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Bleach: A New Dawn

Expllo said
Onmitsukido is Squad 2 though, if I believe. But I'm not really sure considering Onmitsukido could be considered it's own unti inside of Squad 2 like the Patrol Until, and Detention unit....Squad 2 is confusing, I don't even know anymore e.eBut the abilities makes sense now, I think they look alright. Just add how long the abilities last posting wise (Three post, four, etc.) and then cooldowns for it, as in how many post go by until you can use it again.

How does this look?

Edits

1. Gather: Rikudo's ability activates, sucking in and pressurizing whatever is physically touching the blade, making a compact layer around the knife, thickening the blade 4 inches.
Duration: 8 Posts Max
Cooldown: 2 Posts
2. Refine: Refine: Rikudo intensifies the pressure, compacting what it has gathered, making it harder. (Air turning solid).
Duration: 3 Posts
Cooldown: 1 Post
3. Shape: Shape: Rikudo shapes the pressure to form the shape of what it has gathered, making it longer, wider, or sharper. He can only do one at a time. (Range max at 4 feet).
Duration: 3 Posts
Cooldown: 1 Post
4. Condense: Condense: Rikudo maximizes its "grip" on what it has gathered completely compressing it. This forces whatever it has gathered completely together making it even harder at the cost of shorter range. (Water becoming strong enough to cut solid steel).
Duration: 2 Posts
Cooldown: 3 Posts
5. Release: Rikudo releases the gathered material at a target. Depending on how Rikudo changed it and the material was gathered, the effects could vary. (Ranges from a simple air wave, to an earth blade.).
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 2 Posts

Bleach: A New Dawn

Expllo said
....Kurisa stated that you have to be an unseated (I.e just getting out of the academy) unless told otherwise. So I don't think you can be in Squad 2 already unless you talk to him about it.Aaaaand your Zanpakuto....It gathers pressure from air? ^_. Now unless it was strong winds smacking against your blade or something, it would take quite a bit of time if it was just simply air being absorbed considering there would hardly be any pressure at all against the blade. Unless your blade can absorb air at a quick rate to build pressure that could be released later on, then that should be mentioned and not labeled under building pressure but more so air absorption. But that's just for the passive ability...1. Gather: Rikudo gathers pressure around itself, covering the blade and increasing the range 4 feet.What covers the blade exactly? Pressure, I'm assuming? And what increases to four feet? The pressure in an area as a whole? Or the blade? Need more info on this one.2. Refine: Rikudo increases its pressure, strengthen what it has gathered.I have no idea what this means at all honestly, so I'll just ask for more info on it.3. Shape: Rikudo changes the shape of what has already been gathered, making it sharper or wider or longer.I'm assuming you mean the blade gets sharper, wider, or longer off of what pressure you gathered it from? I'm confused...4. Condense: Rikudo maximizes the pressure completely condensing whatever it has gathered, strengthening the compound 10 fold.So say you gathered air....It's condensed, meaning getting made heavier or becoming more thick, then it's strengthened? I don't get what this ability does exactly, or how it effects anything at all. Unless you're meaning that you add pressure to an item and it just becomes heavier? Like Kira's Shikai? ^_.5. Release: Rikudo releases the pressure, either in a wave or in a straight shot. This is at the users own discression.And it does exactly when it hits an item or person? ^_.

He is unseated, he is former omnitsukido. I apologize but this was a rushed CS and i admit i didnt explain enough in detail. His zanpakuto sucks/gathers whatever it is touching at the time and pressurizes it against the blade making it compact. Now air would be the easiest since its always around, thus it would be faster to gather. If the blade were stuck in the ground as he activated his ability it would be covered in dirt/rock/stone. However this would take longer and the blade would be heavier but stronger. It all depends on what the blade is touching.

1.) Gather: Rikudo's ability activates, sucking in and pressurizing whatever is physically touching the blade, making a compact layer around the knife, thickening the blade 4 inches.

2.) Refine: Rikudo intensifies the pressure, compacting what it has gathered, making it harder. (Air turning solid)

3.) Shape: Rikudo shapes the pressure to form the shape of what it has gathered, making it longer, wider, or sharper. He can only do one at a time. (Range max at 4 feet)

4.) Condense: Rikudo maximizes its "grip" on what it has gathered completely compressing it. This forces whatever it has gathered completely together making it even harder at the cost of shorter range. (Water becoming strong enough to cut solid steel)

5.) Release: Rikudo releases the gathered material at a target. Depending on how Rikudo changed it and the material was gathered, the effects could vary. (Ranges from a simple air wave, to an earth blade.)

Hope this explains better, btw you guys ever think about using another thread for stuff like this?

