Elevation

Anything Goes (Remake)

Hoping i can still jump in this RP here is my character sheet draft.

Jet Larksong

Name: Jet Larksong

Alias: None

Age: 29

Gender: Male

Species: Plain old boring human

Occupation: Criminal

Allies: Jet is apart of a criminal group called the Black Ring whos main objection is to overthrow the upper class and any other oppressors.

Appearance: Jet stands exactly 6ft tall and has a broad muscular body. His arms are tattooed with various alien symbols and his body is riddled with scars and burns. Although he rarely takes his skull mask off he has dull purple synthetic eyes as he lost his real ones and short shaggy hair.


Personality: Most consider Jet to be a monster as he has spent almost his entire life robbing the upper class. Jet despises the upper class and hates how the poor people are left to suffer in the Undercity while the rich live fluffy lives up at the top not giving a damn what happens to the poor. When he was a young boy Jet lost both his parents to gang violence and a few years later he lost his older brother when a hitman group hired by a rich lawyer shot him dead after mistaking him for their real target. To the poor Jet is kind and compassionate and often helps sick and hungry by giving them money he aquired from robbing banks and robbing the Skyline

Power: None

Likes: List anything your character enjoys and has an interest in.

Dislikes: The upper class and anything that oppresses the poor of ring city

Skills: Jet is well rounded at combat of any kind and considers himself an expert of thwarting high security systems

Other: While Jet has spent his whole life as a criminal and thief he doesn't tolerate those who rob people in the Undercity who are barely making it by and will stop any attempts of other small time criminals who try to rob the good people in the Undercity.

Breaking the Sun

Could I make a Paragon character?

The Five Senses

Sorry about the mix-up I'll edit my post, work has had my mind scattered all over the place. But as far as my character at the moment he is just wearing plain cloths of the era, a dagger and his ring. He is also wearing a grim troubled expression. He isn't interacting with anyone at the moment but the innkeeper knows him fairly well as he grew up in Shimmer town, he is just observing the people in the bar.

The Five Senses

Hark ducked the low door frame of the small cottage he was taking quarter in and stepped out into the evening air. He rolled his broad shoulders, let out a sigh and started heading down the small path to the main road. The sun was setting on the lake and making it look like some wealthy lord had dropped a million small crystals into the water. Once he made it to the main road leading into town he made a left in the direction of the The Dockside View. Hunger was starting to grip his stomach and he knew the bar had some of the best quail he had ever tasted.

As he walked past a small church he noticed one of the cult members leaving and the pastor seeing him out with a concerned expression on his face. Hark turned his head and picked his pace a little till the church was out of his view. He and a handful of the Royal Guard had been chosen to keep watch at shimmer town to monitor the progress of the cult who were allowed to occupy the major town.

Hark looked to the glowing gold and orange sky, he was deeply troubled that the king allowed the Cult to occupy some of the towns to spread their teaching. He grew up learning that they should never be trusted and to stay far away as possible from them and now they were in the heart of the Nation of Sight. He had witnessed the King kill his most trusted adviser after the seaming leader of the Cult gave him visions making his eyes bleed and the sight of that still gave him nightmares.

What was even more odd is the King selected over half the guard to start carrying out special missions. They were stripped of their armor and markings that would signal they were part of the guard and were almost being used as undercover mercenaries. Hark knew the king only had the best interests for the people be he feared he was getting himself into something almost evil dealing with the Cult of Insight, but he pushed those thoughts out of his head he was only a lieutenant and was no where near in a positions to ask any questions.

After a short while he spotted the bar and when he came closer he could hear the usual banter from inside of the bar. As he entered he noticed it was at almost full capacity and spotted a empty stool at the bar and took a seat. He waited a moment before a familiar figure came out of the back.

"Ah it's nice to see your face again Hark" The innkeeper asked in a joyful tone, "You want the usual?"

A slight nod was all Hark replied with and tossed him two gold coins and the innkeeper diapered into the back to let his wife know to start on a quail. As he sat waiting for his food he slowly rubbed his silver energy ring he kept on his left ring finger and watched the rowdy crowd going about their evening clearly trying to forget about the current grim situation the Nation was in.

The Fireflies Settlement

Is it too late for me to hop in?

The Five Senses

Name: Hark Lorie
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Age: 24
Home Nation: Sight

Appearance

Bio: Hark was born and raised in Shimmer Town his mother, a skilled weaver, and his father, a guard for the town's lord. He never quite had the eye for art like his mother and he often found himself frustrated when all of his childhood friends were making beautiful pieces of cloths and artwork and all he produced was mediocre at best. He was often bullied for not being able to create nice works of art and ended up getting into a fights. During his fights he realized he had a natural eye for combat and it was almost like he could see his opponents move before it even happened.

When he became 16 he totally gave up on ever become like his mother and turned his eye to his father. Soon after he would beg his father to teach him swordplay and he found he had a natural talent in combat. He would spend all his hours dedicated to learning how to fight so he could one day become apart of the royal guard in the nations capitol.

