Well that's basically the point. The natives of verset are loyal because their lives are better than those kingdoms that fell. The soldiers were described perfectly. Picture the united states. Its similar people join the military for food and drink. But I'm not making a stab at the united states. I want termoil in the land I don't want it to be peachy and fun. I want it to be dark and terrible. The king is incredibly wealthy which does give him strong allies because greed conquers all.
I based a lot of this kingdom on Rome. Though I sorta based its military off of the US where people join for all sorts of causes. He has a grand tower because he lost his way and builds beautiful things not nesessary things. I really enjoy the way you described things. Maybe you should turn to a reble instead of a crown supporter.
I wanted it as of right now, I wanted the lords to fear open war because there wasn't enough support in the rebellion.
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Yea sorry, when I created this I had a great layout in my head. But when It came time to putting it together I couldn't think of a single thing. But i was thinking you wouldn't be completely soverign but you could still make your own laws. Similar to a state which the King is the federal government and the state is you.
Also I updated the story. Adding a little too it. I'm making the king more of a tyrant who means good but goes about it wrong. feel free to re-read it.
Name: Abast Reylds
Age: 53
Description: Despite age he looks quite young, He its tall, and handsome, his body is still well muscled from his younger days. He has long blond hair with a mustache and goatee. In the later years he has been seen as a womanizer after his first and second wives failed to give him born mages he has recently been sleeping with almost any Lady of magic birth to give him a heir. With the womanizing he has slowly become more and more brutal, raising taxes on the non-mages, he has been for no explained reason finding those who can bond people with magic and throwing them into the dungeon. He has formed three massive labor camps for the fallen kingdoms where he works their inhabitants to death. His mind has grown dark and his power becoming over bearing.
Rank: King
Magic ability: Ability to manipulate peoples wills through his words.
Weapons: None.
Nation: Kingdom of Verset
Banner:
Castle: A massive castle which stands at the center of the kingdom. It rises into the sky each section of castle taller than the lest with the cetner being a massive tower that stands over the city.
Lands: The city streatches so far that what little lands there are, are made up of solely farmlands to feed the massive city. The city Orthag is fed through tributes and leavies from the surrounding fiefs.
Specialty: Ruling, at somepoint all nobles have lived in Orthag.
Military: The military is vast, and well trained. The soldiers are professional and have tutors and trainers from around the country. There are Mage knights, Bonded soldiers and the regular military where it takes a minimum of four years of training before a candidate is eligible to join the ranks. The military is very well rounded and seen as the pinocle of military power.
Culture: The culture varies due to the mass amounts of immigrants and emigrants.
Other:
Also I updated the story. Adding a little too it. I'm making the king more of a tyrant who means good but goes about it wrong. feel free to re-read it.
Name: Abast Reylds
Age: 53
Description: Despite age he looks quite young, He its tall, and handsome, his body is still well muscled from his younger days. He has long blond hair with a mustache and goatee. In the later years he has been seen as a womanizer after his first and second wives failed to give him born mages he has recently been sleeping with almost any Lady of magic birth to give him a heir. With the womanizing he has slowly become more and more brutal, raising taxes on the non-mages, he has been for no explained reason finding those who can bond people with magic and throwing them into the dungeon. He has formed three massive labor camps for the fallen kingdoms where he works their inhabitants to death. His mind has grown dark and his power becoming over bearing.
Rank: King
Magic ability: Ability to manipulate peoples wills through his words.
Weapons: None.
Nation: Kingdom of Verset
Banner:
Castle: A massive castle which stands at the center of the kingdom. It rises into the sky each section of castle taller than the lest with the cetner being a massive tower that stands over the city.
Lands: The city streatches so far that what little lands there are, are made up of solely farmlands to feed the massive city. The city Orthag is fed through tributes and leavies from the surrounding fiefs.
Specialty: Ruling, at somepoint all nobles have lived in Orthag.
Military: The military is vast, and well trained. The soldiers are professional and have tutors and trainers from around the country. There are Mage knights, Bonded soldiers and the regular military where it takes a minimum of four years of training before a candidate is eligible to join the ranks. The military is very well rounded and seen as the pinocle of military power.
Culture: The culture varies due to the mass amounts of immigrants and emigrants.