Naruto: Birth of a Better Generation

Prince, ill post after you because im a little lost on where to go from here

Bleach: A New Dawn

Improved~

Arake Kusanagi

Name: Arake Kusanagi

Appearance:


Age: 658

Height: 5'11''

Weight: 185lbs

Hair Colour: Dark Brown

Eye Colour: Black

Race: Shinigami

Rank: Unseated

Spiritual Energy Colour: Blue/White

Personality: Arake strongly in Lawful concepts such as honor, order, rules and tradition, and follows a strict moral code to uphold justice. However he is also not afraid to enforce strict laws to maintain social order. He follows his orders without any hesitation which earned him promotions in the past. He is a quiet but fearsome person who only acts when necessary.

History: Arake was born into the Seireitei West 23rd District. He was an only child to merchants but he had high spiritual pressure that often manifested itself as strong air currents. When he came of age his parents insisted on him going to the academy, thus he took the entrance exams and was accepted. He studied there for 100 years learning how to become a shinigami, the cultural, the skills, the art, the history. He became extremely proficient in the 2 things while there, Hakuda and Kido. He preferred not to use a sword so once he graduated he was given a knife instead of a sword.

After he graduated the academy he joined the Onmitsukidō as Executive Militia. It was during this time that he had begun to advance his hand to hand training. He also became proficient in using his zanpakuto, learning its name through rigorous training. He had stayed apart of the executive militia until an unknown enemy with extreme power invaded soul society. Many of his comrades were killed in the battle however he survived someway. He carries scars of the battles all over his body. The most notable is the scratch on his eye that he earned fighting a fearsome enemy during the war.

Other:

~Zanpakuto~

Zanpakuto name: Rikudo

Type: Pressure Control

Zanpakuto Shikai Release command: Burst and Crush, Rikudo!

Spirit Appearance:


Inner world:


Sealed appearance:


Shikai appearance:


Bankai appearance: Not yet achieved

Shikai skills: Rikudo is Zanpakuto that can control pressure but only around itself. It acts as a catalyst and begins to gather pressure around itself, sucking in whatever its touching. (Most of the time gathering in air.) This is not to be confused for elemental manipulation however. The more pressure that is built up the more energy that Rikudo drains.

1. Gather: Rikudo's ability activates, sucking in and pressurizing whatever is physically touching the blade, making a compact layer around the knife, thickening the blade 4 inches.
2. Refine: Refine: Rikudo intensifies the pressure, compacting what it has gathered, making it harder. (Air turning solid).
3. Shape: Shape: Rikudo shapes the pressure to form the shape of what it has gathered, making it longer, wider, or sharper. He can only do one at a time. (Range max at 4 feet).
4. Condense: Condense: Rikudo maximizes its "grip" on what it has gathered completely compressing it. This forces whatever it has gathered completely together making it even harder at the cost of shorter range. (Water becoming strong enough to cut solid steel).
5. Release: Rikudo releases the gathered material at a target. Depending on how Rikudo changed it and the material was gathered, the effects could vary. (Ranges from a simple air wave, to an earth blade.).
6.
7.
8.

Bankai skills: Not yet Achieved
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6. (Ultimate Skill)

Non-lethal Zanpakuto Skills:

Skills

Zanjutsu: None

Kido[b]
Bakudo
#4 Hainawa
#8 Seki
#9 Horin

Hado
#1 Sho
#4 Byakurai

[b]Hakuda:
Tesho
Dual Tesho

Hoho:
Shunpo

Points gained from missions:
Mission log:
Points spent and skills gained:

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Room for 1 more?

Arake Kusanagi

Name: Arake Kusanagi

Appearance:


Age: 658

Height: 5'11''

Weight: 185lbs

Hair Colour: Dark Brown

Eye Colour: Black

Race: Shinigami

Rank: Unseated

Spiritual Energy Colour: Blue/White

Personality: Arake strongly in Lawful concepts such as honor, order, rules and tradition, and follows a strict moral code to uphold justice. However he is also not afraid to enforce strict laws to maintain social orde. He follows his orders without any hesitation which earned him promotions in the past. He is a quiet but fearsome person who only acts when neccassary.

History: Arake was born into the Seireitei West 23rd District. He was an only child to merchants but he had high spiritual pressure that often manifested itself as strong air currents. When he came of age his parents insisted on him going to the academy, thus he took the intrance exams and was accepted. He studied there for 100 years learning how to become a shinigami, the cultarl, the skills, the art, the history. He became extremely proficient in the 2 things while there, Hakuda and Kido. He perfered not to use a sword so once he graduated he was given a knife instead of a sword.

After he graduated the academy he joined the Onmitsukidō as Executive Militia. It was during this time that he had begun to advance his hand to hand training. He also became preficient in using his zanpakuto, learning its name through rigerous training. He had stayed apart of the executive militia until an unknown enemy with extreme power invaded soul society. Many of his comrades were killed in the battle however he survived someway. He carries scars of the battles all over his body. The most notible is the scratch on his eye that he earned fighting a fearsome enemy during the war.

