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@ Lexicon = I had actually been counting on the fact that Riven wasn't, these are just Taula's opinions on people after all. It's coddled in the sense that Taula was raised amid a tide of constant war. ((Picture her upbringing as a montage from 300)) By the time Taula was nine she'd already added the first names to her kynneskr, names from the other children she'd been raised with. So from her point of view it's a thought along the lines of "Riven doesn't kill with the same ease and indifference it takes to walk across a room? Spoiled girl." It's a culture shock thing.
@Nemaisare = Just another thing yafnag spat out at me.

@Lexicon = I recently added a blurb about Taula and Riven's relationship just after the part about Nykerius. I'd love to get some feedback on it.

@Flagg = I'll be scribbling up a blurb on the captain as well.

Also remember that these are all worded to be Taula's opinion on the other characters. Her dislike of Nykerius could be unreciprocated for example. Feel free to scribble up your own blurbs about Taula or each other if you're so inclined.
@Lexicon = Neat. I tent to mix and match with existing language and fictitious flair. For instance, my character's last name, Ungeirtytär makes use of a Finnish Patronymic convention. As such it reads like Taula, Ungeir's daughter.
On an unrelated note, if you're looking to pick out some neat names for past kings I'd check out yafnag

Also a question for Maxwell of my own: Just how much of a melting pot is the Kingdom of Altranor? Would it be common practice to push the less desirable non-humans into slums or is the prevailing school of thought along the lines of 'separate but equal?' Does the kingdom subscribe to racial nationalism in that it is a human kingdom, but tolerant non-humans? Is the law a 'Justice for Some' archetype wherein humans can walk over non-humans without fear of legal recourse?
I'd take the real world Louis XIII of France as an example. Not only was his father simply known as Henry IV but both he and his son were also monarchs of the Kingdom of Navarre. ((it joined with France by personal union in 1589 when King Henry III of Navarre inherited the French throne as Henry IV of France, and in 1620 it was merged into the Kingdom of France.))

So Louis XIII King of France was also Louis II King of Navarre, son to Henry IV King of France, who was Henry III King of Navarre.

In short? You can probably add whatever numbers where you want and be completely cool, so long as you make sure that our King Erasmus VI didn't come after an Erasmus VII or some such. Make sense?
@Maxwell = Right-o! I'll make note of the fact we'll be pretty much falling over monsters and try to prune my writing habits off a bit.

@Flagg = I'm certainly game, anyone who wants to do so is more than welcome to shoot some info my way. In fact I already slipped in some stuff regarding the wise and powerful stormsinger into Taula's CS.
The way I read it is Ki falls into the trope of Might be Magic, Might be Mundane. Insofar that you can't accomplish anything with it that couldn't be waved away as a feat of strength or skill. Like focusing your ki to enable an especially deadly blow others would just chock up to being an exceptionally lucky or well placed punch.

Also, for what it's worth, I'm going the same route with Taula's 'I draw strength from the skin of powerful beasts' gimmick--but if your bare fisted warrior monk makes the grade I'll probably edit her to use true sympathetic magic instead of just Beowulfing people up. Last thing I want to be doing is horn in on someone else's act.
Thanks Flagg, I do what I can. Can't wait to read more on the good Captain.
More or less a place holder as I do some touching up and hope for constructive criticism. Think of her as the one that keeps people from starving to death or stumbling into some beastie's den as they avoid the main roads.

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