Guy0fV4lor

Heartbreaker - A KILLER Isekai Adventure

@LadyAnnaLee

Sorry if I struck a nerve by not addressing you by your full handle-- I was half-awake at the time of writing that and shorthanded it for expediency's sake without knowing that offense would be taken to it.

My apologies-- it won't happen again.

In other news I intend to try hammering out the majority of my CS' first draft today.

Heartbreaker - A KILLER Isekai Adventure

I just realized the knights of Valance are something Anna made for her backstory and not something you presented Yam.

Certified PEPEGA moment.

Heartbreaker - A KILLER Isekai Adventure

@Yam I Am

Now when it would come to the Knights of Valance, that would be the same group my holy knight would be from-- yeah? Or are there other sects I can have him be from?

Further-- how high up would Full-On Holy Knights be? Would they have things like the well known dnd-type 'lay on hands' healing and 'smite' and the like? How much of the non-heroic Clergy and holy warriors actually have magical abilities?

Heartbreaker - A KILLER Isekai Adventure

@LadyAnnaLee

While I do like that idea-- I think I've already sold myself on the idea that I came up with while working. In short, the idea is a man that dedicated his entire existence to the faith and its goals-- only for his ideals and beliefs to be brutally shattered in bloody fashion after one particular day.

And of course it involves a hero.

But yeah, if its decided I've stuffed too many razorblades in the first draft's pillowcase I'd be down for your idea.

Heartbreaker - A KILLER Isekai Adventure

Well shit, guess I may need to rewrite what I was cooking up so I dont have a character that takes away the uniqueness of yours.

I was straight up going to make a holy knight that had come to despise the church for reasons I was just fleshing out in my head while at work.

I'm fine changing it though.

Heartbreaker - A KILLER Isekai Adventure

hoo boy this looks interesting

The Epic of Beginnings - Fragments of a weathered scroll

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@Rune_Alchemist@VitaVitaAR@Crimson Paladin

"Dammit!" Donovan hissed through gritted teeth as he cast a panicked glance down the hall leading to the second entrance. "Thought tha door would hold fer longer!"

His head snapped to meet the eyes of the hunters before him; the large man's heartbeat skyrocketing as time grew short and tensions rose. There wasn't any time to thoroughly talk things out with these men, but based on what they'd said-- there was common ground.

And more than likely... A sense of impending peril.

"Listen lads--" Donovan snapped; his voice wrought with urgency, "If yer followin' him fer tha good ah th' village, we're all on th' same side! Tha seal's gettin' weaker by tha damn hour an' we ain't got tha kinda time tah fuck around ere' arguing an' fightin! If yah stay ere'-- yah won't be able tah stop tha Kyrnith. Tha lot of ya 'll get yerselves killed tryin, an' that won't do ah damn thing tah stop what's goin on!"

Donovan would turn on the balls of his feet toward the door he'd entered through, hurriedly gesturing for the men to follow."Yah wanna do somethin tah save this village? Then get yer arses movin'! Weh got all tha time in tha world tah spit piss n' vinegar at eachothah once we're outta here!"

The Epic of Beginnings - Fragments of a weathered scroll

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@Rune_Alchemist

Don's gaze never left the cultist leader even as he drove through a pair of her lackeys, both men bouncing off his shield with a stiff thud. Unfortunately, Soyala never gave the chance to take a shot at her legs-- clearly intending to draw the skirmish into the town. Don knew the crazy bitch would likely use the townsfolk as meatshields for herself and her accomplices... Maybe that's what she was counting on. With the cultists fleeing, Don whirled to face the Kyrnith before it could give chase to the hunters.

If the Elder beast couldn't be counted on to make the wise decision here-- Don would need to be a bit more forceful in his persuasion.

Taking a deep breath and steeling himself for whatever barrage was to come, the man raised his shield and blocked the Kyrnith's path to the town with his own body.

"Does ah tornadah send ah stranger tah save a village? Can a tornadah show mercy? Can a tornadah choose what it does? Or does et simpleh exist?"

Don swallowed as he caught he breath, "You choose what yeh do here! You sent meh tah Dawn tah stop th' Illuminator an' his pawns! They want yeh tah chase em'! If yeh chase em' now, yer onleh helpin' yer enemy! Yer helpin' tha same bastards who just wronged yeh! And you'll be hurtin' folk who got nothin' tah do with this mess! If you want em' to pay fer what they done-- make et be on yer own terms! Not theirs! If yer set on this warpath right now, and can't wait tah get yer revenge-- I'll take yah to their temple if yah want! They don't give a damn about the place they're tryin' tah lead yah into! I know yer hurtin' Kyrnith-- an' ayem sorry aye couldn't stop em before this shite happened! But aye need yah tah trust me on this!"

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@Rune_Alchemist

Donovan grit his teeth as what was potentially a worst-case scenario. He and Akando had failed to stop the slaughter, the Kyrnith was likely on the verge of rampage, and based on the corpse to hunter ratio-- there were likely many more hunters here... And more deer dying by the moment.

If Don wanted any hope of salvaging the situation he'd need to act fast, and talk faster.

Of the five hunters he could see, the one closest to Akando; the woman, was the most dangerous. Unlike the others, Don could sense she had some kind of blessing, she was the only hunter with such he'd seen thus far at all. If this was the "Soyala" he'd heard about, this was the leader of the Illuminator's cultists; and likely very capable. Fortunately, neither Kyrnith nor the hunters had seemed to notice the man yet.

An advantage he had every intention of using.

Raising he shield Donovan charged with all his might as he gathered power in his legs, intent on barreling through the first few hunters, and launching himself at Soyala before she could make her next move.

The only warning they'd get would be Don's last-ditch effort to keep the elder beast from going on a warpath of indescriminate and vengeful slaughter. "Kynrith! Don't waste yer time on the un's, Akando n' aye can deal with em-- protect tha deer they ain't gotten to yet!"

It was a fucking long shot. But maybe, just maybe nobody else needed to die here... And justice could be served proper.

Dragonier (Medieval Fantasy, Dragon Riders, Magic, War)

Consider my interest piqued good sir! Itll be hard for me to try and make time for another RP with my current schedule, but I'd love to give this a shot!