[OOC] Bleach: A New Dawn

[KabenSaal]

Donkey hai

[Zane620]

Hai Lily, and yes im an ass

[Expllo]

Champion said
Improved~

....Kurisa stated that you have to be an unseated (I.e just getting out of the academy) unless told otherwise. So I don't think you can be in Squad 2 already unless you talk to him about it.

Aaaaand your Zanpakuto....It gathers pressure from air? ^_. Now unless it was strong winds smacking against your blade or something, it would take quite a bit of time if it was just simply air being absorbed considering there would hardly be any pressure at all against the blade. Unless your blade can absorb air at a quick rate to build pressure that could be released later on, then that should be mentioned and not labeled under building pressure but more so air absorption. But that's just for the passive ability...

1. Gather: Rikudo gathers pressure around itself, covering the blade and increasing the range 4 feet.

What covers the blade exactly? Pressure, I'm assuming? And what increases to four feet? The pressure in an area as a whole? Or the blade? Need more info on this one.

2. Refine: Rikudo increases its pressure, strengthen what it has gathered.

I have no idea what this means at all honestly, so I'll just ask for more info on it.

3. Shape: Rikudo changes the shape of what has already been gathered, making it sharper or wider or longer.

I'm assuming you mean the blade gets sharper, wider, or longer off of what pressure you gathered it from? I'm confused...

4. Condense: Rikudo maximizes the pressure completely condensing whatever it has gathered, strengthening the compound 10 fold.

So say you gathered air....It's condensed, meaning getting made heavier or becoming more thick, then it's strengthened? I don't get what this ability does exactly, or how it effects anything at all. Unless you're meaning that you add pressure to an item and it just becomes heavier? Like Kira's Shikai? ^_.

5. Release: Rikudo releases the pressure, either in a wave or in a straight shot. This is at the users own discression.

And it does what exactly when it hits an item or person? ^_.

[Expllo]

Zane620 said
Explllllllo hai

Hello Zanathan.

Twitch plays Pokemon is the best shit ever xD

[Zane620]

Also you need cool downs XD

[Zane620]

Expllo said
Hello Zanathan.Twitch plays Pokemon is the best shit ever xD

who is twitch? Or twitch tv?

[Expllo]

Bitch I was going to get to that <.<

And yeah, Twitch TV.

[Zane620]

sure you were

[Expllo]

After I knew what the fuck the abilities even did or were xD

[AbigailTenshi]

FINALLY FINISHED!!
Expllo, can you check them for me? .-. Sorry for the shittyness... I definitely put more effort and thought into them this time xD Tell me if something doesn't make sense please? I'm just so stupid when it comes to speaking my own language sometimes xD You know as you've witnessed it XD

[Expllo]

Wtf? Why do I have to deduce shit that's already been approved? xD Alright, I'll check it yo.

[AbigailTenshi]

Oh and Imma save that chain thing for my Bankai ^_~ It's gunna be a part of it, but they'll be much more to it ^_^

[AbigailTenshi]

Expllo said
Wtf? Why do I have to deduce shit that's already been approved? xD Alright, I'll check it yo.

Because I'm a dumdum :P And make silly mistakes xD

[Zane620]

Yu's bankai has stretchy rope :3

[Zane620]

AbigailTenshi said
Because I'm a dumdum :P And make silly mistakes xD

I agree with this statement

[Expllo]

Cool.....I didn't read it all, because I stopped when I saw that shitty ass picture of Rio. Looks ratchet as fuck yo, use a more clear version:

[AbigailTenshi]

Zane620 said
I agree with this statement

Fuck you!

[AbigailTenshi]

Expllo said
Cool.....I didn't read it all, because I stopped when I saw that shitty ass picture of Rio. Looks ratchet as fuck yo, use a more clear version:

Thanks xD I thought it was just the laptop making it shitty o.O I noticed it looked weird

[Zane620]

XD HAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAA

[Zane620]

AbigailTenshi said
Fuck you!

hey you admitted to it ya fuck.