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    1. Gummy1295 7 yrs ago

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7 yrs ago
Current I feel a chill crawl down my spine every time I see that the number of notifications exceeds the number of suscribed posts. :S
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7 yrs ago
@Tojin I'm surprised no one's made a reference to one of the deadest memes on the internet. Faith in humanity (somewhat) restored.
7 yrs ago
Will be going on an indefinite hiatus as soon as all of my current RPs die. I'm starting to lose my metaphoric footing on my studies and my grades are dropping as a result.
7 yrs ago
I'm turning in early tonight... I'm exhausted...
7 yrs ago
I'm not the ship's Captain, but I'll still go down with it. *salutes*

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Morning everyone. What a rude awakening tho; you wrote three posts while I was asleep. >_>

I'm starting my next turn like this:

Jeff knew he was doing something wrong when the little Moe girl was working better under pressure than he was.

[@Tenda Tenmo] She's so nice tho TT_TT
I laugh in the face of danger HAHAHAHAHAHA

Edit: I saw it as him thinking he was dreaming or something and setting out to prove it.


You'd be right! The reason he freaked out when he tasted the blood on his finger is because he used to think that everything was either a simulation or an incredibly elaborate prank.
@Gummy1295

I don't know if I'm scared of Jeff or scared for him.

Both, probably.


It's understandable. He pricked his finger on the same window that the claw broke into. My original intentions were to give him a little more composure, but after thinking it through, I thought it best not to introduce him as a Gary Stu.
Jeff Pierce
Location: 400 feet above "Seattle"
Time: September 5th, 2028; 12:00 AM

Jeff was asleep in the very back of the car, opposite to where the bespectacled individual was originally seated. Like everyone else, he witnessed some sort of giant insect claw bust through the window and drag the poor boy to what Jeff supposes was a bloody, painful death. The mere sight of the bloodstained window made his heart race... Not out of fear, though. "Damn..."he mutters to himself. "What kind of sick initiation prank is this?"

Without saying a word to any of the six students that were also trapped inside the same train, or even making eye contact with anyone, Jeff walked over to the shattered window and pricked his finger on a shard of broken glass. He then proceeded to stick his bleeding finger in his mouth, keeping it in for an awkward amount of time. Suddenly, with his finger inside his mouth, his eyes widened in shock. "There's no way..." he thought. He immediately removed the bloody finger from his mouth and started to tremble in fear. "This is... This is real blood."

His fight or flight instincts activated. "I have to get to the control room. As much as I hate my own life, I'd never forgive myself if these future pillars of society lose their lives when I could have done something..." With this said, Jeff took a deep breath and charged in the direction of the door leading to the next car, but after failing to scratch the door with his full-body tackle, he sank to his knees and his face began to redden. "Dammit!" he cried out into the dead atmosphere, smashing his bleeding knuckles against the door. Tears started rolling down his cheeks, more out of pain rather than fear. He turned his face 90 degrees so that half of his face would be visible to everyone else. "Don't look at me!" he screamed, referring to everyone else on the BBS.
I've finished my first post...

...Well, almost. @Fury Panda, I sent you the finished draft through PM, I'd love to hear your feedback before I submit it.
So are we going with the order we posted the prologues? If that's the case then it's time for El Jefe' to panic

*cough@Gummy1295cough*


"As flattered as I am, that's not really my name."



EDIT: Turns out I am going first, after all. @Fury Panda, you got my back? You know, just in case I write something stupid.
...I'm just gonna leave this here.

@Raddum You should lay low, the Illuminati are looking for you
@Gummy1295 Aw thanks man, always nice to hear my posts have generated some hype XD I thought yours was well written too. I always end up doing essays in the early points of an RP as I try and get to grips with a character and find my feet with them.

I'm looking forward to later on when the secrets start to come out with Jeff and Sam. One can afford to live all fancy and acts like he can't while the other's dirt broke and fronts like he's fancy. #trading places bros for life


Also, bestie confirmed :D

EDIT: One of the biggest issues I have when writing IC posts is keeping the writing format uniform. Everything I've written, homework or otherwise, was written almost entirely in the first person, present tense. (In contrast to third person, past tense, which has become a sort of unspoken rule for most RPs) I try my hardest to write in the same format as everyone else, but when I get inspired, I tend to forget to follow this format, and as a result, I end up with a mess of verb tenses. I've been chastised on many occasions for this, since I'm accidentally jumping to and from different tenses throughout the post.
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