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No just be ready when this does start, so the plan is that everyone will have been contacted by a mysterious stranger to a single location to pull together their skills as bandit hunters to work together on a mission of great importance. The Mysterious person ends up being The Red Brother, a notorious bandit from Europe... though we are in the Americas so his reputation may go unnoticed by many of you. He claims that he is done with being a bandit and is turning a new leaf, and plans on taking the fight to raiders.
I am on a tight string and I'd rather not keep the IC waiting for any longer, but if Trapezoid will edit his CS I will review it. He will have until 6 PM pacific time to do so. Now this also means that if he is accepted ALL accepted spots are at risk for swapping out as I am trying to start off without too many people in the IC at one time. If I do not accept Trapezoid, he will still be able to try again later when the world is more open.

Trapezoid- What I don't like about your bio is that it mentions NOTHING about the wars going on across the globe and only that your isolated families hear about the steel giants. Now if this was meant to be set before Prometheus stole Ethus from Utopia, then the issue would be that CVF's back then were treated like WMD's and not sold to anyone in the private sector.

Ghost Snake sounds like a mech that slips in and out of combat with great speed and even some flexibility.

And the rifle sounds like a cannon with all that firepower.

Avan- "You will begin as a team who are asked to do a single job and after that you are left to your own desires" OP

Black Plague- Sounds like you are going from a unit 1 dagger or small melee to a unit 2 standard melee or a powerful melee
My Final Decision:

Zero Hex: I understand that I have put you through a lot with this whole picture thing, but it is an important detail. You stuck with us and even made the adjustments on your CS, some adjustments more welcomed than others. -Accepted

Avanhelsing: Liked yours from the start, I will not lie. Story was good, mech was good, near everything sat well with me besides the one issue which you cleaned up. -Accepted

Sauron: I like Sigismund, but I do not see them joining the RP from the very beginning when their reputation is kill on sight. I do see her joining later after the first mission, maybe we'll be the first to see her and not die. -Not Accepted

Trapezoid: I did not give you the criticism I gave everyone else, that doesn't mean I like your CS. I think you rifle more than 3 units if it puts holes in class 5 armor, the title Ghost Snake doesn't fit with a slow mech, and I don't like your bio cause it just doesn't feel setting appropriate. -Not Accepted

EVERYONE: The world has 3 Ethus Generators- One in Mexico, One in Russia, and One in the Monolith. They generate energy and then send that Ethus Energy across the globe to Energy Depots. If you were to take an Ethus Battery and crack it open the effects would be similar to a volcano spitting out magma. Now do the same to an Ethus Depot and you've ruined that patch of land for years. But if you were to attack an Ethus Generator and damage it then you have doomed the planet to a horrific death by fire. So it is an unwritten rule that Ethus Depots and Generators are 'holy ground' and that no fighting will be had there as long as the power is running.

Any one have any questions?
There usually is a reason for homicidal rampages, Avan's guy is on one against bandits because they ruined what little of a life he had previous.

Now with what you've mentioned already I can see your on another kind of revenge quest. (This is going to get DARK)

What if you're character lost her mind when she was assaulted in some way by someone she trusted, a paladin of the wastes, someone who was supposed to be one of the good guys. That reality broken, she wanted revenge and this broken part of her offered that revenge but in return she must satisfy its hunger for death. The two started the rampage of Sigismund, trying very hard to lure out the corrupted wasteland heroes who assaulted her in the past. Years would go on and she nearly forgot the crimes done to her, all she lives for now is that broken part, always telling her she is helping herself with every kill. That was until she was called on by a stranger.

^Good fake little backstory, yes?
If you read previous I am letting people post their CS's today and of them I am choosing two to be the last who join the game. I will be bringing in more people but that won't be for a long time down the road.

Sauron - So your character just roams around killing... what, everything? Besides a dark legend what are you? Split personality disorder? A girl wanting vengence? Run away from the monolith?
Avan - I like the story, I think the weapons are a bit odd seeing as you can only use them one at a time when one is shoulder mounted and the other requires one hand. Seems like you're putting yourself at a disadvantage.
Zero - I agree that you've shown an aptitude for writing and I am just asking for a picture, no need for it to be exact. [hider] http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-_6cnVDArvZE/UNB-1c0ySNI/AAAAAAAACE8/S1z0ICfhCEw/s1600/Robot%20Knight%201.jpg [/hider] Look at that, just did the leg work for you.
Raven- We are going to stick with about 10 rockets, once used you will need to find new ones of course.
Heavy weapons = Heavy Machine Guns and Grenade Launchers

Cannons = Rocket launchers, Mortar Launchers, and Artillery Cannons
Garrison - Accepted

Big Slamm - Accepted

Lyzan - Accepted

So right now we are nearing Max capacity and I will probably be accepting 2 more. To give everyone a fair shot I will be waiting till May 1st to choose.
Black Plague - You are accepted, thank you for your fore thought.

Zero Hex - You are pending - - While I like the detail you have put into writing out your character and the theme behind it, we role players will look back on it later in the roleplay to refresh ourselves on just who you are and a wall of text isn't a quick refresher. I will at the very least need an image of your CVF before I can fully accept it.

Ravenxvoid - I hate your picture, in other news I only have accepted one person so yes there is still room.
PILOT
Name: Sean Argile
Age: 47
Height: 6'3"
Weight: 210 Lbs
Background: Currently a Mercanary
Bio: Sean has been many things since the war started: at first he was a freedom fighter, one of the titans fighting for Prometheus when they took the Ethus from Utopia... one of the raiders who took the J11's from Hjertz... now he was a mercenary taking money from men who hide behind walls. After the betrayal of his Brothers Sean left Europe to get a clean slate and start again. He has done more bad than he has done good... but he isn't done just yet and he plans to do the world good before his final day finds him.
Description:

FRAME:
Name: Hjertz Model J11 (The Red Brother)
Description:
Weight Class: Arms-8 Armor-3 Agility-4
Weapons Descriptions: The J11 Carries two arm mounted heavy machine guns fitted with bayonets.
Additional Notes: The J Model ended with the J11 before the factories finally closed and only 5 made it out to circulation. The infamous J11's were immediately stolen and since then 3 have been destroyed leaving only 2 left on the world. The J11's are notorious in europe but as of late only one has been seen often causing rumors to come up that the other had been destroyed or is travelling in a region unfamiliar with their reputation.

Past Encounter: The Red Brother may be the lesser compared to The Black Brother, used by the European warlord Jean Dupre, but is no less infamous for his acts against his other Brothers(Blue, Green and Orange). The Five had been travelling together for some time as Bandits when the trio decided they no longer wanted to be apart of this wandering band of raiders. Red and Black were then caught off guard by the three and forced to fight them at a disadvantage, but Black took his chance to run early on in the fight leaving Red alone with his three more righteous brothers.
Losing ground quickly as the three closed in on him, Red waited till they were nearly upon him to surprise Blue and pierce him with his bayonet, using his brother as mobile cover while opening fire on the others. The tables were soon turned as Red closed in on Orange and unloaded Blue on to him before turning his attention to Green and unleashing a wall of bullets upon him. Red ensured his Brothers were inactive before leaving with heavy damage and much to think about.
I am going to have to suggest that your AAA be Arms 2 if your hands are going to be used as a primary weapon. This mean that in creating your CVF the engineers specially designed your hands to give a beating when ripping apart other frames rather than other frames whose hands wouldn't be able to do the same kind of damage yours could when it comes down to fighting with their hands. At the same time others risk damaging their hands because they were not designed to damage the armor of another CVF.
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