@Anonymous Wow. That's a busy fellow. O.o
Having family members who live IN his household has some potential for some interesting situations, since Correctors can't tell ANYONE that they exist and even though he's got that nightshift job his income would be totally suspicious. I'm excited to see how it works out. :)
I like the new names for the traits, they sound a lot better now.
BTW, how old is his sister?
@NeoAC Alright, lemme start off by saying that I LOVE the idea of music as a weapon in a world that runs off of music.
I might have this next part completely wrong but, I don't think that all of the threats in the DgtWld exist outside of the DgtWld. I think that there are also a lot of viruses that need to be fought, so maybe if your music acted as a more physical blast than just high frequency sound?
@Anonymous@AliceinRedHeels
I think his personality is fine. Its like, he has this façade of being this scary guy, while being a kindred spirit on the inside. I don't see how that's too deviant. We could definitely use an intimidating guy who is actually really normal and likes to have a good time.
I think we should give him a weapon that suits his personality like maybe rapiers. Rapiers are nice and quick weapons, I think it'd be good for an agile harlequin-esque fighting style.
Age: 16 Frequency Online: I’ll be for a few hours between classes and for several hours outside of school. Responsibilities Offline: I’ve got two classes a day and no major responsibilities in sight. Favorite tv shows or books: Game of Thrones (I haven’t read the books), Brynhildr in the Darkness was really good, also general slice of life anime nonsense like K-On!, Haganai, and Papakiki. Why do you like to write/RP: I’ve just always liked the idea of creating a character and giving them a story to tell. I’m a pretty stale person in real life, so filling a character feels natural to me, like it becomes my identity while I’m writing for them.
CHARACTER SHEET
Name: Yukimura Kiku Alias in the DgtWld: Glitch Age: 22
Weapon of Choice: Magic Spells, she can formulate different ‘magic’ effects in the way that other Correctors formulate weapons.
Low: Low exertion is characterized by mildly irritating effects – a subtle pressure in the sinuses, low ringing in the ears and some tiredness. All in all, low exertion is a safe zone with no adverse physical effects.
Low Exertion is seen after using five low level spells or one medium level spell.
Medium: Medium exertion is where physical exhaustion begins to develop – increased heart rate, mild headaches, and mild muscle aches develop in this stage of exertion. Medium level is still a safe area, with little risk of any harming physical effects.
Medium exertion is reached by the use of 25 low level spells, five medium level spells or one high level spell.
High: High exertion results in heavy physical exhaustion – muscle fatigue, throbbing headaches, drowsiness and nausea develop during High level exertion. Daily use of high exertion spells can lead to potential health risks. As such, once Kiku reaches this critical level of exertion, all spells above low level are locked until she recuperates outside of the DgtWld.
High exertion is reached at 125 low level spells, 25 medium level spells, or five high level spells.
Dangerous: Dangerous exertion is nearly impossible to reach, due to the lock-out that normally occurs at high level exertion, however it is possible for a long-time Corrector to develop a spell that completely by-passes high-level exertion and crosses directly into dangerous exertion. Dangerous exertion can lead to crippling disabilites in the real world including, but not limited to – lameness, blindness or deafness.
Dangerous exertion can only be reached by the use of a dangerous level spell.
Exertion Levels Basic - Low – Medium – High – Dangerous
Magic Bolt: A slow-moving bolt of magic energy, explodes on collision, hitting enemies within 1m. Shield: A temporary shield that blocks one incoming attack before dissipating. Magic Fists: Kiku surrounds her fists with arcane magic to deal extra magic damage to enemies within melee range. One time use. Arcane Pulse: A pulse of magic that deals damage and throws back all enemies within a 1m radius back 5m. Phantasm: Creates a digital clone of Glitch that acts on its own. Maximum ten uses. Clones can not use spells.
+ Inner Child: Kiku can amuse herself with seemingly nothing. She hops down steps, splashes in puddles and walks on top of low walls and absolutely adores animals and the little beauties of life.
+ Adventurous: Kiku is not afraid to step outside of her comfort zone from time to time, convincing her that it’s worthwhile is a whole other issue.
+ Confident: Kiku doesn’t know the meaning of shame and a bolstering self-confidence keeps her from falling down after failure, though she may not be quick to try it again.
+ Courteous: While Kiku has her quirks, she’s not without social graces. She won’t tidy her apartment if she knows someone is coming over; but, she’ll do her best to make them feel at home, in what little ways she can.
- Lazy: Kiku is slow to motivate and she lives a largely sedentary lifestyle, though once she’s up, she doesn’t do much either. She might wander around or plan to meet up with one of her co-workers, who would know that’s she’s free to do just about anything at any given time.
- Reckless and Irresponsible: Kiku has been dodging responsibilities like it was her job – and now it kind of is. To her there are few things more mundane than actually working for a living and household chores are done on an absolute-need-to-do basis. As Glitch, Kiku tends to be all-together reckless in her actions and is entirely unapologetic for it. In the real life however, this recklessness is best expressed by moderate alcoholism – while she doesn’t drink on duty, it’s hard to find a weekend when she hasn’t.
