[OOC] Aincrad: Remastered Edition (MMORPG Roleplay, inspired by SAO and Log Horizon)

[CallMeChaotix]

Yet it feels exactly the same.
@Crimson Raven

[Damiann47]

@CallMeChaotix

If you suck at roleplaying that's fine, it really is, but if you want to get better then just listen to us. Would you rather us not say anything, and just let you continue making the same mistakes? Just saying you're not good at writing isn't going to make you a better writer, you need to take criticism and use it to improve yourself. I want you to stick around, trust me I'm not trying to chase you away if that's what you're thinking, all I'm asking is you really try to listen to us, and really put some effort into beefing up your weaknesses.

Resisting is just going to hurt you a whole lot more than it's gonna hurt us.

[Crimson Raven]

Anyone else want to help convince him? I am running out of patience here.

Edit: Ninja'd...

[boomlover]

@Crimson Raven question what does ninjs'd mean ?

[Ermine]

Means someone else posted between the previous post and the one you just wrote, @boomlover, with the previous one saying what you were writing, or at least on the same topic.

[Crimson Raven]

Means someone else posted between the previous post and the one you just wrote, @boomlover, with the previous one saying what you were writing, or at least on the same topic.

@Ermine

@boomlover Ditto.

[boomlover]

@Ermine thank you:)

[ClocktowerEchos]

I guess I ought to get started on my post then, sorry to keep you waiting @Damiann47. Might take a while since I'm teetering on the edge of "kaput" from camp -3-

Also, @CallMeChaotix, honestly listen to us. Even if it sounds like we're saying "you suck", at least we're trying to somewhat hide it and focus more on trying to help you improve. Would you rather have someone else down the line say that to your face and insult without and helping intent? All of us were like you at one point but we got better since we listened to people's advice, no matter how much our egos didn't like it(trust me, I had a huge ego when I started RPing, not on this site ofc).

Thus, we're trying to help you come to our level, it might not be the smoothest or easiest of rides but it will pay off in the end. Trust me, all of us have been there at some point where we were all new and labelled insulting titles; some of us had to learn the hard way by having to listen to people who were legitimately trying to tear us down for our inexperience. That's why we're trying to help you learn from your mistakes so you don't have to learn the harsh, agonizing way of having your ass dragged through a cacti farm.

So please mate, just give it a shot, its not like anything bad will happen to you. All you've got to loose is what everyone is currently criticizing you about.

[Damiann47]

@ClocktowerEchosNa it's all good, take your time as I can be extremely patient so there's no need to worry about me.

[ClocktowerEchos]

@ClocktowerEchosNa it's all good, take your time as I can be extremely patient so there's no need to worry about me.

@Damiann47

Well, you have no more need to be as of now :P

Again, sorry for short shitposts everyone >_<"

[Damiann47]

@ClocktowerEchos

He gave up. That's about what happened.

[Blizz]

Nightmare,you apparently are attempting to make this more like alfhiem online,SAO DOSENT HAVE MAGIC

[boomlover]

@Blizz its remasterd mate

[ClocktowerEchos]

Nightmare,you apparently are attempting to make this more like alfhiem online,SAO DOSENT HAVE MAGIC

@Blizz

The title itself says "inspired by SAO and LH", not "SAO RP", plus LH has magic in it. The name of the show itself is also SAO so it refers to the anime as a whole rather than the game itself.

I'd recommend you read into things a bit more before you jump to conclusions and rant about it.

[boomlover]

i posted please feel free to say whats wrong about it so i can can fix it. ( goes to his bunker to hide)

[ClocktowerEchos]

@boomloverWell, its contents are decent enough, but your english and grammar is... lacking. Try combining sentences to form longer ones and add some more descriptive words and see if that makes it better ^^

[karamonnom]

Maribel

Name: Maribel Sutton
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Personality: Maribel is a happy-go-lucky girl who often has a smile on her face. She loves making friends and is quite popular at school because of her nice personality, looks, and good fashion sense.
Biography: Both of her parents are currently working out of the country so she is living with her grandmother whom she adores.
Other: She got into playing video games to impress a boy she had liked, but in the end, she realized he was a jerk and that she really, really enjoyed playing video games. So she ditched the guy and just kept on playing.
In-Game Character:

Mari_Hime

Name: Mari_Hime
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Personality: In the game, she is still bubbly and still likes fashion which was why she has taken up tailoring. She prefers to play more as a support than fight upfront. She is also kind and willing to do favors for people who ask nicely.
Current Loadout: Basic white armor with one-handed dagger
Skills:
Melee: one-handed, Pierce
Range: Throwable: Pierce
Magic: Elemental: Lightning
Armor Type: Magic Armor
Auras: none
Crafting: Tailoring
Gathering: none

[Crimson Raven]

Huh, we seem to have a lot of elemental-type magic casters and only one healer, yours truly. Who will double as a tank.

[Ermine]

@karamonnomI'd approve the f*** out of that adorableness. Also, very similar to mine. Also, would you approve being in the same social circle as mine? Since mine's just kind of known for being known by popular people.
@Crimson RavenDon't forget about the necromancer/seamstress. ^~^ Also, I'd originally also planned to be healer, but we already had one, and didn't have a necromancer, so...

[boomlover]

@Crimson Raven TANKS FOR DAYS