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    1. Cherry_Shield 11 yrs ago

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9 yrs ago
Current Feels good to be writing again, helps me get my mind off things.
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9 yrs ago
Well I just posted what I believe to be my first character application in over five years! That's a scary thought.

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Lol sorry yall I suck at being a GM. There you go, if you've been approved post your character sheet in the tab.
Reserved for Lyn if I ever decide to make a character sheet for her. I lost it. I DO WHAT I WANT.
@AtomicNut You sure you posted in the right thread? What you gave me is more of the sub plot of a novela, not a application! Just kidding, I love it, it is extremely well written. You're in. Also...

Miroslav? European Country? SLLLLLLLLLLLAAAAAAAAAAAAVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVV? CHEEKI BREEKI
@AtomicNut I'll read your app tonight, I'm at work.

@Obscene Symphony It is now, go nuts.
IC IS UP. CALL ME DADDY. If you have been cleared to post, feel free to do so!
(While most OOC should be kept in the OOC tab, small amounts of OOC can be added to the beginning or end of your post if necessary by using the parentheses symbols '( )'. Also, I do not expect your posts to be this long, please do not feel the pressure to perform like this at all times, but do make a good entrance post!)

New York Slums: Alley Between 12th and Porter

The sound of heavy breaths echoed softly through the alleys of the slums. Large boots over tiny feet pounded the puddles of the murky corridor, frantic, unknowing. The desperate gasps belonged to a young girl, no older than flowering age, likely just entering the cusp of adulthood. Tears cascaded down from her red eyes, her lip quivering, rain and teardrops alike painting her face with each desperate slam of her boot. She was adorned with torn, filthy rags; it was clear she belonged to the one of the countless orphan groups of the slums.

*TAK TAK TAK* Trailing behind her by no more than a few bounds length was one of them. Dark, mysterious, lanky, deadly, just a few of the words used to describe the towering Seekers. The race for freedom was hopeless for the frail girl, even in hurling refuse bins into the nightmare's path while, it simply hurdled over them with ease to continue chase. Rounding into the final neck of the alley, it seemed the girl might actually make it to safety. Closer and closer she inched towards the dimly lit avenue, hoping the crowd of the street would save her, until...

A soft crack echoed through the alleys of the slums

The frail girl let out a faint yelp before falling silent. The large, craning hand of the metal apparition had crossed paths with her skull. Crimson splatter misted into the atmosphere. The victim ragdolled onto the pavement, her face colliding with the cobbled alley floor with a sickening crunch. She was defenseless. The looming figure ripped the delicate body from the pavement by one of her unkempt hair-tails. Slinging the body over its shoulder, the metal contraption returned to the depths of the alley, the light of the street vanishing once more...
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4 Hour Later. Location: Abandoned Apartment Complex 149


Where am I... Why does my head hurt so bad...


Slowly opening her blood-crusted eyes, the feeble girl glanced about the room. She was laying on a decayed mattress in a derelict apartment. Trash pooled to nearly the counter tops, vermin scurrying through the refuse. The girl went to move, only the find her injured body bound to the mattress frame with chain and wire. Her lips were silenced with several layers of packers tape. The young fawn struggled with all her might to escape captivity, but to no avail; She would remain audience to her captors for the time being. Craning her neck, the girl let out a muffled yelp as the bloody scab on her head injury ripped from her skull, remaining with the mattress where it had dried. A small tear escaped, but the had to be strong. She could not show it fear.

From the shadow the beast came lurking. Tall, thin, sophisticated. The violet plating of its armor absorbing the rays of light that poured in from the broken window pain, casting no reflection. It lumbered forward, slowly, step by step, stopping at the end of the decayed bed. The girl squirmed, frantically, the bindings digging into her flesh as she tried with every fiber of her being to escape. The creature did not respond. The towering giant emitted strange, indecipherable sounds. Out of the blue, without hesitation, as almost if it was completed it one fell swoop, the beast raised it's metallic arm high into the air, its mechanical fingers uniting into a menacing blade, preparing to crash down.

The sound of glass shattering echoed through the air, accompanied by the terrified shrills of the small girl. But nothing happening. Her eyes peeked open a moment later. The creature lie twitching, the remnants of its head painted onto the adjacent wall.

FFFFFWWWWWOOOSSSSSSHHHHHCHCHCHCHHCHCH

The soundwave of the high-caliber round boomed through the air, catching up with its projectile seconds too late. The girl knew she was safe. They had come for her after all.

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"Good work Sierra, keep an eye on the girl until the extraction team arrives. Once they get back to base, clean the girl up and let her rest before debriefing. She's got a lot of valuable intel if our scouts are to be trusted."

"Of course Miss Lyn, right away."

Why do they call me miss, I hate proper titles...

