It's fine, as long as you don't edit it's main components after the IC is up, heh. What did you edit this time?
For anyone interested, I edited Garret's personality a bit more, and spread it out into different paragraphs, for easier reading. He's still the same cool-headed, reserved guy, only he seems a bit more cold and unapproachable. Not mean, exactly, just a bit colder. That way, he can develop more as a character.
For anyone interested, I edited Garret's personality a bit more, and spread it out into different paragraphs, for easier reading. He's still the same cool-headed, reserved guy, only he seems a bit more cold and unapproachable. Not mean, exactly, just a bit colder. That way, he can develop more as a character.