Other:
Character
Name: Ridark Ryven
Age: 23
Description: Lord Ryven is average in all aspects for the people of the Waulk; Brown hair, eyes, his hair is kept short and trimmed. He has light facial hair, his build is athletic and he stands just shy of six foot. His only noticeable features is the scar that runs from under his left eye and ends above his right brow. Though not seen in the kings court very often, he is still well known for a "Leading from the front" life style. Not afraid to get dirty with his men he often drinks and socializes with his people. Though in court he remains very quite and rarely puts his two cents in. He married very young and had two daughters both gifted in magic.
His magic is often seen as very uncomfortable for those around him, it leaves mages with a empty, hollow feeling that can make one nauseated or uncomfortable. As a result his not often called to court, and not often invited to balls or other social gatherings. Though he is seen as a very reliable supporter of the crown.
Rank: Lord
Rebels or Crown: Crown
Magic ability: Void of Magic ( radiates an Aura, that cancels all magic )
Weapons: Bastard sword named Nouthung
Nation: Waulk Lands
Banner:
Castle: A castle carved out of the mountain face that the Waulk Lands occupy a crevicein the mountain side, along with a few Plateaus, the castle is surrounded by a wooden wall. The lands slope upwards to the castle with Terrance farms occupying open spaces. The castle has its own personal river which runs underneath it and empties into the adjacent sea several leagues away.
Lands: Mostly farm lands and forestry. The Waulk Lands are stern and unforgiving having Abominations that roam the country side frequently. Its advised against traveling alone or parties less than five. Even though the base of the mountain is the most dangerous part the forest and plains nearby are also crawling with monsters of all calibers.
Specialty: The Waulk lands specialize in hunting and kill abominations, a specialty that has been theirs for the entirety of their existence. They fight in rag tag groups to bring down large prey.
Military: The soldiers are outfitted with light armor, spears and long-swords. They're like the rest of the Waulk youth, trained in fighting and some cases guerrilla warfare. They have highly trained archers capable of near inhuman shots. Their Calvary is weak at best, and their ground soldiers tend to be disorganized. The Waulk Lands People regard the fighting of other humans as distasteful and shameful. They break their war parties into three groups, the Horsemen who wear no armor, and wield a spear and axe. The Horsemen distract abominations and lead them to the ambush. The Foot Soldiers who wear minimal leather armor, cover themselves in Abomination bile and or blood to mask their scent, they take cover and wait for the single. At which they spring out with their spears and form a spear shield wall to impale the oncoming Abominations. The archers who wield long bows and short swords remain behind the footmen, and try to bring down the host before they reach foot soldiers. The military has about 10,000 people at full force. Though most of the time is hovering just above 5,000
Culture: The people of the Waulk are very self sufficient, and often times will refuse aid in the most dire situations. The Waulk Landians, have a strict code of honor which all people adhere to. Children are often times forced quickly to mature quickly due to the dangers of the land. They believe in procreate and often times have very large families that could range from eight to ten kids and in rare cases more. The average age upon death is roughly 45. The people of the Waulk are usually frugal, but twice a year they break habits and enjoy their solstice festivals.
Other:
Name: Ridark Ryven
Age: 23
Description: Lord Ryven is average in all aspects for the people of the Waulk; Brown hair, eyes, his hair is kept short and trimmed. He has light facial hair, his build is athletic and he stands just shy of six foot. His only noticeable features is the scar that runs from under his left eye and ends above his right brow. Though not seen in the kings court very often, he is still well known for a "Leading from the front" life style. Not afraid to get dirty with his men he often drinks and socializes with his people. Though in court he remains very quite and rarely puts his two cents in. He married very young and had two daughters both gifted in magic.
His magic is often seen as very uncomfortable for those around him, it leaves mages with a empty, hollow feeling that can make one nauseated or uncomfortable. As a result his not often called to court, and not often invited to balls or other social gatherings. Though he is seen as a very reliable supporter of the crown.
