Aleranicus

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@EchoicChamber Largely, Daemons try and stay hidden as long as possible. However they can be seen by regular humans. The Circus acts like a lure to humans, allowing the Hunters to go about their business for one night.

SOP is for hunters to leave wayward humans who see these things alone. Usually they'll just assume that no one will believe them, or that their minds will find a way to tuck the memory away and not think about it ever again. If someone has the power to alter memories in the field, they can make the decision to do so.

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@Eviledd1984 I'm going to be nitpicky here and say not yet accepted. Punctuation is iffy in more than a few areas, a few run-on sentences, a lot of telling instead of showing. I like the core of what's there, but it needs to be prettied up a bit.

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@EchoicChamber Not gonna lie, I read the Audition and had to restrain myself from screaming. Terrible Arachnophobe. Accepted, unless pictures of spiders are posted.

At which point, BANHAMMER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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@All: Updated the Ringleader's CS. I will call it complete for now. Feel free to meet your Ringleader.
Some notes about tomorrow's IC post:

- I will likely re-post the Audition I made, but add a note that Parry will be summoning the characters to a tent for their night's hunt. I'll give everyone a chance to write a few posts with other characters, or write cutting to his tent. Wednesday afternoon, I plan for the hunt to begin.

- There will be a conversation between the Ringleader and the group about "Michael" and his unfortunate demise on your last hunt. Michael was an acrobat who was bit in half by a daemon on your last mission. I planned to leave the circumstances of everything that went wrong on that mission, to all of you. Feel free to have differing accounts of what went wrong of the many things that did go wrong. Kinda like how witnesses to a crime can both have been at the scene but have differing accounts. Some of you may blame yourselves for what happened, but I'm not going to pin responsibility on any character in particular.

- The RP will begin in a coal mining town either in West England or Appalachia. Was going to begin the plot with a generic "dungeon crawl" to see how we all write action and try and get into the swing of things.

@Eviledd1984 I will say feel free to post a CS and I will take a look at it.

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@Aleranicus I’m afraid I’m not sure what you mean, heheh.. ^_^” do you mean just actually adding an extra space in between the paragraphs, or..?

@Cherrywitch

Yeah. Like I said, just being nitpicky. You can feel free to post to the CS page!

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@FourthKing Accepted. Please migrate to the character page!

@FancyHats Perigot approved. Toby approved.

@Cherrywitch Approved, but could you put some spacing in the Audition? Just being nitpicky on this one.

@VerusEbullio Very nice! Approved.

Please @ me if I missed a CS. I'm going to finish up the Ringleader's CS so you all have a better idea of who you'll be dealing with. My goal is to have the first IC post up by tomorrow afternoon.

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Hey @All! Just got off work. Need to get some zzzzz but I like what I skimmed over. Will give formal acceptance/critiques in the morning!

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@VerusEbullio Feel free to Post here and if I give a tentative thumbs up, can move to Character Page.

@Majoras End Thanks, I'm dead tired and still have two more shifts today -_-. As long as things are kept positive and civil, I'm happy to have a devil's advocate.

@All: for those of you struggling with Compulsions, please see below for some examples:

You must never change your course of action due to fear.

You must always show mercy to your enemies and may never hold a grudge against those that act against you.

You must never tell a lie, mistruth, or obscure the truth.

You must always o er aid to those in need— friends, strangers—no matter how desperate the situation.

You must do all things in moderation and if you ever overindulge yourself, you lose your gifts.

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@FancyHats I'll ask you to complete the missing bits, and then will formally accept. I liked the audition quite a bit!

@The1Rolling1Boy I will humbly ask for another draft, if you're willing? The core of what is there is excellent- I do like it. But I find it's a bit more tell than show, if that makes sense? The audition is where I'm putting the most weight on accepting/rejecting characters, so please feel free to take your time to fluff it out a bit? Thank you so much for all the work you've done so far!

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@The1Rolling1Boy took quick look. Liking so far. Will give feedback tonight if can. Still on clock :-(