Time with Tokyo Sector: 2 years
The Yukimura family was an upper-middle class family of five; Kiku’s father made his living as a corporate drone and her mother was a leading journalist for the Tokyo Shinbun. Together they had three children: Kiku was the oldest (born 2001) and her younger twin brother and sister, Aoi and Akane (born 2014). They lived a peaceful, domestic life, with all of the affordable luxuries of their times – including the first wave of DgtWld-compatible cell phones. Modeled after older flip phones that had dominated the Japanese mobile market, Kiku’s first phone was an absolute marvel of modern technology.
Her phone tapped into her life force, man and machine had become one. Unbeknownst to Kiku, she was one of the first people in the world made compatible to a radical new life in the DgtWld. She could move freely over the entire world, from the comfort of her room. As Kiku immersed herself more and more in the DgtWld, she became further detached from her real-world responsibilities. Her grades took a sharp decline and her parents were taking note of her further reclusiveness.
Kiku was hard-pressed by her parents to take part in some kind of club or sport. Though her interests were few and far between, Kiku finally settled down and joined a manga club – where she could appease her parents and still spend her days doing next-to-nothing. As the DgtWld became more and more pervasive during her high school years and as crime rates were dropping dramatically, she took to aimlessly wandering around the districts of Tokyo in her time outside of school and exploring the DgtWld.
When Kiku had graduated, she was bottom of her class, though she shrugged it off. After school she took up temp work as a courier for a few years – bicycling through the streets of Tokyo, carrying packages between large corporate offices, bureaucracies and popular media outlets. Though she might not have been as fast as her co-workers, she caught the eye of the Gvn for her long-term experience with the DgtWld and her discreet work in parceling for the Gvn on occasion and when she turned twenty they gave her a call and made her a Corrector.
Kiku was more than happy to become a Corrector, the high pay meant good food, a nice apartment, and a steady flow of alcohol – all for what seemed like extremely light work. Though it might not have been all that light, it was definitely a better gig than pedaling through the crowded streets of Tokyo. Having only been a corrector for a year, however, Kiku is likely the most junior of her group and not yet fully-adjusted to Correction. She’s a lot less reserved now than she was before her employment, largely because of the close-knit relationship of the Correctors.
@TalijaKey
So it's more like a mace in size and weight, but it's also shaped like a hammer on the end and also has a chain on the end. Sounds pretty kickass
@Genkai Yeah, I can totally move spells around, I had to tweak the exertion requirements while making the spells so I probably just overlooked something :P I'm going to leave the fists as low level though, but make them one time use like the shields
She's probably not selfless, not entirely. Under like the right circumstances she might do something like that, but not all of the time.
And uh, I could move her up to 22 too. Is uni an absolute necessity? I wasn't planning on having her have school after high school >.<
Okay, so yeah, Kiku is her given name. I guess it gets a bit confusing considering that surnames usually come first in Japanese and there's like no consensus on which order it should go.
I added a few spells that would work with her being the youngest of the bunch as well as an explanation of how I'm going to work in exertion. I got rid of the weapon traits and put in descriptions of spells to better explain what I was going for. The idea is now that she has skills to protect herself and deal damage, but she can only do one at a time. Being a jack of all trades was more about how she develops new spells, she doesn't choose offense over defense or vice versa, but that means that she can't develop high level skills unless she decides that offense is more important than defense (or vice versa). I'm going to see how the RP goes before she decides which is more important.
I tweaked her laziness to make it more like "I don't have anything I want to do, hit me up whenever" instead of "I don't want to do anything, don't bother me"
Her recklessness is more putting herself at risk than anyone else, so I think Gvn can give it a slide and she definitely doesn't drink while on duty. She's less reserved than before she joined, mostly because of the closeness of the Correctors. I put that at the end of her back story.
Sorry for making an edgy loner character. XP I wrote it half-asleep and it definitely didn't sound that fun this morning. I also changed her corrector portrait.
Will add more spells through roleplay as the need arises.
Age: 16
Frequency Online: I’ll be for a few hours between classes and for several hours outside of school.
Responsibilities Offline: I’ve got two classes a day and no major responsibilities in sight.
Favorite tv shows or books: Game of Thrones (I haven’t read the books), Brynhildr in the Darkness was really good, also general slice of life anime nonsense like K-On!, Haganai, and Papakiki.
Why do you like to write/RP: I’ve just always liked the idea of creating a character and giving them a story to tell. I’m a pretty stale person in real life, so filling a character feels natural to me, like it becomes my identity while I’m writing for them.
CHARACTER SHEET
Name: Yukimura Kiku
Alias in the DgtWld: Glitch
Age: 22
Weapon of Choice: Magic Spells, she can formulate different ‘magic’ effects in the way that other Correctors formulate weapons.
Low: Low exertion is characterized by mildly irritating effects – a subtle pressure in the sinuses, low ringing in the ears and some tiredness. All in all, low exertion is a safe zone with no adverse physical effects.
Low Exertion is seen after using five low level spells or one medium level spell.