Rank: Lord
Rebels or Crown: Crown
Magic ability: Void of Magic ( radiates an Aura, that cancels all magic )
Weapons: Bastard sword named Nouthung
Nation: Waulk Lands
Banner:
Castle: A castle carved out of the mountain face that the Waulk Lands occupy a crevicein the mountain side, along with a few Plateaus, the castle is surrounded by a wooden wall. The lands slope upwards to the castle with Terrance farms occupying open spaces. The castle has its own personal river which runs underneath it and empties into the adjacent sea several leagues away.
Lands: Mostly farm lands and forestry. The Waulk Lands are stern and unforgiving having Abominations that roam the country side frequently. Its advised against traveling alone or parties less than five. Even though the base of the mountain is the most dangerous part the forest and plains nearby are also crawling with monsters of all calibers.
Specialty: The Waulk lands specialize in hunting and kill abominations, a specialty that has been theirs for the entirety of their existence. They fight in rag tag groups to bring down large prey.
Military: The soldiers are outfitted with light armor, spears and long-swords. They're like the rest of the Waulk youth, trained in fighting and some cases guerrilla warfare. They have highly trained archers capable of near inhuman shots. Their Calvary is weak at best, and their ground soldiers tend to be disorganized. The Waulk Lands People regard the fighting of other humans as distasteful and shameful. They break their war parties into three groups, the Horsemen who wear no armor, and wield a spear and axe. The Horsemen distract abominations and lead them to the ambush. The Foot Soldiers who wear minimal leather armor, cover themselves in Abomination bile and or blood to mask their scent, they take cover and wait for the single. At which they spring out with their spears and form a spear shield wall to impale the oncoming Abominations. The archers who wield long bows and short swords remain behind the footmen, and try to bring down the host before they reach foot soldiers. The military has about 10,000 people at full force. Though most of the time is hovering just above 5,000
Culture: The people of the Waulk are very self sufficient, and often times will refuse aid in the most dire situations. The Waulk Landians, have a strict code of honor which all people adhere to. Children are often times forced quickly to mature quickly due to the dangers of the land. They believe in procreate and often times have very large families that could range from eight to ten kids and in rare cases more. The average age upon death is roughly 45. The people of the Waulk are usually frugal, but twice a year they break habits and enjoy their solstice festivals.
Other:
Rules
1. I have final say
2. Don’t argue
3. Try to follow the setting
4. Don’t overpower your kingdom
The year is 1008 After Founding the number of Born Mages has decreased over the last thirty years leaving the noble houses with few heirs and even fewer leaders. Blooded magic has increased tenfold, and the Rune mages have been being mysteriously killed. The abominations have been increased slowly over the years making the roads very dangerous. King Ryelds Has been ruling for the last thirty five years, and is approaching his fifty-fifth birthday And has called all the lords and ladies of the land to appear at his gathering in the capital.
The rest of the land has slowly risen to turmoil as the non-mages fight to gain any privilege or authority in the land. There have been several rebellious movements that have drawn the attention of the more militant lords to defend the kingdom. In the last twenty years the king has conquered many sovereign kingdoms and forced them under his banner. The people of those lands are generally treated very poorly by the kings military. King Ryelds has two more smaller kingdoms to conquer before he owns the entire continent. Both those kingdoms formed an alliance which has been slowly holding back the King.
Other than that its pretty free, I sort of see this as a half nation, half casual. So go wild, go free. And if you have questions message me.
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Sweet Sweet, totally meant to say do I have to be approved to start posting bahaha
Threw mine out, does it have to be approved to be posted?
Hello.... I'm back! And.... I'mma still make a nation
Name of nation: Yverun Imperium
Species: Yverun
Species Description: Yverun stand at 2.5 meters/8m on average. They have similar builds to humans, they have opposable thumbs, They lack visible ears, and their nose consists of two small slits on the face. Their eyes are naturally able to see in the dark, they use a secondary eye lid to allow them to see during the day. They're majority carnivores though have been known to eat a little bit of vegetation with their meals. They virtually have no fatty tissues, their skin is made up of tiny opaque scales which gives them a slight blue tint. Their muscles are hard and strong they can lift on average 210lbs/95kg also able to sprinting at speeds of 36/57 miles per hour/Kilometers per hour. They have two sets of lungs a large set which naturally breaths their home world air which is mostly hydrogen, argon, and small amounts of oxygen. The small lungs are unused except for when adapting to a new world. They use the smaller lungs to adapt their bodies, and then eventually their larger lungs take over. Males possess no hair, while the rare female haves long tendrils that wriggle constantly making it look like long flowing hair.
