HeresyOfTheFallen

Yamamura Academy's Basketball Club

Killer_Instinct1 said
url=http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/179/6/4/64d0baac2722043a047d4af077f2cbc3-d552lqk.jpg
Name:Kimura Renime
Age:15 (First Year)
Sex: Male
Height: 169.cm
Weight: 65cm
Specialty: 3pt shots for shooting he doesnt need to be open he never misses from mid range
Personality: He believes in his teammates in every way if they want a chance he gives that chance to them he is not into leadership he is just friendly
Bio: After palying in America for a year Kimura went back to his home.He told himself he will never play basketball again he doesnt want to lose but basketball wants him back and he misses basketball so he signs up to Yamamura Academy's Basketball Club

Just showed everything that needs fixing I think.

Yamamura Academy's Basketball Club

QT said
Your character has the same first name as mine. If you want to change it to prevent confusion that'd be cool, if not it's fine. Only thing I'm really concerned about is his ability/speciality. If he never misses from mid range, then how will he be stopped? Evedentially we can just pass him the ball all the time to secure a win. I don't mind him specializing in 3 pointers, but I can't have him be unstoppable at them.

He could still be defended against, but yeah it's a little OP. I build my characters around my specialty, but he just threw it in so he can easily change it.

Yamamura Academy's Basketball Club

Go ahead with timeskip to afternoon.

Yamamura Academy's Basketball Club

I wasn't planning on any more, I normally just do 1-3 now. Yeah let's timeskipify.

Yamamura Academy's Basketball Club

Michiko gave another one of her weak smiles at Izumi as Michiko took the card and put it in her pocket, then noticed the arrival of Ryuki, or the Shadow. He was remarkably difficult to get information on, all Michiko had found was his name, his title as 'Shadow' and his quite impressive record in middle school. However Michiko didn't talk to him as he seemed pretty creepy.

Responding to the captain, Machiko continued, "Okay, I'll sign us up, and I think I'd prefer lessons with the captain, no offense Izumi," while she listened to the rest of the pep talk. Masaru laughed and said, "Nice pep talk man, let's get one more guy then we can go ahead and win the championship!" While Masaru said that, Rikyu quietly slipped away.

Yamamura Academy's Basketball Club

I've done 7.

Yamamura Academy's Basketball Club

Masaru reacted quickly and recomposed himself, calling out, "Not bad my little flower!" with a smirk. He then muttered, "Thanks for the move princess," so quietly only he could hear. Michiko said, "Sure, you can be assistant coach," with a smile that faded at what the captain said.

While Masaru smirked at all that is happening, Michiko said, "O....okay captain, I'll play," quite nervously, worried that her lack of skill will result in Masaru's torment, or worse, Teshira-sempai's disappointment. "Teshira-sempai, could you...... could you... could you help me train a bit? I know how to do skill building but some one on.... one on one games would help if you were my...... my....... my opponent..." Michiko then asked.

"There's no need," a voice said, coming from behind the group. Rikyu stepped forward and pointed at a sheet right in front of the captain. "I was the first to sign up," Rikyu added, and Masaru laughed. "Hey Rikyu, you came here? Maybe with the shadow here we won't be as bad off as I thought," he said, publicly declaring Rikyu's identity as the mysterious player who worked as an invisible shadow to strengthen the middle school team who came second twice, one year when Masaru was in the team.

Yamamura Academy's Basketball Club

RumikoOhara said
Watch calling Izumi pretty names, she doesn't react well to being patronized and she does bite LOL

I could see that, and Masaru's probs gonna learn the hard way.

Yamamura Academy's Basketball Club

Name: Rikyu Somaka
Age: 15 (First Year)
Sex: Male
Height: 5"2'
Weight: 122lbs
Specialty: Rikyu's specialty is of 'misdirection', in that in multiple ways he can manipulate people's attention away from himself, he has done it so much it is a subconscious action he takes. On the court he can use this for magnificent steals and passes. However his dribbling skills are average and his shooting skills are terrible, only able to do lay-ups competently.
Personality: Rikyu's specialty matches his personality, Rikyu does not like to talk to people and avoids attention, often using the same skills he uses on the court to keep to himself. He isn't shy though, he isn't afraid of talking, just preferring not to.

Yamamura Academy's Basketball Club

Smiling at the newcomer girl who really seemed to know how to make an entrance, Michiko said, "Hello, I don't think we have a girls team but.... YAH!" with the finish being a reaction to the back of a blonde-haired head in front of her face.

Masaru gave a seemingly warm smile and said, "Hello my dear, are you lost? This is the basketball club, what are you looking for my delicate little flower?" while comically leaning sideways, not realizing this young woman's interest in basketball. Right after he finished speaking Masaru began to move his hand to Izumi's cheek, looking for signs of retaliation.