Jessikka

The 'Correction' Operation - Accepted Characters

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Name: Ashley " Ash " Stryker

Age: 36

Rank: Veteran/Ranged

Race: Human

Appearance: Ash has tanned attractive skin, with a stoic but beautiful facial features, she has bright blue eyes that oddly change to a bright blood red when she get angry, she had a small black mole under her left eye, she has long flowing purple hair that stops at her lower backside, and most of it covers her forehead just above her eyes. Ash has an athletic build with strong leg muscles and curvaceous figure with well-endowed breasts, she has a slim waist, flared hips, and round rear. She has various scars along her back, chest, and abdomen, on the back of her neck she has a bar code tattoo that she had gotten with her unit.

The clothes she usually wears is a light armored version of the standard operations uniform, with lace up black boots, with a black balaclava that shows her bright blue eyes, along with a pair of black leather gloves. It would only be on Rare occasions that she would be seen wearing black short sleeved button up shirt showing her cleavage, with dual shoulder holsters holding one automatic pistol and semi-automatic pistol, she wears a pair of khaki pants with her same lace up boots but with the strings colored blue, with a silver wrist watch on her left wrist.

Rough appearance

Personality: Ash keeps her self stoic both mentally and in facial expression, it comes from a couple of things in life that happened to her, under her stoic farce she has posttraumatic stress of losing her entire unit, but with enough medication she got over it somewhat but is still plagued by the past from time to time. Unlike everyone else she doesn't understand jokes and has a very dry humor.

Ash is very skilled in hand to hand combat and firearms, having a vast knowledge of firearms and how to use them, she is also extremely intelligent and crafty, she is so skilled in both the two fighting styles that she can mix both up almost simultaneously. She harbors a lot of love for her single child, and she would kill anyone that would dare mess with her kid. Without her medication she can be very different and violent from little things, and she won't hesitate to just pull her gun on whatever is giving her problem and just shoot it.

Back story: Ash was one of the children brought up living the life of war, she was trained in shooting and hand to hand combat, and excelled in both being the top in her class and in her squad, when she reached the age of 20 she and her squad was assigned to be escort for scientist that would journey out of the city and out of the area to gather new research materials. On their first mission their helicopter was shot down, their pilot and co-pilot were killed, they slowly had to journey back to the city but almost everyday they lost someone, till it was just Ash on her own, while she was on her own she traveled day and night killing anything that gotten in her way between the city and when she had gotten back she climbed the wall free handed and was brought back into the city.

When she had a psyche analysis test they found out she had ptsd and gave her a temporary discharge to get herself together, during that time she did manage to get some of her sanity back and fell in love with a man that was a civilian weapon smith, that built weapons for military. Soon her discharge was extended after she had gotten pregnant and given birth to two twins, Ash and her husband took care of both their children, when the twins turned four, Ash had gotten a call asking if she would return to duty, she told them she would have to think about it but said she would most likely report back to duty.

Weapons of choice: H&K 45, Glock-18

Fighting Specialty: Ranged mostly

Strengths: Strength, Endurance, Firearms

Weaknesses: Stealth, explosives, Heavy weapons

FEARS:

-Death of any of her children (it would more than likely make her crazy)

-Seeing the City in Chaos or completely destroyed.

-Losing her entire squad (self explanatory)

-Being lost outside the city (Self explanatory )

OOC

Acivity; 8,5

Do you understand the History? - Yes

Do you understand the Base Layout? - Kinda

The 'Correction' Operation - Accepted Characters

Stitches(co-owner)

IC



"One shot, one kill."

Name - Maria 'Bullet' Hathaway

Age - 29

Rank - Ranged Trainer

Race - Eliron (Silver feline eyes)

Appearance - Long, straggly, silver hair tumbles down the back of Maria 'Bullet' Hathaway, a long fringe framing her piercing silver eyes. Her skin is pale, giving the impression of an albino standing before you. She usually wears her military uniform, and a red scarf to visually express her role as a trainer, or leader. On other occasions, one would be able to find her in a set of pale blue PJs whilst she wanders around the base. They're torn and muddied, and rumour has it that she once fought off a horde of Mistakes using only her pyjamas, no armour, and a pistol late one night at the Base.

