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Wow, a lot of info. But I am interested based on what I've read so far. I'll keep on reading and hopefully be available for the actual RP. (I love GATE, Elder Scrolls and Warhammer, so this is pretty damn cool.)
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@Dead CruiserI didn't know Sanguinius that well since I honestly never gave that much of a shit about Space Marines or the Primarchs or the Horus Heresy. I looked into more of the Astra Miliwhatnow and the Orcs.

One idea could be a kindhearted knight whose secretly a vampire or something like that. Again as I've said, playing an Incarnate would require an exceptionally well written CS and a good deal of time commitment of which I remember you saying you were tight on.


Well, those parts of the lore are pretty much the closest thing to a coherent "plot" 40k has. A good lesson to know is that not all Space Marines/Primarchs are Ultramarines/Guilliman, and even those are not as bad in recent years as they were in 5th edition.

Would I be able to write up this character as say, the captain of a royal guard, or something similarly prestigious? Gotta justify that golden armor somehow. As well, would I be able to get away with some manner of angelic heritage? Just for the wings, honestly. I know a kickass angel-vampire knight sounds like a particularly special snowflake, and I'll admit that it is (though I prefer the term "high-concept"), but I feel like characters as outlandish as the one I'm suggesting would do well to highlight the fantasy/sci-fi dichotomy. What I mean is, this character would be so out there compared to what could be seen as "believable" from the sci-fi faction that he would highlight the mystic and otherworldly aspect of the fantasy faction.
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I could see your guy being in a knighthood order actually, when you mentioned golden armor I immediately thought of the Knights of Dawnburss. It would provide a healthy bit of irony and the armor itself could easily shroud any of his more vampiric features. As for the prestigious spot, he could be either a distinguished warrior within the order or a captain of sorts.



As for the angel part, I'm going to have to cut you off right there; in most fantasy angels and vampires do not mix unless you are reading some really shitty Twilight fanfic. However, if you want something close while still having a sense of special snowflake that's not nearly as overbearing as angelic-vampire, why not have it be that your man can only use Book of Blessing magic instead of the more traditional Book of Murder or Book of Chaos that would normally fit vampires.

I can see a lot of character growth that could stem from that idea with your guy having to eventually choose between accepting his vampire blood or staying true to the Order's ways after having walk a fine line of balance and lies to keep it covered up.
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Interested~
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@sakurasan Yo long time no see.
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@Evil Snowman Helloo~ First time in this kind of rp but... It just looks so fun
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I could see your guy being in a knighthood order actually, when you mentioned golden armor I immediately thought of the Knights of Dawnburss. It would provide a healthy bit of irony and the armor itself could easily shroud any of his more vampiric features. As for the prestigious spot, he could be either a distinguished warrior within the order or a captain of sorts.



As for the angel part, I'm going to have to cut you off right there; in most fantasy angels and vampires do not mix unless you are reading some really shitty Twilight fanfic. However, if you want something close while still having a sense of special snowflake that's not nearly as overbearing as angelic-vampire, why not have it be that your man can only use Book of Blessing magic instead of the more traditional Book of Murder or Book of Chaos that would normally fit vampires.

I can see a lot of character growth that could stem from that idea with your guy having to eventually choose between accepting his vampire blood or staying true to the Order's ways after having walk a fine line of balance and lies to keep it covered up.


Okay, I think I'm forming a more coherent idea here.

Perhaps he's quite an old vampire who's already come to terms with his place in the world. I can see him having served his kingdom for a number of centuries, and holding a position of high leadership in its military ("Lord-Commander" has such a nice ring to it). An extremely experienced warrior and leader, and the veteran of hundreds of campaigns. Book of Blessing magic is a good idea, and I was already going with the idea that his armor conceals his true nature (I'm thinking a golden mask, sort of Kingdom of Heaven-esque). Among the high nobles and military officials of his kingdom his nature would be known, but a well-kept secret from the majority of the populace. His dark nature is kept well at hand, but it's still a constant battle that tests his willpower even to this day.

What do you think of this?
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@sakurasan Really? Well the RP dose look good. So I wont can't argue there. I hope you enjoy this kinda of RP.
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@Evil Snowman Yup, yup! Wish me luck if I join, haha.
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Okay, I think I'm forming a more coherent idea here.

Perhaps he's quite an old vampire who's already come to terms with his place in the world. I can see him having served his kingdom for a number of centuries, and holding a position of high leadership in its military ("Lord-Commander" has such a nice ring to it). An extremely experienced warrior and leader, and the veteran of hundreds of campaigns. Book of Blessing magic is a good idea, and I was already going with the idea that his armor conceals his true nature (I'm thinking a golden mask, sort of Kingdom of Heaven-esque). Among the high nobles and military officials of his kingdom his nature would be known, but a well-kept secret from the majority of the populace. His dark nature is kept well at hand, but it's still a constant battle that tests his willpower even to this day.

What do you think of this?


I like it. Although you might want to change the or come up with an explanation that the higher ups would give to people when asked how one seemingly mortal man could stay so young for seemingly ever.

One idea I had is that it could pretend to be a zealous devotee of some "good" god like the god of life or sun or something like that when in reality its a "dark" god that's keeping him alive through almost-force worship. Part of his development could be choosing wether or not to stay with the dark god or put his faith in the good gods. It would also be interesting since you'd have all the younger, novice squires and knights looking up to this guy who they hear is such a zealot and never misses a worship or prayer mass or something like that while still being an excellent warrior.