Description of government: A patriarchal totalitarian republic: A lead male rules over the entire Imperium, though the senate can over rule his decision, they are the over seers of the outposts and colony worlds.
Description of military: Every soldier is genetically constructed or cloned for a specific purpose. The military is the primary occupation for the Yverun. They focus building their colony worlds up and bettering their military technologies. The ships are built like swords, very thin, tall and long. They build their ships with a "seamless" design. Weapons and hanger bay doors are sealed until ready for use and they emerge from the side or top of the ships. The military is broken into four parts: Navy, Ground Forces, Armor Corps, Special Augmentations. Each part has multiple parts making up the branch. Each Soldier, Shipsman, Armor Corpser, Augmentee wears advanced power suits which allow them to triple their natural abilities. Increases reflexes, eye sight, and command ability. Every Yverun has genetic modifications, and implants that can push the Yverun past a Yverun's bodily capabilities. The Yverun body suits are similar to their ships reactive energy shields and their seamless builds. They are equipped with a side arm and a sword. The side arm is a small particle pistol, capable of an hour of constant firing. The sword's edge is coated with plasma, giving it an unparallelled cutting ability.
1.) Conquest Class: With top of the line energy shields, Plasma cannons, Plasma guns, anti-missle technologies, and particle weapons.
2.) Scouter Class: A ship which focuses on speed and agility, rather than a high defense.
3.) Vanquisher Class: Focuses on offensive capabilities, featuring massive plasma cannons, Ion Guns, along with other weapons
4.) Syntha Class: Used primarily as a stealth ship, they feature acoustic radar, magnetic detection, sight detection, heat signatures, and audio signature blocking technologies. They feature twin plasma guns, scanning tech and light shielding technologies.
The bridge is in the center of the ship and the engines are hidden inside also they use exhaust ports to cause forward momentum.
Navy
- Ship Service
- Squadron Service
- Repair Service
Ground Forces
-Amphibious
-Drop Shock
-Ground Fighters
-Slaves
Armor Corps
-Mech
-Walkers
-Transport
-Artillery
Special Augmentations
-Black Corps
-Genetic Augments
-Outlast Project
Technological Overview: Their focus is plasma and particle beam type weaponry. They frequently absorb other species technology into theirs if they deem it worthy or an improvement of theirs. They use powerful ion thrusters to move their massive ships, their smaller ships use a plasma based drive, outside of orbit while in orbit they use strong pulsating engines to keep them afloat in the atmosphere. Their shield technology consists of reactive "light" and energy shields. Depending on the incoming weapon the shielding reacts. The Yverun use advanced suits to assist in combat. The drop shock units drop in four Yverun pods. The sides of the pods can be detached and used as shields. They are equipped with heat shields to prevent them from burning up in the atmosphere. The ability to uplift species, and to terraform planets to their species. Their FTL drive essentially teleports their ships to plotted locations. It opens a small window that allows them to move great distances in little to no time.
Cultural Overview: The Yverun are a military society which has a strict honor system. They have set or formal religion. Every action they take is to honor their ancestors. At the age of manhood the Yverun male goes through trials to prove himself worthy to pick an ancestral blood line to honor. Its consists of A verbal knowledge of the line they wish to honor dating back at least ten generations, A trial by combat they face each other using Non-activated swords, hammers and other melee weapons, the victors are dropped off on the moon of their former home world. After 720 hours they're picked up from the moon. They write their story into the book of ancestors, and their name is added to the ancestral line.
The Yverun refuse to give up on anything. During times of war they sacrifice their lives to honor their ancestors. Every military victory or accomplishment is added to their story for future generations to read. The greatest achievment is to have their memories, personality, and their DNA permanently saved into the Archives Of Hero's.
The females of the Yverun farm, and take care of the rest of the jobs. They honor their ancestors by creating beautiful creations, and doing their part. Though very rarely females can become apart of the military.