Personality - Much to the irritation of Amelia Talirin, the Stealth trainer who unfortunately has to work hand-in-hand with the ranged team, Maria has a hard time grasping the severity of situations. She's usually quite outgoing and friendly, and despite being older than Amelia, sometimes a little bit childish. She takes delight in the little things and likes to make jokes.

Of course, the -very- moment you're assigned into her team, you'd notice that her easygoing nature is a farce. She isn't clumsy and dipsy; on the contrary, she's very cunning and almost equally as intelligent as she is agile. She generally doesn't have any issues keeping her soldiers in line because of her creative punishments.

Backstory - After joining the military 12 years ago, Maria started to show skill almost from day 1. Her odd determination fueled her passion to rise up in the ranks, almost having a big game with the entire situation. The amount of punishments she received were immense, and it became doubtful whether or not she was ever going to make it past "Warrior" rank. At the age of 17, Maria lowered her cheery guise a little, and dared to let her superiors see the mass of working cogs behind those silver eyes.The authorities liked what they saw and gave her a promotion to 'Deputy' 3 months later, where she started training the fresh recruits.

It became apparent now that she was overtaking her leader in terms of intelligence, having to correct him on various accounts. After a breach in the defences that caused a surprise attack and killed Darren Ollismith along with various other adept soldiers, The leader of the Ranged team was given an early retirement and Maria was promoted to the new leader.

This surprise attack caused the famous rumours of her 'Pyjama Battle' - it is said that she got up in the dead of night, and rather foolishly neglected to put on her armour because there wasn't enough time. Grabbing a couple of hand-pistols, she took the lead of the few struggling defence warriors who were awake at the time and added some new holes into the Mistakes swarming over the walls. Once her ranged team caught up, they found Maria fist-fighting a mistake who was pinning her down to the ground, out of ammo and grinning like a maniac.

Perhaps as a sign of her leadership abilities, Maria wears her pyjamas around the Base whenever there's nothing too serious going on. According to her, she wears them " 'Cause they're comfy."

Strengths(Max 3) - Aim, Intelligence, Observation.

Weaknesses(At least 3) - Strength, Poisons, Paralysis.

FEARS (VERY IMPORTANT- Bold main fear- at least 4) - Spiders, Blindness, Suffocation, Clowns.

OOC

Acivity (1-10) - 10 'cause y'know I'm a cohost~
Do you understand the History? - I bloody well hope so~~~
Do you understand the Base Layout? - Kinda. I'll learn it more in time.

The 'Correction' Operation - Accepted Characters

Jessikka (Owner)

IC

Name - Amelia Talirin
Age - 19
Rank - Trainer
Race - Human
Appearance - A tall, lithe girl with short, straight and side-swept hair. Green eyes and a few freckles over the bridge of her nose. She's often in black uniform with a red ribbon-belt tied loosely around her waist to symbolize her leadership place in the Stealth team.

PLEASE OPEN

Whew! Sorry if it's rubbish! ._.

Personality - She's a tough leader to say the least, constantly working everyone to their limits, however to balance this harshness she is kinder in person, she refuses to allow any of her initiates or warriors go through mental training without her present and will never turn someone in need of help down. She's sarcastic and funny and outgoing. She's like a big sister to a majority of the members of the 'Correction' Operation, even though she may be younger than them. She's the newest Stealth leader as the previous died before Amelia even turned 20 and may be slightly under-experienced.
Backstory - Born into the civilian live she watched the 'Correction' operatives leap around the city gracefully, but most of all she attempted to spot the stealth force. She was well off, as an apothecary's daughter she got medicines when she was ill and the high pay allowed a decent supply of food, so she trained, with every stick found. She got a large stick and called it a sword, broke it in half and dual wielded "Daggers" and even attempted archery, in which she failed at.

