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Oh my gosh, really? Original Dragonball!? I loved the first series, where it was more of a quest/adventure than a fighting show... I mean, it was still a fighting show but...you know what I mean.

Anyway, count me in. And I might be able to recruit another player from the other site I Rp on, he's a fan of the original over DBZ as well.

Side note, I had a character ages back that I made for a failed DB Rp. She was a shapeshifter that went to the same academy as Puar and Oolong, would that be an acceptable character?
I thought you'd pick Gwen n' Richard over Aglaia. I know she presents as a more unique and interesting character but a big part of that is that I had to reveal more about her for what she is to be understood. Aglaia has a pretty rich background story and character development in store, too.

Regardless, I'm happy to use her, as I said I became more fond of her as I wrote out her story and I'd hoped I might be able to use Aglaia as a side character later on so I'm glad you mentioned that, I'll be happy with that possibility in mind.

So yeah, I present Gwen n' Richard as my character for your consideration. Pretty funny that Shard and I only posted second characters because of the possible conflict of our fist choices, only to both end up choosing the other one, haha.

As for knowing of each other, Richard's antics at the mansion would have been fairly recent, thus, while new to the game, I think any character who pays any attention to the news would know of Richard and the fact that he claims to have the comatose body of a prominent heiress thought dead for four years contained in his chest :P

Whether they believe it or not, though, I'unno, I think Richard would be a pretty controversial addition to the team at first.
Haha! Way to take the rat idea and run with it, Lookie :P

Anyway, here is my second character, but based on Shard’s answer to my question, I absolutely think our characters could co-exist and even compliment each other in the roleplay.

Regardless, I actually got quite attached to this character as I wrote out her profile so I’ll leave it up to you, Phantom. I now feel sad that one of them will be left out 

Name: Gwendolyn 'Gwen' Gildermoore

Alias: Gwen n' Richard

Age: XVIII

Gender: Female

Personality: Gwen is a young woman who has seen much pain, giving her an almost saddeningly cynical and mature outlook for her age. She is worldly, knowledgeable on many topics and, at times, coldly logical, causing her to be an excellent strategist and tactition.

She can be selfish, because she has often been forced to ambitiously grab for what she wants to get anywhere and the habit has stuck with her, as has her focus, ambition and drive to succeed.

Despite the weight of all that has happened to her, however, one can still glimpse the brash, impulsive and exuberant young woman underneath, the little girl begging for freedom and adventure, even if it is somewhat muted by the fact that her only ability to communicate is through Richard's somewhat dehumanising vocaliser.

Richard himself is more than a suit of armour. He is a fully functional A.I. and an entirely separate entity to Gwendolyn, with thoughts and feelings of his own, simulated as they may be. He is stoic, logical and determindedly focused on his prime directive, keep Gwendolyn safe at all costs. Any thoughts beyond this base directive have stemmed from Gwendolyn’s influence over him.

Persona: When threatened, Richard's priority shifts from 'Defend Gwendolyn' to 'Eliminate all hostiles' and, while Gwendolyn is the 'commander' and generally issues Richard's orders, she has no direct input. What this results in is lethal balance between a machine's cold logic and computerised accuracy and a human's judgement and problem solving capabilities.

At least, that's the way if works when both want the same thing...

Appearance: Nobody knows what Gwendolyn (if that is indeed her real name) actually looks like, or even if she is more than a programmed apparition within Richard’s systems, though a police portrait of the girl who disappeared at fourteen that she claims to be shows a pale faced young woman with dark, wavy hair and pale green eyes. The only testimony suggesting her continued existence is an audio feed from inside the ten foot tall chassis of a battle robot.

Richard, the aforementioned mech is a vaguely human shaped, sleek and dangerous looking construct formed mainly from black brushed metal with glowing green lines highlighting trimmed areas around the armour plating.

His height and broadness clearly didn’t take day to day living in to account as he would bust the frames from the doorways of the average house.
The visor that makes up Richard's 'face' is V-shaped and similarly glows green, it is otherwise featureless, cold and inhuman.

Richard's entire torso area is a prism shaped containment unit in which the comatose and heavily damaged body of Gwendolyn Gildermoore is thought to be sealed while undergoing slow but steady treatment in a self contained life support facility.

