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Persona - The True Self

Will get to work on a post later. Edit: Couldn't find any inspiration/Struggling to come up with something and tired, so I'll try again tomorrow.

Persona - The True Self

<Snipped quote by I-Am-X> Everything past the third-years being dickbutts is "wrong". I guess for the actual revision, Akira'd tell Mika whilr Rokoru's off grabbing something, and the flashback would be the revision?

@Sen

So while Rokoru is off grabbing something, got it. Now I got to think of something to make Rokoru look even worse. Hmmm... I try to come up with a post later.

Persona - The True Self

His honor has now been restored.

Persona - The True Self

Haha It doesn't matter. They're just story fodder anyway. Silly Rokoru is trying to end the story early. With the text that comes after the 1st flashback wraps up, where do I make his 'correction'? The beginning part of the post and assume the following text follows after the revision?

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Oh geez, my post kinda sounds like the start to some kind of yaoi manga or something. But the point is that I did in fact post. Hopefully we can finish this little story before everyone finishes what they're doing and we're stuck awkwardly prolonging a time skip.

@Sen

I've continued the flashback but wasn't sure how much exactly to put or what exactly to say but I've post. Let me know if it's good or not, I can always edit if you need more. Introduced some of the upperclassmen and you can do whatever you want with him in your next post. I just figured this first flashback would be to showcase their first meeting and how the trouble started.

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Akira Kirigakure // Warakuma Shopping Complex Tuesday, April 14th, 2015 Glancing at Rokoru reacting to Mika's movements were comical. It's like he was a little kid. A mascot through and through, he thought to himself with a laugh, containing his laughter. But after Rokoru responded to him, he couldn't help but laugh out loud. "Trying to psyche yourself up, huh? Well, don't force it. I did want to see if your storytelling skills have improved in this time." he laughed again as Rokoru began to tell Mika the story. --- Warakuma High // Archery Range Monday, April 8th, 2013 After School It was just a typical practice for the Archery Club. School recently started so there was no tournaments in the near-future so it was more of kicking off the rust and for the newbies to get used to things. Not like such a period was needed for Akira, ever since middle school he would practice each and every day, firing hundreds of shots. He always believed in having a great work ethic and always pushed himself, believing failure wasn't an option. He wasn't that obsessive about it but it was practically the only thing that went well for him and it also gave him a sense of fulfillment. From the moment he walked into the range, eyes were already on him. While a first year, some of the members know of his feats from either being in tournaments together or from word of mouth. It was embarrassing but it's something that doesn't bother him anymore, haven't gotten used to it in middle school. Lining up next to an upperclassman with blonde hair, he pulled his bow back and began firing off shots downrange, hitting bullseye after bullseye as more eyes and whispers turned towards him. Just as he went for another arrow he felt a hand on his shoulder. Turning around was a tallish boy with a short faux mohawk. As the boy finished, Akira stood silent for a moment before answering with a blunt "Yea, I am." It wasn't his intention to come off rude and arrogant, it was just how Akira was. Also he didn't know what else to say to him since Akira wasn't exactly the social type, well around others. "Who-" Just as he was going to ask for the boy's name, a group of the upperclassmen walked up to them. "You hear that Banri? He just joined and the newbie already thinks he's better than us." One of them grinned, trying to act intimidating, Akira wasn't impressed and didn't react. "You've got that right, Hayato," Another responded.

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Postedddd Hopefully it works for Sen

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Akira Kirigakure // Warakuma Shopping Complex Tuesday, April 14th, 2015 After School He couldn't help but laugh at Rokoru's reaction, not to mention the fact that the lettering on his shirt became known, he laughed harder. "And here I thought you would like a submissive woman." He said in-between laughs before calming down as Mika interrupted their banter as she started asking questions about them. "Hate each other violently? Come now, think of it this way, Rokoru is like the Mascot character of the 'show'. Just poke him and watch him tick and the viewers are entertained. There's no hate, Rokoru is having a good ole time, now aren't you?" He said with a smug grin before laughing again when he glanced at Rokoru's shirt. Not done with her questioning, Mika moved onto round two as this time she aimed her questions right at Akira. "You know know how to make a boy blush, huh?" He joked at Mika. "Haven't you heard? I'm cold, cruel and vicious. One who only cares about themselves, A Delinquent. Teasing a girl or two isn't beneath that reputation. There's plenty of people who can corroborate that Right, Rokoru?" Glancing at Rokoru as he was straightening himself up.

Persona - The True Self

Will try to work on a post tomorrow, got seriously delayed.

Persona - The True Self

<Snipped quote by I-Am-X> Hrm. Maybe it'd be best if we'd do like a collab post or something? Like how our forefathers (Savo?) did. We could do it all flash-back, but that'd be a little awkward considering it'd be only a couple scenes as opposed to them explaining the whole thing? Them explaining it fully would be more over-all better, but some flash-backs would be better for establishing/explaining their relationship... Maybe Grand Manga Explanation would be the best MO. I'm just a little concerned that it'd be a less sufficient explanation as opposed to a literal explanation.

@Sen

Continuing in PMs