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Dirty Dan boo

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>tfw the men dont want anything to do with the stank-smelling females
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Mr_pink Heaven Knows I'm Miserable Now

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>tfw the men dont want anything to do with the stank-smelling females


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>tfw the men dont want anything to do with the stank-smelling females


It's k, we don't need you anyway.
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Dirty Dan boo

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B)
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might wanna give that to driving park.

i heard he's collecting salt shakers
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@Dirty Dan Nah, I don't need any more.
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I'm confused, did Ninetails just call themselves salty? Who is salty? I'm so confused....
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Defacto Okay, so who's going to carry the corpse?

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To make this post less flood: I liked the characters of Dan and Pink. But Dan's charactert looks more villain. D;
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Dirty Dan boo

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Hi
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Hi


10/10
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Defacto Okay, so who's going to carry the corpse?

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<Snipped quote by Dirty Dan>

10/10


10/10 would snip Dan quote.
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Hidden 9 yrs ago 9 yrs ago Post by LHG100
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>Garrote wire

WHO IN THE HELL DO YOU THINK YOU ARE, AGENT 47?!

[raughs]

Edit: Also, I'd go into more depth in his history and use a spellchecker.
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Hello mifune. You may need to add more quality to your CS, attempt to make it more detailed, use a spell-checker, ETC. Also, explain his garrote wire in more detail? How does it form into weaponry? Why would a garrote wire even cut? How does a random gangster re-wire a soldier- actually, why was a fifteen year old, or a guy younger than that, even a soldier?

Sorry if I'm rambling. Just look over it some more?
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I admit I do really like the idea. He just seems a little 'amateur', y'know? not too much thought put into him. Just think over the details some more and I'm sure he'll be extra dank. I believe in you!
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Humbly submitted for your approval, and because Pink wanted to see this character. :P

I will finish the full backstory soon, as well as add stuff on the characters and places I mentioned to the Titanpad.



And yes that is WH40K fanart. Sue me.
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Question 1) Anti-Heroes fine?

2) What about making a group by myself? (I've had the idea for a while of making a International Rescue style group but with superheroes)
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Hello mifune. You may need to add more quality to your CS, attempt to make it more detailed, use a spell-checker, ETC. Also, explain his garrote wire in more detail? How does it form into weaponry? Why would a garrote wire even cut? How does a random gangster re-wire a soldier- actually, why was a fifteen year old, or a guy younger than that, even a soldier?

Sorry if I'm rambling. Just look over it some more?


ok i will give it more thought. I was using spell checker. also on the wire wasnt sure what to call it, like that it could cut, didn't feel right to just call it wire and the garrote wire was the only kind i could remember.
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