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The first couple of books are canon (and reasonably good too)... Then they changed author and they become terribad. Reasonably sure that they (the later ones) got officially un-canonised once it was realized how blatantly wrong they were...

Of course, the lore around Batarian women that does exist is simply there to justify Bioware taking shortcuts in species design by only making males for most of the species...
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The first couple of books are canon (and reasonably good too)... Then they changed author and they become terribad. Reasonably sure that they (the later ones) got officially un-canonised once it was realized how blatantly wrong they were...

Of course, the lore around Batarian women that does exist is simply there to justify Bioware taking shortcuts in species design by only making males for most of the species...


They seem rather good at shortcuts, aren't they?
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On another note... Another ex-Blue Sun!

Interactions with Kasy should be.... interesting to say the least.
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On another note... Another ex-Blue Sun!

Interactions with Kasy should be.... interesting to say the least.


AKA, RUN!!!! :p
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I gotta say, so far the submissions have all been really darn good! I'm getting started on preliminary reviews, so let me know if you change or edited your sheets between now and Saturday. I will try to have that all done, as well as the intro post ready for then.

I do want to thank everyone for the effort and patience you've shown! I have nothing but the warm fuzzies about this game and the story we're all about to create. This just may end up becoming the ME tale I always wanted to be a part of. :)
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The first couple of books are canon (and reasonably good too)... Then they changed author and they become terribad. Reasonably sure that they (the later ones) got officially un-canonised once it was realized how blatantly wrong they were...

Of course, the lore around Batarian women that does exist is simply there to justify Bioware taking shortcuts in species design by only making males for most of the species...


As far as I know, anything by Drew Karpyshan (I think that's what his name is) is canon because he was the lead writer for the video games. The one I think you need to avoid is the one by William Dietz, who also wrote the awful Halo: The Flood adaptation.

The comic books are all solid. I highly recommend them, especially if you like fleshing out the stories and motivations of a number of characters.
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Female Turians ftw :D. Their facial structure looks so cool
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Hello, everyone!
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Heyo Aeron~ thinkin' about submitting a CS?


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Heyo Aeron~ thinkin' about submitting a CS?



Haha, yes I am.
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@Dervish I made a few changes to mine, to hopefully flesh out her history a bit more. Also decided that the Archon visor probably hadn't been designed yet in the time period you specified, so instead she has a precursor that she took as "payment" for a job.

Regardless of whether or not she's accepted, I would appreciate some feedback on Ceisstia.
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I was going to say Aeron that you better skeedaddle if you wanted to gst a sheet up by Saturday, and it looks like you're well on your way!

Thunder, I actually got an early bit of criticism written down for your first sheet, but I'll definitely go and check it over again. Big things I noticed were the entirely too many professions in that ship position section, a huge gap in time that doesn't explain how she goes from idolizing her father to thinking him a total hypocrite, and the casual murder of fellow mercenaries with Eclipse. I'll go into more details in the review, but I think it's fair to give you some heads up that as stands, your character kind of comes across as a violent psycho that doesn't suffer any consequences for murdering her comrades.
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@Dervish Yeah, I don't think I've ever worked so hard on getting in a character! I think I am done with Alex (except for don't color). I'd really appreciate some feedback of you could find the time. :)
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@Dervish Yeah, I don't think I've ever worked so hard on getting in a character! I think I am done with Alex (except for don't color). I'd really appreciate some feedback of you could find the time. :)


I won't be doing formal reviews until Saturday, so take the time you need to edit and do changes, but holy shit that was a record in making a quality sheet! I will say forst read through was very good and our characters have a lot of interesting parallels; they even fought in the same battle at Mindoir. I imagine that would be a common ground for the two of them. :)

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@Dervish If "violent psycho" was how she initially came across, then clearly changes were needed. I was more going for someone who does the job she was given and doesn't really care about anything else, unless you try to stab her in the back. Then she'll make sure you don't try it twice. She operates according to her own code, which basically comes down to "if you agree to something, then you follow through, period". That doesn't always agree with her chosen profession.

Looking back, I think I may have misinterpreted something in the character sheet. What I was going for there was that, outside of the security role she was hired for, there are a few other things she could do in an emergency, but if there was someone else present that could do those things better, she would leave it to them. I just have this idea, as a species with such naturally long lives, asari have the opportunity to pick up a wide variety of skills, which would be rather useful for a mercenary. I'll probably be making changes over the next day or two.
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I won't be doing formal reviews until Saturday, so take the time you need to edit and do changes, but holy shit that was a record in making a quality sheet! I will say forst read through was very good and our characters have a lot of interesting parallels; they even fought in the same battle at Mindoir. I imagine that would be a common ground for the two of them. :)


Thank you! Yeah, I noticed that after I saw the Character tab. But yeah, I think that would be a good point of reference. Especially since your character got a commendation for it, so there may or may not be a bit of initial hero worship/fan girl moment. XD
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@Dervish If "violent psycho" was how she initially came across, then clearly changes were needed. I was more going for someone who does the job she was given and doesn't care about anything else, unless you try to stab her in the back. Then she'll make sure you don't try it twice.

Looking back, I think I may have misinterpreted something in the character sheet. What I was going for there was that, outside of the security role she was hired for, there are a few other things she could do in an emergency, but if there was someone else present that could do those things better, she would leave it to them. I just have this idea, as a species with such naturally long lives, asari have the opportunity to pick up a wide variety of skills, which would be rather useful for a mercenary. I'll probably be making changes over the next day or two.


Glad to hear it might have been a bit of a miscommunicated idea. :) My main concern is she seems to get away with killing people who cross her, even in her own organization, and something like Eclipse that would never fly because they're ruthless, but professional. They wouldn't trust or tolerate someone betraying their own, especially in situations where there's no witnesses. It's also better to have her leave them on good terms, because nobody would be too dangerous to go after if they had reason to want them dealt with.

I look forward to the revisions!

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Thank you! Yeah, I noticed that after I saw the Character tab. But yeah, I think that would be a good point of reference. Especially since your character got a commendation for it, so there may or may not be a bit of initial hero worship/fan girl moment. XD


How to make Tanya embarassed and uncomfortable in 5 seconds: give her fanfare for the most traumatic event of her life. :D
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Glad to hear it might have been a bit of a miscommunicated idea. :) My main concern is she seems to get away with killing people who cross her, even in her own organization, and something like Eclipse that would never fly because they're ruthless, but professional. They wouldn't trust or tolerate someone betraying their own, especially in situations where there's no witnesses. It's also better to have her leave them on good terms, because nobody would be too dangerous to go after if they had reason to want them dealt with.

I look forward to the revisions!

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How to make Tanya embarassed and uncomfortable in 5 seconds: give her fanfare for the most traumatic event of her life. :D


:D fanfare for surviving, of course.
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Glad to hear it might have been a bit of a miscommunicated idea. :) My main concern is she seems to get away with killing people who cross her, even in her own organization, and something like Eclipse that would never fly because they're ruthless, but professional. They wouldn't trust or tolerate someone betraying their own, especially in situations where there's no witnesses. It's also better to have her leave them on good terms, because nobody would be too dangerous to go after if they had reason to want them dealt with.

I look forward to the revisions!


Yeah, I envisioned her more as the person who was sent to deal with problems like that, which was ultimately the reason for her leaving: she was tired of being the Eclipse's clean-up person. If there were any issues with her leaving, it would have been more along the lines of that, with gangs like that there isn't really any such thing as "retirement".

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