The Yverun have different names for each occupation. A Soldier is Yverun-ol, A Shipman is Yverun-un, Armor corpser is a Yverun-fu, A Augmentie is Yverun-sol
The Yverun mostly live on their ships, the colonies are used to produce ships, supplies and other things. They rarely live upon planets because of the state of their solar system.
History:The Yverun conqured their entire system, a majority of the planets are either dead or have become devoid of life. There are only four planets in the entire thirteen planet system that are able to be inhabitable by their species. The Yveron have established outposts, and small bio-domes on the dead planets. These planets are mostly mined for their minerals. Before the Yveron's conquest there were almost ten inhabital planets, each needing only minor terraforming to make it habitable for the Yverun. Though most of the planets held creatures which had potential to become sentient. The Yverun at the time were not the military beings they are today. They were split into two ruling bodies, Military and the Planetary council. The Planetary council wanted to uplift the creatures and help them advanced while the military wanted them to be used as slaves. The resulting Thousand year civil war, destroyed many planets, species and the lives of billions of Yverun, and Yverun-il. The war ended almost five years ago.
(WIP ish)
Name of nation: Yverun Imperium
Species: Yverun
Species Description: Yverun stand at 2.5 meters/8m on average. They have similar builds to humans, they have opposable thumbs, They lack visible ears, and their nose consists of two small slits on the face. Their eyes are naturally able to see in the dark, they use a secondary eye lid to allow them to see during the day. They're majority carnivores though have been known to eat a little bit of vegetation with their meals. They virtually have no fatty tissues, their skin is made up of tiny opaque scales which gives them a slight blue tint. Their muscles are hard and strong they can lift on average 210lbs/95kg also able to sprinting at speeds of 36/57 miles per hour/Kilometers per hour. They have two sets of lungs a large set which naturally breaths their home world air which is mostly hydrogen, argon, and small amounts of oxygen. The small lungs are unused except for when adapting to a new world. They use the smaller lungs to adapt their bodies, and then eventually their larger lungs take over. Males possess no hair, while the rare female haves long tendrils that wriggle constantly making it look like long flowing hair.
Description of government: A patriarchal totalitarian republic: A lead male rules over the entire Imperium, though the senate can over rule his decision, they are the over seers of the outposts and colony worlds.
Description of military: Every soldier is genetically constructed or cloned for a specific purpose. The military is the primary occupation for the Yverun. They focus building their colony worlds up and bettering their military technologies. The ships are built like swords, very thin, tall and long. They build their ships with a "seamless" design. Weapons and hanger bay doors are sealed until ready for use and they emerge from the side or top of the ships. The military is broken into four parts: Navy, Ground Forces, Armor Corps, Special Augmentations. Each part has multiple parts making up the branch. Each Soldier, Shipsman, Armor Corpser, Augmentee wears advanced power suits which allow them to triple their natural abilities. Increases reflexes, eye sight, and command ability. Every Yverun has genetic modifications, and implants that can push the Yverun past a Yverun's bodily capabilities. The Yverun body suits are similar to their ships reactive energy shields and their seamless builds. They are equipped with a side arm and a sword. The side arm is a small particle pistol, capable of an hour of constant firing. The sword's edge is coated with plasma, giving it an unparallelled cutting ability.
1.) Conquest Class: With top of the line energy shields, Plasma cannons, Plasma guns, anti-missle technologies, and particle weapons.
2.) Scouter Class: A ship which focuses on speed and agility, rather than a high defense.
3.) Vanquisher Class: Focuses on offensive capabilities, featuring massive plasma cannons, Ion Guns, along with other weapons
4.) Syntha Class: Used primarily as a stealth ship, they feature acoustic radar, magnetic detection, sight detection, heat signatures, and audio signature blocking technologies. They feature twin plasma guns, scanning tech and light shielding technologies.
The bridge is in the center of the ship and the engines are hidden inside also they use exhaust ports to cause forward momentum.
