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Oh, and I just read the other posts in greater detail, and its nice to see @hoppiholla391's character has a similar point of view to mine. This could almost get a theme going about different types of Mages. I could definitely fit in a "as you shape your element, your element shapes you" speech in some point in the future.
@Coga19000

A pair of questions with the post...one is that a drunken man had died in the starting stages, not a woman...so not sure where you are getting the extra casualty from.

Second, the last line you have confuses me and maybe I'm reading it wrong. "He shackled two of them out of his clothes." I don't get it. Is he binding someone? Because magically binding someone just like that is strange seeing as how I don't remember having anyone wearing metal armor into this. Is he pulling out some metal shackles on himself?

I just want to make sure so when I do my big response it makes sense.


Oh my god, I'm so sorry... I got completely confused over there. And shackling was an artifact of an earlier version of the post, where he was simply going to reveal his devices. I eventually decided against it, and had him outright equip tell of them.
Oh God, I have seriously screwed up on this RP. I'll fix this right away.
Jonathan took a step towards the bar.
He hadn't yet showed himself to the other mages; he had instead took the chance to sleep in what was a much better bunk that he was used at. However, after the ship landed in a speed that easily thumped him awake, he was to curious to just continue his slumber; he hadn't been in a city for months, and even though he was never a social person, he was unexpectedly overwhelmed by a need to survey the area, to interact again.
The other mages had already left, but a guard onboard informed him of the other's heading, as well as of the Commander's oders- something he was not too content to hear, as it meant that he would have to leave his companions behind. something he had never done before. In fact, this ertain part tempted him to just stay on the ship, or maybe even disobey him and take at least one with him. He had ways of disguising them... In the end though, he decided to just agree with Hayes' orders. He was part of a team now, and if anything was to be accomplished, he would have to prove he was capable of being a team member. He would obviously prefer some more respect from those puny blood-hungry rats who simply got their hands on some covinient pieces of technology, but he could understand that his years in isolation had made him... unstable at best.

Jonathan took another step towards the bar.

The sign read "Well Endowed" on it- and the picture accompanying it was a similarly vulgar image, as if to inform those unable to get the point right away. Was this distasteful semblance of a chapeau really the place his companions decided to spend their time on the ground? He could expect this from Hayes and his men, but not fom fellow mages. On the other hand, the chances of inding something better in this rathole were most likely minuscule anyways.

Jonathan took yet another step towards the bar.

He could now hear commotion in the inside of the bar. Apparently, there were some people fighting in there. He then gasped as he heard a man... dieing?! From getting lit up on fire? What were those ignorami doing in there?! He then heard a hand slamming down on something, ang then the sound of ice breaking, and a person falling on the floor violently. He felt rage build up in him for the man's death. He could not just let things die out.

Jonathan took a last step towards the bar, and opened the doors with the greatest thump his arms could provide. He then stared tersely at the site of the brawl, admitedly not knowing which mage was his and which was not, even though he did manage to recognise Master Alexander of all people -a wise and capable man he was always happy to be communing with-, Commander Hayes, and a girl he deifnetely knew from somewhere; the last one also seemed to be the one who threw another woman on the floor.
"Excuse me" he said in a loud, and yet calm and stern voice, "could someone explain to me the cause of this distubance in this bar?" His eyes were now shining in tempered fury, in a cold mettalic glow similar to the devices atached to his necklase and belt. He pulled two of them out of his clothes, also revealing the rest of them. "And judging from the charred body on the corner, I advise you to pray to the Gods you hold dear that I find your excuse satisfying."
@KatherinWinter
Deus looked at the girl in disbelief. She was not a mind for technology, that was for sure. But then, it's not that his own head had gotten him in a beter position than her...
"Just because he doesn't want to outright kill us definetely doesn't mean he won't try to get close. You have no idea how precice these people can get in barely killing you." He glanced a his map. "And by decoding them, I meant to decode their signatures -you know, those lines I showed you earlier? Anyways, if you find them satisfying enough, we go after the guys we already found. If you don't, I can possibly find some more of them. And if we haven't raised an alarm already, we could possibly go and get it updated in a computer nearby. Look, as I said, your call. I give you the data, you take the chances- that's how I am used to work, and I think I'll be right to think you also prefer to be team leader instead of me."
@KatherinWinter
Deus shrugged in disgust as he heard Vlad's words.
Seriously, Doc? Information in black and white? Exact measurement? Could be a lot of things? All around the bulding? Seriously?!?!" He was lashing out now. "What, is this how our real missions will be too? You will airdrop us into a missile silo and be like, 'Hey guys, we want you to get us something very specific that could be anything. It should be around here somewhere. Good luck' and then we will storm in, find out that something through the enemy ranks and then wait for you to Fulton us out of there? God" he sighed out in disbelief.
"Whatever, it's not like it would make a difference. Doc is a madman that wants to kill us all. Whether he is planning us to die in a training from hell or on the hands of terrorists is none of my concern right now. So Shadowgirl, your call. Do we go to the lab straight away, or do you want me to try to decode more of our inmates first?"

@KatherinWinter Woops, like like my last post was not posted for some obsure reason. Damn my coal-powered PC.
@KatherinWinterIt's okay. Don't be afraid to double-post when you think of what to do.
@UnusualStranger
Yep. That's how your commander described it anyways.
@UnusualStranger I see. So, could one of them go to the engine room while Jonathan goes to the meeting room?
@UnusualStranger Oh, I see. I expected them to have a greater degree of autonomy than that. Anyways, how much of a distance can they get from Jonathan, measured in a percentage of the ships size? And do objects between them interfere with their connection? (I know I make them sound like WiFi hotspots, but still XD)
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