Lyn spun in her pivot chair several times before hoping out in a dizzy-stupor, stumbling over to the guard rail overlooking her compound. Covering the overlook to her small room was a one-way, bulletproof glass. To everyone below it just looked like another sheet of plate metal on the ceiling of the base. Little did they know the figure they all idolized was right above their noses, literally. Of course this was not her permanent base, almost nothing POLTAVA did was permanent, in the interest of security. This forward base was deemed useful for looking over their supply lines in and out of the east wing of 'Midtown', the name given to the cities middle-class ring. From this post Lyn could provide feedback to the surrounding bases on what supplies they could expect to receive, leaving the occupants confused and grateful, wondering how The Thinker obtained such knowledge 'without ever stepping foot outside her tree.'

Near the rail was a bowl of one of her favorite 'indulgences'. When Lyn invited someone to visit her, it was always for hot chocolate, never for a meal. Why? Because hot chocolate was much more appetizing than sardines and mandarin oranges sprinkled with poppy-seeds. But ohhhh is it good, she thought, letting one of the preserved fish slide down her throat.

Turning her attention back to the base, Lyn thought about venturing out to greet her comrades. Lyn was a very 'hands on' type of person, always stopping to give the younger girls a hug or peck on the cheek. Lyn was considered the mother figure of The Three Kings, and was treated as such, being the most highly respected. In return Lyn was always kind to the girls she met, whether just for her love of the girls to be happy or free, or for her own personal motives (Lyn proverbially 'walked both sides of the street')**.

But for now she would just watch... And eat a few more sardines.

(**Left this in here because even though I completely overhauled almost every sentence of my old, atrocious writing, this is just hilariously me from over 5 years ago. And who knows, it could always open a romance route!)
@converge Lol you posted as I was typing that huge post, I promise I didn't ignore you. I like the app so far. Finish it up and I'll give it the final stamp of approval. But, one thing. I'm bumping you down to a leaf. This is not because I don't trust you, I don't like your app, or anything of the sort, I just see your traits of more of a 'leaf' quality. Especially with your downsides. The bump-down is mainly just to establish a arche-type of some sort, because there are already more test subjects than leafs (leaves? if it's referring to the girl, what should the plural form be?) For the most part this is just a titling change, I will not use it to bump down what your character is capable of in the roleplay.

EDIT: Ok, now that all the replies are out of the way, I'm going to go pull the old first IC post and post it after a bit of freshening up. Watch for it in under half an hour!
(@All) Why you hooligans making me read all these long apps. It's 11 pm here and I'm being flooded with high quality writing. Also, my backspace key is sticking which is driving me nuts. Luckily I have a Red Bull for the morning. The girlfriend is out of town so I have way to much time to cuddle with my SKS, trying to decipher which sounds are wind and which ones are intruders trying to break in.

@rechonq Good to go.

@Massasauga Cleared for flight mini-me.

@Evil Snowman Thanks for keeping me in the loop big sexy.

@Obscene Symphony Even though your signature suggests that bread is a bad thing, in which case I should have you immediately escorted from this thread for crimes against culinary kind, I have read you app and I like it. Mostly. One your first trait, moving the rest of your body parts can have a slightly increased speed, not vastly. No Deus Ex neck-snaps at 40mph for you. That second trait makes me a bit iffy. I'm not necessarily saying you need to change it or get rid of it, but I'll be watching you closely. Also, for where you said she's growing out of the prosthetics, it's only been 1 year since the escape, not 5. I'll be watching you closely. If you have any question as to if something you wanted to do with one of your traits would be OP, message me first. If you go ahead and do it and I catch wind of it I'll just let it stay, but your character may be punished, severely. But overall, your app gave me a writers boner. GG.

@MinervianGrey I like you bud, but that app is a bit too over the top. Not necessarily from the second trait, but the first. Traits can only be towards one thing, like higher cognitive function OR increased physical abilities. Plus, the second trait must be relate-able to the first. With you first trait it looks like it is increasing you mental and physical atonement. If you wanted to change that to just mental, then overall it would be fine, because it would make sense that your GMG has increased mental functions, which then allows her second traits, hearing, feeling ect, to work, but on a physical level she is still a normal girl. Having both and once would probably put her as one of the experiments that didn't make it. Gotta remember the project got cut short by the girls escape, all the girls are just test subjects/rejects, not final products. Also, your app needs a bit more fine-tuning on things like appearance, just a bit more details for me to get the idea of what your character is like. Let me know if you need help on anything. I cant wait to see the final product! As for multiples, lets start out with one now, and I'll see how well I can handle things in the RP, then go from there.

@Kokushi I'm surprised you were even able to find the thread if @Foster told you about it. He probably gave you the coordinates to a geo-chache containing this threads URL on a map made out of stale pizza and the elastic from his old underwear. But no matter how you got here, I like your app, you're in.

@Obscene Symphony Nope, if you wanna be a GMG just write up an app. Anyone who wants to be one can be one, they're the backbone of this roleplay anywho!
I'll be posting soon, just messaged Plank to clear up something :)
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