilled at making characters or writing in english, so pardon my mistakes, but thanks for pointing them out, I'll currently remove Elena from the game, perhaps I can bring her out again in the future, but for now she's out, all good?

@Juka Gearsworth

If you were to adjust her age or physique, and fix a couple of the errors, she'd be accepted. Thank you for being so receptive to our critique.

[Juka Gearsworth]

If you were to adjust her age or physique, and fix a couple of the errors, she'd be accepted. Thank you for being so receptive to our critique.

@Lugubrious

You're welcome, I'll take my time to adjust her, I wont finish today as i'll have a busy day, but she'll come up eventually =)