@KoL
Much better. There are just a couple of things.
The heating/cooling Bounded Fields are basically a greenhouse and refrigerators, respectively, so it's good to know that they won't be 100% effective but there's nothing wrong with the theory. Given how big of a separation they develop though, it'll require a very decent amount of time to establish them, on the order of abour 8-10 continuous hours, and scaling up moreso depending on size. Also keep in mind with the cooling field that the area immediately outside the field will be hot.
The field that increases Depletion is weird since stuff doesn't really work that way.
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A field that increases the potency of a spell doesn't really work. It could work if it changed the quality of the land so that you're getting more backup from your foundation, but that's Noble Phantasm-tier stuff. You can make it a Mystic Code that temporarily gives her High Speed Aria so she can say her spells faster, I guess.
Lower the number of familiars to 3. You can make more during the RP.
Keep in mind Kayneth is a busy man.
I'll add on the cooling field that it disperses the heat underground, then. Furthermore even thinking of doing a field as big as a house would be out of question unless Seyrun wanted to use it as obvious traps, so I'm ok with the time to set them up.
I was thinking of something like a way to grant her High Speed Aria, or stuff like that, but I thought this would have been the weird/broken one. Either way I'll fix it ASAP.
Ok, cutting down the bunch of birds.
Actually, I meant more in the way of him contacting her (in case you ever think it's needed) than the contrary. For the simple reason that, if she goes ask for help, he'll probably just spill some crap on her face and leave her for dead and, if just wants to waste time with small talk, he'll spill crap on her face as well. In other words, unless some situation that might interest him arises, it'll do absolutely nothing.