Anyways, Imma about to pass out so bed time for me
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@ClocktowerEchosgot a idea but I do not know how to do it can you help? its a female songtress who controls water but Idk if it would fit what is there for the fantasy part.
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@sakurasan Well I hope you do. If do opt to and you need a hand I'm happy to help in anyway I can. As you know just poke me with stick or something and you get my attention.
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@Evil Snowman Got it. I'll poke ya when I need help. Thanks snowy xD Now... Good night~
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@ClocktowerEchosgot a idea but I do not know how to do it can you help? its a female songtress who controls water but Idk if it would fit what is there for the fantasy part.


Could you restate that? I'm not sure if I get what you mean.
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Aziz Iostan



“Climb High, Climb Far, Your Goal the Sky, Your Aim the Star.”
-Ancient High Terra University Inscription


Name
Aziz Mano Iostan


Nicknames
Azi


Age
22


Gender
Male


Race
Human, ancestry from the Arabic/Middle Eastern provinces of High Terra.


Homeworld
Ennedi


Rank
Corporal


Role
Ennedi Specialized "Flame Trooper" or more commonly known as a Pyro, Aziz carries a flamethrower designed on Ennedi along with a side arm and melee weapon.


Appearance
Aziz stands at 5 foot 10 with a slim, but muscular physique. His armor is largely unchanged, save for the gas mask/helmet combination that is issued to Flame Troopers on Ennedi, replacing the Ennedi Infantry Cover that most soldiers wear. (Like this but more desert and green camo, and only the gas mask and helmet, not the rest of the outfit.


Equipment
  • Standard Ennedi Soldier Armor
  • Ennedi Flame Trooper Helmet and Gas Mask
  • Ennedi Flame Trooper M9 Flamethrower (Note: The mask hooks up to an oxygen tank on his back, though smaller than what is used in the present, just as effective.)
  • M3P-4 10mm Pistol
  • Ennedi Combat Knife (Slightly curved than the standard military combat knife, more effective for slicing.)


Personality
Aziz is a modest, respectful, pious soldier. Raised in a house who both believed in faith and science, he is very open to any point of view, religious or otherwise. That being said, he is a devout follower of Terranism and is not likely to change anytime soon. Ever since he was a boy, Aziz wanted to be a defender of Grand Human Union. Learning due to his father's connections, he could be a soldier in the GHU on Ennedi that guards labs and actively participates in research, Aziz didn't hesitate to sign up. He has a fascination with weapon design, from simple melee weapons to the advanced solar weaponry that Ennedi science produces. He guards Ennedi design with a passion, including his own flamethrower, referring to the Flammenwerfer as a "Clunky hunk of metal that just happens to spit out fire."

Aziz is compassionate to soldiers of all planets and often treats visitors with hospitality, soldier or no. But he is wary of the "Other World". Being deployed as one of the first lines of defense when the gate opened, he saw many of his childhood friends die at the hands of the invaders. It sparked hatred in him that he had never known as he set the enemy ablaze without remorse. He sees the gate as a test of faith, a test to all humanity. And what humanity does about this test will reflect it's true nature in the eyes of the Primarch.


Traits
  • Basic Ennedi Combat Training
  • Loyal Ally- Aziz is loyal to his allies in the end, no matter the cost.
  • Improving Weapons Designer- Aziz's interest in weapons is more of a hobby at this point, but he is getting more and more skilled at it.
  • Flame Trooper Training- An intense course to test soldier's knowledge of solar and flame technology and strategy, test their physical endurance and resistance to smoke and flame as well as other specialized tests for the role.
  • Increasingly Active Smoker- After the multiple battles of the gate, Aziz has began to smoke a pack a week.


History
Aziz was born to a scientist couple in the capital city of Ennedi. He was raised in an environment that encouraged free-thought, but also faith. He grew up hearing stories from his father of the glory of the GHU and its soldiers. His father, a former soldier himself, filled Aziz's imagination with stories of glory and honor, fighting to defend his home. Aziz did fairly well in grade school, excelling in science.And while his parent's relationship was rocky at times, he had a mostly happy childhood. As said before, ever since he was a boy, Aziz wanted to be a defender of Grand Human Union. Learning due to his father's connections, he could be a soldier in the GHU on Ennedi that guards labs and actively participates in research, Aziz didn't hesitate to sign up.

Basic training was a blast for Aziz. He served for 5 months before enrolling in the flame trooper training course. He passed with flying colors. And while there were skirmishes with desert bandits and the occasional dangerous for civilians wildlife, Aziz never really saw true action. Action that would give him a challenge. Until the gate opened up. Aziz was deployed to the front lines immediately, awaiting whatever was coming through that gate. And what did, he had never seen before. It was chaos, and no one was prepared. They had ungodly beasts and ancient weaponry, they came in droves and sliced down one soldier only to be ripped apart by machine gun fire. They were outmatched. But what they lacked in technology, they made up in numbers. They kept coming until they eventually killed someone. Riding in on strange beasts, trampling soldiers to death. All Aziz could do was let his fire rage. After 6 hours of fighting, they finally retreated back into the gate. But not before there were over 200 GHU casualties, some of which were Aziz's close friends. Aziz returned to base with a heavy heart and not soon after learned of the formation of a new unit who was going into the strange land. And Aziz wanted payback.
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@ClocktowerEchosI have a idea for a char that is essentially a songtress (person who sings for a living) yet is adept at the book of aqua I believe it is for water magic. Though I am unsure on how to actually do anything beyond that. If you still need more clarification I can pm you what I was thinking.
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Soooo I have a character written out well a Mk1 version. Anyway I'm going to submit it now and see what you think. Now sleepy time. If anyone tell me I got carried away I will murder er... hug them. I may have enjoyed making this character just a little.


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Technically finished, but might continue to tweak him if the urge strikes me.

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