gamer5910

Essence

"Wait I'm a stuffed animal?!" Riku said telepathically "What animal am I are there others that look like me...." Riku trailed off before getting back on track to the task at hand. "So how are we suppose to get out of here if we can't move?" as Riku said that he heard big foot steps approaching the pile of stuffed animals, so his first reaction was to panic "Oh god please don't pick me up... Please... Please don't pick me up."

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I'm just gonna face it i'm not gonna get into this Rp, so i'm gonna leave now it was fun chatting.

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@OscarioTheGuy

Is this why i'm told my Rp style is poor because I had a power that was similar to one in an anime?

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@OscarioTheGuy

I know I need to improve my writing but I also have a question. What's Deadman Wonderland?

Essence

Riku a white fox with black paws and black on the tips of his ears and tail had awoken. He heard the noise of a child crying out to his mom. He tried to move his head to get a better view, but he couldn't move his head he then tried his arms, but again nothing moved he then tried his legs, and like the other attempts nothing was moving. Riku began to panic quickly "What's going on!? Where am I!?" he thought, the only thing he knew besides he couldn't was he was laying on his back because he could only see the ceiling.

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aegyolk said
@gamer5910I can see what tenebrae means with your RP style. But tbh turning people away isn't really my thing so if you want me to vouch for you then dude I'll vouch for you.Don't wanna be sounding like a twat, and I know this is hella boring but proof reading your posts over before submitting them would help, I think.In any case, I'll vouch for you mate :)Anyways, as for the scientists, I think it would be pretty cool for a more inexperienced scientist to form a bond with some more cunning inmates, and then persuaded to f everything up, like 'accidentally' setting free one of the mutants during their rage mode, or something along those lines. I think that may be cool scenario that could showcase some of the mutants' powers in action. What do you think? :D

Thank you aegyolk.

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Dose anyone wanna vouch for me that has already been accepted to this Rp?

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@spiderlegs @aegyolk @OscarioTheGuy

Can you vouch for me by answering this one question. "Do you want me in this Rp, or do you not care if I get in or not?"

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(This was from a death note Rp.)

Flippy was being driven when he saw something in the corner of his eye. He saw a car driving at high speed down the road towards the car he was in, he quickly told the driver to brace for impact. When the two cars collided Flippy was sent flying across the seat and hit the door, and he was knocked out, and when he woke up he saw that the driver was dead and that the car was upside down. He turned to the door he was next to and tried to kick it open. After his failed attempts to kick it open he grabbed the seat belt wrapped it around his fist and began punching the window. He could see a small crack forming from where he was punching, so Flippy went back to kicking the window. The window eventually busted open Flippy crawled out trying to mind the glass on the floor, so he began walking over to the side walk and sat down near a small store he turned around to read the sign in the window it read "Charlies Candy Store." Flippy just grinned and turned back around to look at the car wreck in front of him, after a while a ambulance arrived with two cop cars, and a firetruck. The ambulance picked Flippy started making its way to the hospital while waiting for the ambulance arrived Flippy asked one of the paramedics if he had any candy on him.

(I hope this was a better example than the others, I really like this Rp and want to join it.)

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tenebrae16 said
Well, it's more of a quality problem. Certain phrases don't sit well and I think your style is just not suited for how I plan to have this rp planned out. We are rapidly filling up on places for experiments as well ><

Those posts were not my best but the other rp I have as a reference I have a character with the same name, so I didn't know if that would affect your decision. So mostly i'm asking if I could show one more example or I could at least get a chance to show my quality of rping is better than those two other examples.