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@Mr Allen J Will update my CS with the necessary edits either by tomorrow or Saturday. Maybe I should post the revised CS here instead of our PM?


I think you should post it on the OOC. I prefer it that way.
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@Mr Allen J Made a post. Sorry for short length. I know it doesn't meet standards seen in this RP but I haven't the slightest idea how to write my posts any longer for now.
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@DJAtomika Nah, don't worry about length, just put as much as you feel necessary into it.
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Sup nerds.


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@DJAtomika Me and Spoopy are gonna work on a short collab to respond to Cole.
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Roger.
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Making a post now.

@DJAtomika Me and Spoopy changed our plans, I'm going in a different direction.
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Da-da-da-da-da it's the muthaphuckin Changeling Unit.





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Writing a post soon. Busy this morning, but once in not busy I'll be writing.
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Eh, what the hell.



I'll have one for "The Boss" later.
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Finally, time to introduce Reed.
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Apologies for the delay! RL has taken a toll on my personal time. Anyway, here's the revised CS:



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@tsukune I have a few problems with Shizuka, which I'll detail below:

He has a generally pale complexion, but develops a slight tan from playing ball games outside with his peers.


I can't really envision this... Like, pale and tan (even if it's slight) are opposites. Two different ends of the spectrum. And you're saying that he's both. lol

Could be better described.

Under this mundane facade he isn't as innocent as he seemed - a closet sadist who is rarely sympathetic and secretly enjoys watching people writhing in agony, but he does not purposely inflict damage on others unless it's out of self-defense (or for his precious brother).


Yeah, I still have problems with a 17-year old sadist. It's just... eh.

if one is able to get past the protective wall he has drawn around himself and gain his trust, he might return the favor with an unwavering loyalty...


This is a little pet peeve of mine. Since... it pretty much applies to everyone.

Limits/Weaknesses/Drawbacks:
Phasing Limitations
Shizuka is unable to breathe while he's passing through the object (i.e. walking through walls), he can only phase continuously for as long as he can hold his breath.
The denser the material is, the harder and slower for him to pass through. Forcing himself to phase through objects of higher density can cause him undesirable pain.
Solidifying while in an object or switching off his ability before he has passed through the object can inflict serious injury - worse, death.


I think the power could use some actual weaknesses. These are more of limits (In fact, I don't know why you merged the limits with the weaknesses/drawbacks because they're two different things). I can come up with something, but it's a lil' late.

Solidifying while in an object or switching off his ability before he has passed through the object can inflict serious injury - worse, death.


Not trying to be a dick, but I doubt this is going to come into play.

Haruka is fine, but Shizuka needs some work.
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@Mr Allen J Noted. Now going back to work on it. (Thank goodness I have more free time today.)

Anything else you would like to add on before I get started?

Eh, well...this is your game, so I think I would rather not be the dick instead to argue with you, yea. XD
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Anything else you would like to add on before I get started?

Eh, well...this is your game, so I think I would rather not be the dick instead to argue with you, yea. XD


Nothing I can think of. And I do have to appreciate someone who goes to make edits instead of getting into unnecessary arguments with the GM.
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Nothing I can think of. And I do have to appreciate someone who goes to make edits instead of getting into unnecessary arguments with the GM.


I don't really like to argue with people unnecessarily. Not only it's a waste of time and effort, I think it's better for everyone to try to get along rather than going around spreading hate.

Edited:
  • The sadism part is removed. Also changed the appearance bit - I didn't notice the contradiction, haha.
  • Regarding accidental solidification, I've added that this includes both partially and fully. While I admit that death would probably not come into play at all (unless he's killed off by other player's characters), I do hope you've noticed about the partial example as shown in his history?


As I looked through the approved CS, I'm kind of curious how the surname of "Vuhong" is written out in Chinese characters? Being a Chinese myself, I find that a rather peculiar family name - I've never seen or heard such a name, and the best I know that it's more of Vietnamese than Han Chinese.
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'Fraid there's a possibility of me dropping out. It's not definite, but I haven't had the net for three weeks and I'm not in the mood for working up a storm to get my char in with 40 posts in the IC, none of which are mine. If anyone's willing to help, go ahead. I'm gonna leave it neutral for a bit.
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@tsukune Only thing I have to add is that something like a taser or a stun gun should be able to damage him, and revert him back to human form.

As I looked through the approved CS, I'm kind of curious how the surname of "Vuhong" is written out in Chinese characters? Being a Chinese myself, I find that a rather peculiar family name - I've never seen or heard such a name, and the best I know that it's more of Vietnamese than Han Chinese.


I'll be honest, I don't know enough about Chinese characters to answer your question. In-universe, the Vuhong surname is something Lihua came up with to help cover her tracks.

'Fraid there's a possibility of me dropping out. It's not definite, but I haven't had the net for three weeks and I'm not in the mood for working up a storm to get my char in with 40 posts in the IC, none of which are mine. If anyone's willing to help, go ahead. I'm gonna leave it neutral for a bit.


I'll gleefully help you get into the mix of things if you're still willing to participate.
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Good guy Allen is at it again
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Good guy Allen is at it again


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