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@hagroden I agree. It feels out of place. And with what's happening even if he could land I don't think all the students would care. There was a panther and fog and other things
Raven looked at K.C. This is where she differed from the other Grimms. Raven was slow to point blame and assume they were guilty. "Not necessarily K.C. He's a student. He has to go to school just like you. They are still people, after all. We'll see them around, hell they'll be working and going to school here."
Raven shook her head at him. "What's up, is, that you will fail my class if you don't do well in the speech coming up. And you missed most of my lecture on it. I don't think your parents will be too happy." Raven knew she was tough, but she cared. K.C. Was family after all. "Just make sure to see me before or after school tomorrow. And bring Jack with you. Now, no more school business. What was going on at the school today?"
@RangerOfTheRit Okie Dokie. We need more Briarwhites
When the bell rang, Raven sighed. She decided she would leave early today, she wasn't expecting any students to stop by, since the two she wanted to see left before she could stop them. They didn't understand. They were so young and had a lot of responsibility, but that doesn't mean they can just blow off school. "I need a drink." Raven muttered to herself.

She walked into the bar and sat down. "Crowe, get me the usual please." Raven smiled friendly at the girl, but then she saw K.C. "K.C., didn't I ask you to stay after class?"
@RangerOfTheRit Sorry I missed interactions with raven. When I post I'll just start from the most recent since Jack and K.C. both left the school
<Snipped quote by Scio>

To add a bit more to it, while it is not technically meta-gaming (or at least a major game-breaking one) because what was written does not affect the other characters in any way. But luke Scio said, an author's narration should usually be based on the character's point of view, not information given out of character. And this is where exactly we might be having an issue here. When writing a post, you should exclude anything being said OoC (except plans and cooperative ideas) and focus more on the aspect viewed by the character being played.


I have that problem as well, and I need to work on it.
"With that said, Let's see what you guys have to offer. The headmaster says that all of you have the potential to be great, but I've yet to be convinced. Show me that you belong here; there are no rules, I don't care how you do it. Remember, those who don't make the cut, are out of here."

Once Varus spoke these words it felt like all hell broke loose. All the people around her went and started freaking out or used their magic. Annabelle watched the hysteria, in shock. She didn't have much time to react to the various displays of magic before everyone was enshrouded in black fog.

Panic started to seep into Annabelle's brain. She couldn't think, she didn't know what to do. She needed this school, but it was absolutely crazy... But then the calm hit. The panic dissipated and Annabelle was able to think clearly. Fog. Fog.... Water! She could do something about the fog! "Wait I'm not powerful enough..." She whispered quietly. Think Annabelle, think. Annabelle had heard Mikhail's voice shouting. "If I get to him, there will be others around."

Annabelle walked carefully through the dark fog towards where she hoped her friends would be. Once Annabelle thought she was close, she opened her vial and tossed the water in front of her. She lifted her hands and focused on the water, holding it in the air. She began moving her hand in circles, causing the water to make a little tornado which gave her small visibility in the fog. "If anyone can help, I can clear some of the fog if I was stronger!" She shouted so that someone would hear her.
Sorry busy day yesterday. I'll post today.
@Holy Soldier Yay I get the chance to vote for who I meant to vote for last time. c:
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