Other:

~Zanpakuto~

Zanpakuto name: Rikudo

Type: Pressure Control

Zanpakuto Shikai Release command: Burst and Crush, Rikudo!

Spirit Appearance:


Inner world:


Sealed appearance:


Shikai appearance:


Bankai appearance: Not yet acheived

Shikai skills: Rikudo is Zanpakuto that can control pressure but only around itself. It acts as a catalyst and begins to gather pressure around itself, sucking in whatever its touching. (Most of the time gathering in air.) This is not to be confused for elemental manipulation however. The more pressure that is built up the more energy that Rikudo drains.

1. Gather: Rikudo gathers pressure around itself, covering the blade and increasing the range 4 feet.
2. Refine: Rikudo increases its pressure, strengthing what it has gathered.
3. Shape: Rikudo changes the shape of what has already been gathered, making it sharper or wider or longer.
4. Condense: Rikudo maximizes the pressure completely condensing whatever it has gathered, strengthening the compound 10 fold.
5. Release: Rikudo releases the pressure, either in a wave or in a straight shot. This is at the users own discression.
6.
7.
8.

Bankai skills: Not yet Achieved
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6. (Ultimate Skill)

Non-lethal Zanpakuto Skills:

Skills

Zanjutsu: None

Kido[b]
Bakudo
#4 Hainawa
#8 Seki
#9 Horin

Hado
#1 Sho
#4 Byakurai

[b]Hakuda:
Tesho
Dual Tesho

Hoho:
Shunpo

Points gained from missions:
Mission log:
Points spent and skills gained:

Naruto: Birth of a Better Generation

Masaki Haruna said
So guys....@ Champion, I need a little bit of advice, how do I get to introduce myself in a plot since everyone is you know interacting, it's okay, I can wait.

PMs

Naruto: Birth of a Better Generation

Jhino listened as Kino spoke, informing him that he knew of their third teammate but didn't know her. They were from the same class thus he at least knew what she looked like. This was good enough for Jhino, in the mean time a few new faces had made their way to the training grounds. This was nothing short of the gathering of the best. Legends considered to be powerhouses of the village had came. Ninja barring the title of Jonin. This was not the first time he had came into contact with powerful people however this was the first time he seen faces to match the names some people whispered about. Goro Sroda, the same age as Jhino but already ranked Jonin. And Kirugetsu Hozuki, a war hero. Jhino had acquired a new found interest in this meeting. Jhino looked towards Kino momentarily. "I have a feeling things will be starting soon." It seemed like just when he said that a gust of wind kicked up and seemed to gather to the stage like area of the pavilion.

It was there that their commander stood, Shin Uzumaki. Every ninja in the village knew the name but his presence could not be explained. Power seemed to ooze from the mans skin. Enough to cripple a weaker man. Jhino starred in awe wondering how exactly the man did it, He came to the conclusion it was a heightened form of body flicker. Jhino noticed the the large weapon on his back. Samaheda, Sharks Skin. A weapon that Jhino had read about. It was legendary and is said to choose its wielder. That just showed how accomplished Shin was. After Shin spoke he disappeared in a flash just like he appeared. He left no room for questions or objection though Jhino had none. He had been entrusted with overlooking 2 Genin. Wasn't bad considering the first already showed great potential but this would have to be tested. The second was one of his kin, or so he had been told.

He had been living in the shadow of being an Uchiha for a few months now. He had only just discovered this fact but it seemed like everyone knew. He still didn't know how to take it and thus kept it in the back of his mind. Jhino thought about Shin's words. He wasn't one for much talking he preferred to use his hands, things were easier that way growing up. He rose and turned towards his new comrade. "Just how good are you with that bow? And what was your registration number?" Jhino waited for a response while at the same time waited for Ria to make her appearance. The chunin was patient and although he didn't show it he was excited by the opportunity he was given. He felt special being hand picked by the Hokage himself.

Naruto: Birth of a Better Generation

So what do I do about the whole team thing considering one of my teammates dropped out?

Naruto: Birth of a Better Generation [Characters]

Jhino

Name: Jhino Uzahara
Age | Gender: 24 | Male
Height | Weight: 5'6 | 162 lbs
Alliance: Himself, Konohagakure
Rank: Chunin
Clan: Uchiha
Kekkei Genkai: Sharingan (Supressed)
Traits: High Chakra Reserves, High Combat Aptitude
Appearance

Description: Jhino is short for his age but he is very strong. He was often teased for being small, however he should not be underestimated. His small size allows him to be swifter and more agile then most.