Navy
- Ship Service
- Squadron Service
- Repair Service
Ground Forces
-Amphibious
-Drop Shock
-Ground Fighters
-Slaves
Armor Corps
-Mech
-Walkers
-Transport
-Artillery
Special Augmentations
-Black Corps
-Genetic Augments
-Outlast Project
Technological Overview: Their focus is plasma and particle beam type weaponry. They frequently absorb other species technology into theirs if they deem it worthy or an improvement of theirs. They use powerful ion thrusters to move their massive ships, their smaller ships use a plasma based drive, outside of orbit while in orbit they use strong pulsating engines to keep them afloat in the atmosphere. Their shield technology consists of reactive "light" and energy shields. Depending on the incoming weapon the shielding reacts. The Yverun use advanced suits to assist in combat. The drop shock units drop in four Yverun pods. The sides of the pods can be detached and used as shields. They are equipped with heat shields to prevent them from burning up in the atmosphere. The ability to uplift species, and to terraform planets to their species. Their FTL drive essentially teleports their ships to plotted locations. It opens a small window that allows them to move great distances in little to no time.
Cultural Overview: The Yverun are a military society which has a strict honor system. They have set or formal religion. Every action they take is to honor their ancestors. At the age of manhood the Yverun male goes through trials to prove himself worthy to pick an ancestral blood line to honor. Its consists of A verbal knowledge of the line they wish to honor dating back at least ten generations, A trial by combat they face each other using Non-activated swords, hammers and other melee weapons, the victors are dropped off on the moon of their former home world. After 720 hours they're picked up from the moon. They write their story into the book of ancestors, and their name is added to the ancestral line.
The Yverun refuse to give up on anything. During times of war they sacrifice their lives to honor their ancestors. Every military victory or accomplishment is added to their story for future generations to read. The greatest achievment is to have their memories, personality, and their DNA permanently saved into the Archives Of Hero's.
The females of the Yverun farm, and take care of the rest of the jobs. They honor their ancestors by creating beautiful creations, and doing their part. Though very rarely females can become apart of the military.
The Yverun have different names for each occupation. A Soldier is Yverun-ol, A Shipman is Yverun-un, Armor corpser is a Yverun-fu, A Augmentie is Yverun-sol
The Yverun mostly live on their ships, the colonies are used to produce ships, supplies and other things. They rarely live upon planets because of the state of their solar system.
History:The Yverun conqured their entire system, a majority of the planets are either dead or have become devoid of life. There are only four planets in the entire thirteen planet system that are able to be inhabitable by their species. The Yveron have established outposts, and small bio-domes on the dead planets. These planets are mostly mined for their minerals. Before the Yveron's conquest there were almost ten inhabital planets, each needing only minor terraforming to make it habitable for the Yverun. Though most of the planets held creatures which had potential to become sentient. The Yverun at the time were not the military beings they are today. They were split into two ruling bodies, Military and the Planetary council. The Planetary council wanted to uplift the creatures and help them advanced while the military wanted them to be used as slaves. The resulting Thousand year civil war, destroyed many planets, species and the lives of billions of Yverun, and Yverun-il. The war ended almost five years ago.
(WIP ish)
Hello, hope its not too late to jump in.
silly as it id, I'm back. :/
Name: Hal Jager
Age: 27
Appearance: Hal stands at Five feet eleven inches. He has a broad stocky build. He has brown hair that has grown shaggy, and a beard to suit. He wears a worn white and blue baseball cap, a raggedy green t-shirt and a thicker long sleeve shirt underneath. He wears old blue jeans and brown boots. He carries a large backpack for gathering.
*Personality: WIP
*Back Story: WIP
Job: Game Warden ( Wilderness survival )
Skill(s): Pilot, Aircraft mechanic, Hunter ( Rifle )
Food: Two cans of dog food.
Weapon(s) Fire Axe, .357 S&W Revolver
Equipment: Flint, Rope ( 20ft ), Water Canteen
Age: 27
Appearance: Hal stands at Five feet eleven inches. He has a broad stocky build. He has brown hair that has grown shaggy, and a beard to suit. He wears a worn white and blue baseball cap, a raggedy green t-shirt and a thicker long sleeve shirt underneath. He wears old blue jeans and brown boots. He carries a large backpack for gathering.
*Personality: WIP
*Back Story: WIP
Job: Game Warden ( Wilderness survival )
Skill(s): Pilot, Aircraft mechanic, Hunter ( Rifle )
Food: Two cans of dog food.
Weapon(s) Fire Axe, .357 S&W Revolver
Equipment: Flint, Rope ( 20ft ), Water Canteen
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