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I've decided to take a slightly different path on account of the many changes that would need to be made to fit Markus in somewhere, and swap from a silver-tongue to a more conventional lordly archetype -- though a good deal of focus is still placed on charisma and persuasion and intimidation.


Now do me a favor and shower me with criticism. I'm particularly worried about the level of remaining civilization that i've implied the more central polis of the former Atlanteans still retain.
I imagine that the guns available are Napoleonic-era stuff, so honestly it might be more useful to use a bow or crossbow for hunting.
One more question, and then I sleep: What condition are the lands that used to be a part of the Atlantean Empire in at the moment? Are they shattered into feuding city-states, like Thule? Since most of the ruling class has been murdered, have the native Boreans reclaimed them?
Here's a question: We know that the Age of Dawn has been going on for fifty years. How long was the Age of Dusk before that? The glossary makes it sound like a sudden eruption of all sorts of cataclysmic events over a relatively short period of time, but I don't know.
Perhaps, perhaps. The entire background needs reworking in any case. I'll probably get working on it later, or maybe
Yeah, I was confused as to how the various events on the timeline fit together. The original interest-check bit made it sound like we were just emerging into the Age of Dawn, but looking at the glossary now I've also spotted the 56-year thing. I suppose a reworking of the ol' backstory will be necessary.
Alrighty, I've got my WIP in a decent, just-about-complete state, and I'd appreciate seeing peoples' comments and criticisms on it (especially the latter). I also need to find a good image, hopefully. I'm going for the idea of if you took a DnD character, gave them some decent starting stats, and then poured everything into charisma from then on.
We're still just getting started, so there's no need to come up with an excuse. Feel free to hop on over to the OOC!
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