When he became the age of 20 he officially joined the Shimmer town guard after defeating every opponent during testing and quickly rose through the ranks because of his ability to see peoples moves before they happened. He also discovered his fighting ability was not just natural talent and he was an Adept with the slight ability to use Precognition magic.

In the early days of the war a portion of the Shimmer town guard was called upon by the capitol and they were assigned to intercept and destroy scouting parties form the Nation of Touch. He served with his father and they were quite successful in the first year dealing high casualties to enemy scouting parties. However their good luck didn't last long and soon it seamed the scouting parties always knew how to avoid them or even counter ambush the group. It wasn't just them either even the main force seamed to always get flanked or outmaneuvered.

Not long after the Nation of Touch started taking over more and more territory. Hark's father died in his arms being struck by an arrow in an ambush, his best friend was crippled and dismissed from duty, and his mother was killed when her caravan was ransacked on their way to deliver clothing to the capitol. After his losses Hark found a deep hatred for the Nation of Touch and took an opportunity to try out to become a member of the Emperors royal guard. He excelled in the tryouts and has spent the time since then in the royal guard carrying out special missions for the Emperor and honing his almost 6th sense ability.

Personality: Hark is fiercely loyal to the Nation of sight and hell bent on revenge for his parents and has a deep hatred for the Nation of Touch. All his spare time is spent with his men training them up in combat or working on ways to better enhance his precognition magic. He always wears a stern emotionless look on his face and hardly has a sense of humor.

Quirks: Hark wont turn down a game of five-finger fillet

Skills/Magic: Sight based magic, he is a Adept and uses precognition magic

Weaknesses: Magic- Hark only anti-magic technique is his precognition magic so as a result he is more vonerable to magic attacks

Precognition fuel- His precognition magic is fueled by his energy levels so the more exhausted he is the less it works

Equipment/Items: His equipment varies by mission but his favorite weapon is a battle hammer and he always wears a silver energy ring to help keep his energy up.

precognition magic

Harks precognition magic allows him to see what other people are going to do before they even do it.

Limitations:
- He can only see what peoples moves are going to be in a 30 meter radius
- He has to looking at a specific person to see what they will do and has to activate his precognition
- His precognition only allows him to see
- Precognition doesn't increase his physical abilities so even if he sees something about to happen this doesn't mean he is fast enough to react to it
- His fuel for precognition is his energy(which is why he wears an energy ring to give him an extra boost)
- He can only see what someone does a maximum of 6 seconds before they do it(How far he can see depends on his energy)

Energy ring

Hark uses the energy ring to give him an extra boost during combat so he can use his limited precognition magic longer. If he were to use the ring nonstop it would only give him an energy boost for 30 minutes before it would be drained and it requires a 6 hour recharge.

Rings: different rings give the user different abilities and affect the user differently. While some rings only require a recharge delay more powerful rings can take a toll on peoples mental health or reduce their lifespan. Rings are also quite rare and as a result only wealthier people or higher up military members can afford them or are entrusted to them. Hark acquired his after a battle and he found it on a dead Nation of Touch scout commander.

The Five Senses

@13org Pinky promise accepted! *cue shiny lights and mystical background vocals*

@Elevation Is this a magical ability or an adept ability? Does it show you multiple possibilities or just one? What do you mean by 30 meters wide? Do you mean a 30 meter radius or is that the length of the diameter? How does he activate it?

By the sounds of it, it seems decently nerfed from what it could be. I may be okay with his ability but it will have to be tied to sight. You wouldn't be able to hear into the future or anything else, you would just be able to see it. I would like to keep the senses to five, that is the title after all.

Also I would want to review a write up before approving it. Sound good?

@Pezz570

Yea it sounds good and yes he basically has a 30 meter radius(sorry for not clarifying that) where he can see what is going to happen(Also has to be looking at least in the general area of what he wants to see in the future. And yes I plan on my character to be an Adept that is unknowingly using Precognition magic and his fuel source is his energy so the more tired he gets the less he can see. I'll get started on a character sheet and PM it to you.

The Five Senses

Was thinking of joining and making my character with a sort of 6th sense ability. He is from the land of sight so i think this is a pretty fitting sight sense enhancement that isn't too OP. This ability allows him to see things before they happen. However his "6th sense" has some limitations: 1) He can only see what is going to happen in an area that is about 30 meters wide 2) Even though he can see what is happening his physical abilities can't always keep up so if he was in combat with a much more powerful enemy he could see what the enemy is going to do but he wouldn't be able to keep up because his physical abilities don't increase in speed or strength 3) He can only see a maximum of 6 seconds into the future and how far he can see depends on how exhausted he is 4) His "6th sense" has to be activated so he doesn't always have it on. So in short his ability is really only useful in combat or when he is acting as a body guard for someone important as there is a limit on how far his abilities sight radius is.

Let me know if you think this ability is ok and ill finish my character sheet this RP looks like its going to be a good one.

The Nomad, a sci-fi epic.

Half way done with my post been very busy sorry peeps.

The Nomad, a sci-fi epic.

Going to post tonight or tomorrow been busy as hell