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Herro. I decided to post this here for blah reasons. If ya wanna talk with me for whatever reason we can chat here instead of PMing me, because PMing is for nooblets.
Upon realizing that the person who broke his solitude seemed passive, Jessie's body relaxed a little, but still tense, readied for the unknown. He looked at the tall man who towered above Jessie. Jessie's gaze went from his red gloves to his red shoes. The sudden clash of red against the paleness of the room would catch Jessie's eyes. "Hi.." Jessie replied looking up to the man's face his chin smooth as a baby's bottom Jessie thought. He lowered his head to look at his shoes again, "I'm fine." Jessie glanced over at the box that the man put down. He thought nothing of it and saw that the man put forth his hand toward Jessie. Confused, Jessie thought that maybe he wanted to shake his hand?

"Uhh.." Jessie muttered slowly reaching out his hand to meet the other's.
Jessie stared off into bright stars far off into the night sky. Jessie would always feel an overwhelming sense of loneliness on these types of nights. Jessie sat on his bed, his chin rested upon his hand. The light from the moon illuminated the empty room Jessie was in. Only the color of green showed on the I.V. monitor that clashed with the whiteness of the walls,door, and tiled floor. Jessie's hair, unkempt as usual when he'd wake up from his slumber, partly blocked his sight. He hated when it was too messy though. His fingers rushed through his hair in a vain attempt to comb it to a more suitable style that didn't bother him. Thought flooded the poor man. Thoughts that would come back and then disappear again from his conscious. His face tensed with stress and his fist clenched. The restraints upon his arms tugged and a clanking noise of the metal links hitting the post of the bed rang throughout the room. Silence soon overtook the room once again, but was soon broken as a voice rang out from behind the door.

"I'm coming in." the unknown voice said.

Jessie turned away from the the moon and the stars toward the direction of the noise. The door swung open. Jessie's body tensed.
There Kelvin I posted my character submission. I hope you are able to point out mistakes and if he's over-powered or not.
Character Name = Jessie Paala
Gender =Male
Race = Human
Age = 19, 26



Soul Branch = Starts out independent, but when story progresses he will join the Silence of Death or the Fury of War branches
Soul Weapon = P90 shaped submachine-gun. Bullets are of holy water, arcane etchings and a bit of his own concentrated soul aura contained within a 5.7 mm bullet casing. When shot at demons the bullets are of holy quality meant to seal the demon weakening it until it must go back into the Divide or Hell.



Cursed Equipment = N/A other than the pistol
Soul Radiance = Jessie's soul has no magical abilities that he's discovered yet. He can concentrate soul energies into object(How he makes his bullets.) His soul is the color of light blue or sky blue. His soul is unbalanced and unstable. The state of his soul shows through his facial expressions. More naturally attuned to wood elements.
Personality = Stoic and devoid of happiness yet admirer of the small,beautiful, unseen things. Jessie believes there is no light at the end of the tunnel, but actively looks for sources to prove him wrong. Sometimes, Jessie's happy and foolish nature leaks through his now cold demeanor.



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