Medium: Medium exertion is where physical exhaustion begins to develop – increased heart rate, mild headaches, and mild muscle aches develop in this stage of exertion. Medium level is still a safe area, with little risk of any harming physical effects.
Medium exertion is reached by the use of 25 low level spells, five medium level spells or one high level spell.
High: High exertion results in heavy physical exhaustion – muscle fatigue, throbbing headaches, drowsiness and nausea develop during High level exertion. Daily use of high exertion spells can lead to potential health risks. As such, once Kiku reaches this critical level of exertion, all spells above low level are locked until she recuperates outside of the DgtWld.
High exertion is reached at 125 low level spells, 25 medium level spells, or five high level spells.
Dangerous: Dangerous exertion is nearly impossible to reach, due to the lock-out that normally occurs at high level exertion, however it is possible for a long-time Corrector to develop a spell that completely by-passes high-level exertion and crosses directly into dangerous exertion. Dangerous exertion can lead to crippling disabilites in the real world including, but not limited to – lameness, blindness or deafness.
Dangerous exertion can only be reached by the use of a dangerous level spell.
Exertion Levels
Basic - Low – Medium – High – Dangerous
Magic Bolt: A slow-moving bolt of magic energy, explodes on collision, hitting enemies within 1m.
Shield: A temporary shield that blocks one incoming attack before dissipating.
Magic Fists: Kiku surrounds her fists with arcane magic to deal extra magic damage to enemies within melee range. One time use.
Arcane Pulse: A pulse of magic that deals damage and throws back all enemies within a 1m radius back 5m.
+ Inner Child: Kiku can amuse herself with seemingly nothing. She hops down steps, splashes in puddles and walks on top of low walls and absolutely adores animals and the little beauties of life.
+ Adventurous: Kiku is not afraid to step outside of her comfort zone from time to time, convincing her that it’s worthwhile is a whole other issue.
+ Confident: Kiku doesn’t know the meaning of shame and a bolstering self-confidence keeps her from falling down after failure, though she may not be quick to try it again.
+ Courteous: While Kiku has her quirks, she’s not without social graces. She won’t tidy her apartment if she knows someone is coming over; but, she’ll do her best to make them feel at home, in what little ways she can.
- Lazy: Kiku is slow to motivate and she lives a largely sedentary lifestyle, though once she’s up, she doesn’t do much either. She might wander around or plan to meet up with one of her co-workers, who would know that’s she’s free to do just about anything at any given time.
- Reckless and Irresponsible: Kiku has been dodging responsibilities like it was her job – and now it kind of is. To her there are few things more mundane than actually working for a living and household chores are done on an absolute-need-to-do basis. As Glitch, Kiku tends to be all-together reckless in her actions and is entirely unapologetic for it. In the real life however, this recklessness is best expressed by moderate alcoholism – while she doesn’t drink on duty, it’s hard to find a weekend when she hasn’t.
The Yukimura family was an upper-middle class family of five; Kiku’s father made his living as a corporate drone and her mother was a leading journalist for the Tokyo Shinbun. Together they had three children: Kiku was the oldest (born 2001) and her younger twin brother and sister, Aoi and Akane (born 2014). They lived a peaceful, domestic life, with all of the affordable luxuries of their times – including the first wave of DgtWld-compatible cell phones. Modeled after older flip phones that had dominated the Japanese mobile market, Kiku’s first phone was an absolute marvel of modern technology.
Her phone tapped into her life force, man and machine had become one. Unbeknownst to Kiku, she was one of the first people in the world made compatible to a radical new life in the DgtWld. She could move freely over the entire world, from the comfort of her room. As Kiku immersed herself more and more in the DgtWld, she became further detached from her real-world responsibilities. Her grades took a sharp decline and her parents were taking note of her further reclusiveness.
Kiku was hard-pressed by her parents to take part in some kind of club or sport. Though her interests were few and far between, Kiku finally settled down and joined a manga club – where she could appease her parents and still spend her days doing next-to-nothing. As the DgtWld became more and more pervasive during her high school years and as crime rates were dropping dramatically, she took to aimlessly wandering around the districts of Tokyo in her time outside of school and exploring the DgtWld.
When Kiku had graduated, she was bottom of her class, though she shrugged it off. After school she took up temp work as a courier for a few years – bicycling through the streets of Tokyo, carrying packages between large corporate offices, bureaucracies and popular media outlets. Though she might not have been as fast as her co-workers, she caught the eye of the Gvn for her long-term experience with the DgtWld and her discreet work in parceling for the Gvn on occasion and when she turned twenty they gave her a call and made her a Corrector.
Kiku was more than happy to become a Corrector, the high pay meant good food, a nice apartment, and a steady flow of alcohol – all for what seemed like extremely light work. Though it might not have been all that light, it was definitely a better gig than pedaling through the crowded streets of Tokyo. Having only been a corrector for a year, however, Kiku is likely the most junior of her group and not yet fully-adjusted to Correction. She’s a lot less reserved now than she was before her employment, largely because of the close-knit relationship of the Correctors.
I'm a highschool and community college student, getting by with two courses a day and too much free time on my hands. Living the dream.
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