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NEON GODS [Japanese Country Cyberpunk]

Working on the first IC post.

NEON GODS [Japanese Country Cyberpunk]

@vFear Accepted. Post it in the Character tab.

NEON GODS [Japanese Country Cyberpunk]

@The Bork Lazer Accepted as hell. Post it in the Character Tab.

You guys want a Discord? I’ll be making one soon.

NEON GODS [Japanese Country Cyberpunk]

I plan to close applications by this Saturday. The IC will begin next week at the latest.

NEON GODS [Japanese Country Cyberpunk]

I suppose that could work. Once you add that into the CS, you can post in the Character tab.

NEON GODS [Japanese Country Cyberpunk]

@CaptainSully The portable blindspot and master key wristwatch seem a little too OP. Some drawbacks and technological limitations to balance them out would be appreciated.

NEON GODS [Japanese Country Cyberpunk]

@OppositionJ Accepted. Put in in the CS tab.

UPDATE: Expanded a little of the Sycamores' history in the OP. They came to Japan in the early 2040s, eliminating Korean and Chinese presence in Kobe.

NEON GODS [Japanese Country Cyberpunk]

bonk

NEON GODS [Japanese Country Cyberpunk]

Also, the character ideas we have so far are fine, but I would also like to emphasize this story isn't about the gang war itself - it's about those affected by it. Not everyone has to be a cybernetic supersoldier to be relevant in the story. I'm also going for civilians, people who aren't necessarily armed, people with ordinary jobs, people who don't want the violence in the first place. This is my overall expectation with later CSes.

NEON GODS [Japanese Country Cyberpunk]

@CaptainSully Accepted, but please add your character's belongings. I added that in the CS late and you may have not noticed it, my apologies. I'll tell you when to add it in the Character tab.

@MegaOscarPwn My main problem with the character is that for such an ambitious guy, why would he go to such a off-the-beaten-track countryside town? There are many other major cities with far more opportunities for employment. He could be on the Sycamores' payroll, if ever, but it would be more likely he would take a job in a bigger city.

@jimapple The concept is okay, but I need more detail in the CS. What is the rate of his nanotechnology healing? How would it respond to a gunshot or stab wound, and how much medical attention would he need? How the hell could he run away before the age of six? What kinds of technology does he like to tinker with, and how does it reflect in his background?