On Richard's right shoulder is a two meter long, fully articulated cannon that can fold down flush against his back, in between two massive, backwards facing shoulder guards that also act as a form of jet propulsion for the machine.

Overall, Richard is built for one purpose, to defend Gwendolyn and to eliminate her enemies with extreme prejudice. To this end, his design is decidedly war-focused and suited for little else.

Costume: The only difference between Richard's defensive and offensive modes are that, when attack mode is activated, his thruster engines start burning, his missile ports open, his shoulder cannon activates and every glowing green line on his body turns crimson. As extra armour plating slides in to place and his loadout of weapons activate, he generally just looks bigger, scarier and more intimidating, if that were even possible.

Powers/Skills and how they came about: Gwen herself is little more than a comatose corpse being kept alive by a ten foot tall powered battle suit named Richard who in turn owes his existence to the financial investment of August Gildermoore, Gwen’s father.

On her own, Gwen is weak and frail but from safely within Richard’s battle chasis, she has access to great power and abilities, such as:

Increased strength and durability.

Near endless endurance.

Jet powered flight.

A massive, rotating, shoulder mounted missile launcher.

A hand held, high powered rifle with which she has computer aided accuracy.
Wrist mounted blades.

Machine guns that fold out of Richard’s forearms.

A translator for various languages used on Earth.

The ability to interface with other machines.

And an Mp3 player.

Rise to Fame: Gwendolyn, or more, Richard as not everyone recognises the claims that Gwendolyn Gildermoore is infact sealed in the combat chassis of the mech, came into the public eye by arriving at the house of August Gildermoore's widow and laying seige to the mansion, claiming that the current residents were usurpers and that Gwendolyn Gildermoore was alive and the true heir to the Gildermoore fortune.

Naturally, without proof, this didn't go over well and a laborious bunch of beaurocratic nonsense took place given that the 'criminal' was infact a machine and thus technically free from standard legal ramifications.

In the end, Gwen 'n Richard were able to avoid being 'put out of service' by agreeing to pay their debt to society as heroes defending the city.

Arch Nemesis: Matilda Whitlain, Gwendolyn's step mother who is in control of all of her late father's assets and, for fear of losing it all, is constantly making attempts to destroy or hack Richard and, by extention, any possibility that Gwendolyn may truly exist within the mech.

Personal Arc: Whether she actually exists or not, Gwen believes that she is not only being stabilised by Richard's systems, she is actually being slowly healed by them with the intent that she will one day awaken. At this point she will be able to prove (or disprove) her existence and have many decisions to make.

Her battle of wills with her keeper, Richard.

Her mission to take back her father's estate from her stepmother.

So there you are, I managed to slap it together after all! To summarise, in case it is confusing. Gwen is from a wealthy family and was seriously injured at fourteen. Ever since, she has been contained inside Richard who is protecting her, providing life support systems and gradually restoring her to health. The containment unit cannot be opened or she will die and, as she is comatose and only able to do anything via a neural link with Richard, she cannot confirm that she actually is human even to herself and thus, while she staunchly believes she is the real Gwendolyn Gildermoore, could possibly be just another A.I. within Richard. Hope you like her.
A bit off topic, but I liked Sammy (Confuzzler's character) quite a lot, too. I think she's cool even without her powers, where a lot of the time, superhero types are only interesting because of their powers. I quite liked Knightmare, too, I think we're getting a neat mix of characters.

I will try my best to get a simplified CS for another character out ASAP. It's just that it's the weekend for me which, as I mentioned back in the interest check thread, is not really a good time for me to get anything done with a computer. It's rare that I'd even be able to pop in to do these little OOC posts but I will definitely have something posted by the day after tomorrow.

EDIT: And yes, it's great to see everyone discussing things so thoroughly and with such civility. It's very exciting that these issue are actual points of conversation, means people are thinking about their characters and the dynamics.

I think that has a lot to do with you too, Phantom as too many GM's, no matter the rules and stipulations they put down before hand or claims they make regarding characterization being a focus, just willy nilly accept the first five applicants without question.