By the time she was ten she was tall and strong and she changed her look from pretty little girl to strong warrior in an attempt to fit in as soon as she joined the force. I mean that's what she was going to do! She flipped her hair to the side and cut it short, the ends jagged and uneven but that's what happens when it's cut by an inexperienced apothecary owner. At 14 she joined the Correction operation straight off and, due to her previous 'training' she took well and got a warriors promotion within a year, however back then there was a large attack at the time and promotions were easier to get. This changed a year later as some 'experienced' fighters had poor fighting abilities and required further training. By 17 she got a deputy's spot and loyally followed the previous leader - Darren Ollismith - until he died abrubtly in a 'mistakes' surprise attack. Amelia, under-prepared and under-qualified took the lead of the Stealth team and has been learning from other leaders since.

Fighting Specialty - Stealth. Dual wielding swords and daggers.
Strengths(Max 3) - Stealth, agility, fear resistance
Weaknesses(At least 3) - Brute force, ranged attacks, A pressure point on her side, by her stomach, Heavy weapons
FEARS (VERY IMPORTANT- Bold main fear- at least 4) - Water, harassment, rejection/loneliness, fighting dogs

OOC

Acivity (1-10) - 8-10??
Do you understand the History? - Yep!
Do you understand the Base Layout? - Yes again.

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Thank you! I want to encourage as many people as I can to join in on this! But they still have to go through an unbiased application assessment!

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As with other RPs we don't fancy starting until we have like 4? So only 1-3 more people to join then we can start! If you don't mind, that is!

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Okay. Let me assess it.

Straight away I see you still have 4 strengths, I see the "You name it I shoot it" strength is still there, I suggest moving that to Fighting style, a new area in the application so I can guess which team you'd be put on. Otherwise yeah... It seems okay, I see you lowered the severity of the addiction as he was willing to go to a sober area, just as long as he isn't taking the drugs too often in RP because there will be IC punishments.

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Wreck said
Whoops forgot about this issue.He wasn't exactly poor. His parents were higher ranking officials, and therefore I assumed they brought in more money hence the large house.I can make him be addicted to another made up substance, but that part of his character and I'd rather not change that aspect. The addiction factor is why he acts the way he does.And also, why is your Trainer 19? Doesn't she train the Warriors who have to be 18? Seems like a weirdly small age gap to me. Haha. I guess today is one of my more dickish days, sorry bout that.

" Haven entered the underground scene of street fighting to pick up a few tabs and gain funds" I just assumed, since you needed to acquire money which you did not have, that you'd be poor.

Addiction would be frowned upon in.. Any military situation, the military won't provide you with said substance and ( As far as my research has taken me ) You get paid after service while they pay off medical, financial and other government issued payments. So how you'd be able to fuel the addiction is questionable and either that is your plan and your character withdraws from it or perhaps you have another point to raise?

The only age requirement is 14 years or 24+ for veteran. There wasn't any mention (As far as I'm aware) for Warriors age. She became a warrior at 15 due to having had training previously and did not, in fact, need the training again. After 3 years she became a deputy and a year later the previous leader had died in a late night ambush attack, where Amelia took her place, under-trained and inexperienced.

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Thank you Spriggs <3

Spriggs27 said
Okay I edited Ash

Okay! So~ I had a look over, you added Stitches improvements and you updated the application without needing to be told so that's a nice plus <3

It looks like everything's all good and that you can be accepted!

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Hm.. 18 -Can- be do-able but the only way I can find around it is that before you were too unstable and the government only offered you a place if you got off drugs, then they'd offer you to Military and provide a drug free haven? Does that sound about right? But if you join at 18 you wouldn't be able to become a veteran til 28 and your character's 26.

And yes, you're right, there is a lot to be done on the first post, It's a pretty basic "cut-out" on what I want, I'm fleshing it up now.

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Mhm, there's only 3 because I wasn't sure how many would sign up so it might be too scattered.