History

Jhino one of the last born right as Sai made his take over. He was only a child back then but he was present for the slaughter of his clan. His father was an Uchiha Jonin while his Mother was of Chunin skill level and also Uchiha, making him pureblood. His father and mother were killed under Sai's orders, Jhino was also supposed to die that day but he managed to survive. Men came to his house in the night butchered his parents a drove a blade into the 5 year olds chest, but this did not kill him. Afterwards they set fire to the house. Jhino, though injured, managed to make it out in time showing his will to survive. After the men had gone his uncle found him and took him away into hiding.

Jhino lived in hiding for year with his uncle and other clansmen before they were found. His uncle was a known associate of the resistance which made him a target no matter where they went so it was only a matter of time. However this time there was a battle and not just a massacre. But Sai's men proved to be to strong. In a last ditch effort, Jhino's uncle used his sharingan to place a genjutsu on his nephew. The genjutsu changed his point of view and took away his ability to love. In theory this would suppress his sharingan and allow Jhino to live without being hunted. The Genjutsu also wiped his memories clean. He would remember nothing.

When Jhino awoke he was in an orphanage had no idea how he had gotten there or where he had come from. They gave him the name Jhino Uzahara, a prophet in the "old book". Jhino grew up in this monastery like orphanage where many children lived. The war and purge left a lot of children without parents and guidance. This caused Jhino to deter and go down a different path. For the most part he studied at worked at the orphanage but in his free time he ran the streets. If there was one thing he could do it was beat kids twice his size. He was a strong fighter and showed little care towards his target. On several occasions he had nearly beaten kids to death. After realizing his own potential he decided to join the academy at the age of 16.

Because of his age and natural advantage over the other students he excelled through the academy and graduated a year later learning the basic skills necessary to advanced. He was noted for his high taijutsu combat aptitude. He eventually began to learn about the affinities that ninja were once able to use. Past jutsu that were once legendary. He began to develop his own techniques using one of the these legends, Katon (Fire). One thing that he learned even as a child is that knowledge is power, thus he strove to learn as much as he could through reading books and occasionally interrogating the elderly. He learned of ninja who incorporated these elements to increase the power and effectiveness of their taijutsu. This art was known as Nintaijutsu. He began to build off this style making his fighting unique only to himself.

Years passed as the young Genin trained to hone his skills. He took the chunin exam at the age of 20 and barely escaped with his life. His team killed. Once more he showed his will to survive by stringing to his last chunk of life left. He would avenge his teammates. After intense training he retried the test the next year. A new person he surpassed his previous attempts by a landslide and earned his chunin title. He attained vengeance by killing the person who killed his teammates. Soon after however, his sensei disappeared. He has been running solo missions ever since hoping to earn a place in Anbu.[/quote]

Personality

As a child, Jhino was kind hearted and was against fighting though he was good at it. He would always fight with his cousins which earned him some skill. Even after Sai killed his parents he bared no hatred towards him. He hated the world that he was born into.

Jhino awoke into a world with no one who knew him. He felt loneliness and a great deal of sorrow. His only outlet being violence he began to enjoy it more and more, often using it to get what he wants. He only acts in the interests of himself however he takes his job very seriously. That makes him an ideal soldier being able to carry out orders without hesitation especially if killing is involved. This whole vicar however is hidden behind his helmet and silence. He only speaks when absolutely necessary. Very few have seen what is hidden behind his helmet.

Combat Style: Jhino is a Nintaijutsu artist who favors Fire release. He uses the element to increase the power and damage of his punches.
Nature Release: Katon (Fire)
Jutsu List: Jhino Creates and uses his own jutsu aside from academy taught jutsu.

Jutsu Name: Blaze Punch
Jutsu Type: Nintaijutsu
Effective Range: Close
Nature Type: Fire
Descriptions: The user creates a layer of fire over their fists. This adds a flaming burst to every strike however it only lasts for 6 punches. (3 each fist)
Drawbacks: Short range and limited use

Jutsu Name: Heat Palm
Jutsu Type: Nintaijutsu
Effective Range: Short-Mid
Nature Type: Fire
Descriptions: The user creates a very hate layer of fire over their palms. From this the user could do 1 of 3 things. They could gather it and throw a fireball. Directly touch it against a surface causing a major burn. Or press it into the ground creating a smoke bomb like affect.
Drawbacks: Basic elemental weakness and short range

Jutsu Name: Acceleration
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu
Effective Range: Self
Nature Type: None
Descriptions: The user increases their speed to where, momentarily, they are followed by 4 after images.
Drawbacks: Afterimages have no effect on the world.

Weaponry
-Basic Ninja Tool Set (Kunai, Shuriken, Smoke bomb, wire, etc.)
-2 Short Swords
-1 summoning scroll for 2 windmill shuriken

Naruto: Birth of a Better Generation

If needed I could make a second character of any rank but id prefer to make a Jonin