I have a good feeling about this Rp.
Yes, having two characters being representative of similar concepts has both up an down sides and, while I agree with Cryyptic's argument as well, I don't think it completely nullifies your points, Phantom.

Firstly, without going into much detail for the sake of retaining character mystery, the whole race thing was going to be a big deal for my character and a central point of her development and I do feel like having another weird creature from an isolated culture would impose on that and I do feel that, as Phantom said, we could be dealing with very similar situations. I know that Cryyptic said that our characters aren't similar except for them being non-human and I agree, however, from the human's side, they'd be much the same.

Additionally, Atrayen's arch nemesis is rather similar to certain aspects of what I had planned for my character's past, which would indeed be bland.

Looking on the bright side, though (I mean seriously, virtually anything can be made to work in Rp land) depending on Atrayen's general demeanor and opinion regarding humans, I could see our characters being interesting foils. I can see Aglaia's part in Atrayen's pursuit of his tribesman being quite interesting and I'd be interested to see how our characters react to the same situation. For example (a question for Shard) what would Atrayen do if he and Aglaia were walking down the road and someone started abusing them? Because Agalaia would probably try and rip the guy's head off. If Atrayen had a cooler head, then their interactions could be interesting, or maybe they'd feed off of each other's spitefulness, I'unno, I'm just kinda brainstorming and blabbering a bit but I can totally see interest in the fact that our characters are so different and yet Atrayen and his people could be facing similar issues to what Aglaia's people faced centuries ago and how different (or not) people are.

Then there's the fact that, if this world is indeed like DC, then there's all sorts of weird and wonderful creatures running around heroing and it could lead for interesting development for Aglaia to see the unity. I also don't think Atrayen's presence would interfere with her feeling isolated given that they still can't speak english and I think that the assumption that they'd be buddies just because they both aren't human could leave certain parties very offended.

So, anyway. I guess I stand a bit biased towards my character in preferring that a less similar character was used but, especially if nobody else has a problem with it, I won't kick up a fuss, I'm sure we'll work it all in.

I guess we could both post a second character, leaving Phantom to choose the best combination of the four, but again, if you've dropped the issue, I'm fine with us both just playing who we want to play the most ^_^
Yes, I've been trying for the past hour or so to delete the multiples but the only way is to edit them and the same lag occuring when I initially posted them is stopping me from doing that, too. Seems to have just worked now but the thread has multiple posts all over now.

As for communication with the team, I had intended to make that difficult for everyone as a challenge that she and the team would have to overcome. I figure she'd feel lonely and isolated without being able to properly talk to anyone but she'd be cunning enough to get the general gist of what people where saying during mission time.I also thought that it'd be interesting in that she could be babbling on about really important stuff but nobody gets her and when she finally learns english or something, more of her nature would be revealed.

And yes, she's basically a gorgon/gargoyle, She has more aspects leaning towards gargoyle lore but I figured that could come out in the Rp.

Cryptiic, thanks for the compliment, I'm glad you like her. At least I assume you're talking to me. As for having a person who happens to speak ancient Greek, that'd be interesting. Her language is only based on ancient Greek, though and is actually a dialect used exclusively by her race but someone versed in ancient Greek could probably communicate with her to a fair degree. Even if her own language is different, she'd probably understand straight up ancient Greek over and above modern english at any rate.

Maybe that way we could work in the stuff I was babbling about above with her character gradually being unraveled as her communication skills improve. Perhaps she'd say things here or there that only your character would catch. I would like to start with either no or minimal communication though, I just thought the language barrier could be interesting character development wise.

EDIT: I came up with this idea after I posted her, but would it be alright if I added alchemy to her list of skills? I thought it'd be interesting if, in an attempt to find a cure for the stone curse her snakes inflict she got into making all sorts of concoctions which she would be able to drink and then deliver by having her snakes bite people. It could make her more varied.

EDIT AGAIN: Actually, what makes more sense is that, while her race might have their own language, she just speaks regular ancient Greek because she assumes that's what humans still speak.
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Ah! This is excellent, I had hoped you'd be letting us keep a lot to ourselves given the whole 'character driven' thing. It just doesn't work out when someone says their Rp is going to be character driven and then you have to reveal everything about your character in a CS. I'll have mine up ASAP, hope I get in!
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