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I've never heard of a subrosian...

Also your gonna need an actual age...


from the legend of Zelda oracle of seasons
Still here
<Snipped quote by ColonelCaboose>

Not bad, only thing is the last paragraph in history. It doesnt quite fit well with the story and a few other reasons. He would have no connection to the goddess of time and the part about the tear is to close to altering the story.

Remove the last paragraph of the history and I will aprove. Just expect some bone-headed skull jokes from me. YOHOHOHOHO!


That last paragraph was a mistake. I thought I deleted it from first attempt.
Here's attempt #2, decided to start from scratch again and go a different route, took a bit of a risk with this one so I won't be upset if it gets declined.

posted my CS for review, so accept/decline or make edits?
I'm here, will get a complete CS up sometime tomorrow. Long day of playing Army at the ranges today.
Regol couldn't do much to defend himself, it was very true that it had been his mission to kill Link and capture Demoko. However sometimes being hit by your own masters hand is enough to change one's view of them. Fiona had practically killed him within inches of completing his mission, if it hadn't been for Nayrin in the Trials his existence would still be somewhere else. Regol was a man who believed in a life debt as well as honor. He could tell Link wasn't one for apologizes, or really anything, he was a bit surprised that the boy was so whiny and pathetic, he had never noticed it when he was on the other side of things.

He turned every bit to show Caelan and Link the map showing where they were so they wouldn't think he was leading them somewhere else. Eventually they hit a dead end alleyway out of sight from the main market. Regol approached the wall while looking at the map, he pressed a combination of 3 bricks and a small doorway opened in the wall and closed behind them. They had entered the black markets. a thriving small community that sold exotic materials. There were Gorons, Dekus Scrubs, Zoras, as well as merchants from far away lands. Regol looked across the stands of artifacts, weapons, potions, and everything in-between and saw a small shop that read "Unique Masks from unique places! Mask Shop!". That's where they needed to go according to Demoko and the map.
After traveling through the old ruins underneath Castle Town, Caelan, Regol, and Link popped up in an alleyway. The air was filled with loud sounds of talking, dogs barking, and music, just like any other normal day in Castle Town. After exiting the alley way they found themselves in a somewhat larger alleyway surrounded by large circus tents and performers. Many people surrounded the area in funny looking costumes, children ran about and giggled and adults shared chuckles between groups. Things were indeed very lively for how much stuff was happening surrounding the Templar's, but then again it was all happening outside the walls and Thallus had more than likely installed safety barriers to keep any info of what was going on in the world outside the walls. A brilliant tactic nonetheless, if people were happy then there was no need to use force, a tyrant who came off as a loving ruler.

Regol pulled out a piece of paper that showed where they had to go to meet fellow sympathizers to get supplies. It seemed if he was reading the map correctly it was somewhat across town, in the Southeast part of Castle Town's markets. The Southeast markets were a hub for traveling merchants of all kinds, weapons, potions, armor, even enchanted items if you visited the market at the right time. Seems like the shop they were going to sold masks, masks of all kinds and welcomed all to bring and trade masks of their own.
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