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7 yrs ago
Current Laptop has suspiciously decided to have hard-drive failure two weeks after the warranty expired, so no RPing for me!
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7 yrs ago
Any in-progress RPs in need of some new blood? Drop me a PM!

Bio




Name:
Kyle (Obviously)

Age:
23

Gender:
Male

Sexuality:
I tend to like women

Occupation:
Criminologist

Location:
United Kingdom

Hobbies:
Gaming; Reading; Writing; Drinking; Sleeping; Napping; Snoozing; Eating; More Drinking; Kipping; and Laser-Tag.

A Random Interesting Fact:
I can make the dimple on my chin go up and down.

Warning:
I will vanish for months at a time because adult stuff. I'm also unlikely to post every day.



Most Recent Posts

Another thirty minutes passed whilst Lady Buxton and Sir Chester sat idly waiting in the Inn, and both of them were struggling to provide small talk. Although they had contrasting personalities, the two of them got along well enough, but not so well that they could comfortably talk for hours on end. Buxton found herself taking one of the knives for her boot, a small bronze dagger with a leather wrapped grip. It was as sharp as it could be, but nevertheless she couldn’t help pulling out a whetstone and begun grinding along its edge.

“Who’s this?” asked Chester, giving his colleague a quick nudge with his elbow. He did not so much as blink whilst he let his eyes glide over the olive skinned beauty, appreciating most her enthralling amber eyes and her soft facial features. Even though she was draped in furs and linen, he could tell that beneath she probably boasted some attractive curves. He had always had a thing for ‘exotic’ girls from the far south, and on the rare occasion that he saw one he became uncharacteristically smitten and dirty minded. Buxton herself looked up in response and saw the graceful figure that was now walking towards them. She was not as impressed as her colleague, although she was happy to see a recruit that wasn’t some brainless brute of a man.

“Lady Buxton and Sir Chester, I presume? My name is Karen ibn Nahal. I was send over from Southarbour to join the Consano. My commander regrets he couldn’t send anyone else with me. Here is a letter of recommendation from my commander.” She said and pulled out a small envelope from her bag. “I served as advanced scout and infiltrator, my abilities and skills should already be described in the letter.” Chester reached forward with a smile and received the letter, immediately opening it and examining its contents.

“You presume correctly.” Buxton replied with a hearty smile, and with her hand she signaled for the recruit to take a seat. “I am Lady Buxton, Knight of the King’s Table and leader of the Consano.” She continued, “And this gawking gentleman is Sir Chester.”

“Pleasure.” He smiled. “The letter seems legitimate, the Commander seems to think quite highly of you. “Excellent fighter”, “A marksman with knives”, “Skilled infiltrator” - I’m sure you’ll make an excellent addition to our little band of merry men. We will be conducting a full brief tomorrow morning at dawn, but before then is there any questions that you wish to ask?”
I am done with my character sheet. I am not such if it's clear of any mistakes. If you find one, tell me so I can fix it.

EDIT: I also think that I should change my backstory a bit.


I like your character but there is just a few little things. Firstly, you provided a picture but didn't provide any written detail. I suppose that's fine if your character looks exactly as they do in the picture, but even then I'd like at least a line or two with details about height, size, etc. Secondly, you didn't put anything in the 'Skills and Abilities' section. Whilst you've alluded to his skills in his history, it would be nice for you to clarify and expand upon them. And thirdly, although people would have stayed in Fort Cain it was mostly evacuated by the time the horde reached Rundorm. That means that the events at the fort which you described are fine, but you might want to explain why your character didn't flee South when everyone else did. Also you said he went to the Cross Roads because 'the nearest town also was crowded by the inflected', but unless your character had only been slightly ahead of the Plague the entire time, he could have gone to Boulder Town, Titus, Minorhold or any number of small villages dotted about. So you might want to clarify why he chose the Cross Roads (e.g. He thought it would be better to get as far ahead of the horde as possible).

^I know that's looks like a lot of criticism, but really those points are very small and easily fixable. And as I said, I do like your character :)
First post is up! The quality could have been much better, but I didn't want to delay this any longer. Get posting bitches! :P
I know how the recruitment process is going to work, I just don't know how the posts about it are going to work. It'll be Lady Buxton and Sir Chester basically just interviewing anyone suicidal enough to sign-up. Given that hardly anyone is joining (as you'll see in the IC), they're having to resort to accepting anyone capable of wielding a sword.

Ah, I'll just post it and see what happens I suppose xD
Would probably be needed to check the different people if they have some useful skills they could offer. The slave trader is an exception as they can't really lose his founding but the others should at least be asked what they can do, if not tested in case of battle skills involved


I mean as in how the posting about the recruitment is going to work. Don't want like 10 characters trying to speak to the same person at once about joining.

p.s. your characters don't need to attend the recruitment thingy, but it is recommended.
Looking good so far! Could you (and anyone else who has submitted an incomplete CS) please remember to notify me when it is completed :)



Not one to break a promise, the first post will be up later on tonight. I'm still trying to figure out how the recruitment part is going to work though.
I mean, I looked at the other posts and sort of assumed that spots were open. Sorry 'bout that! I'll try to be better about it in the future. :P


Don't be sorry, I was just being a nob haha
Oh. Uh, hi there. I did a thing.



It's been a while since I've actually made a CS (*cough*orroleplayeddatall*cough*), so, uh, pardon my rustiness.


Did you even bother to ask whether or not you could join?


No, nor did you need to! Your CS kind of asks that question itself, and fortunately it's a very good Cs. Accepted! Please add it to the list :)
Any ETA?


It'll definitely be up for Wednesday night! I'm moving house tomorrow, so unfortunately I won't be able to get it up any earlier than that.
Still open and yet to start! The OOC is mostly discussion about the lore; the results of which have been incorporated into the wiki (second post in the OOC).


(In other words, you don't need to read through the entire OOC before joining)
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