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Tai Falkenburg said
In addition, the constant wars probably have rendered much of the infrastructure for trains (such as tracks) in ruins. And I imagine airships are limited to military or high official use only, maybe the occasional wacky trader.


Trains are used to transport goods in wars. They would revere their tracks and keep them clean if they knew what the hell they were doing.
Well things change in war. That's something to accept.
What about clockwork mechanisms? Good lord they do have clocks.
"Technology above the norm will always be seen by the regular populous as something magical."
Alright... but still... trains!
I believe in the show they say that Zecora comes from a savannah continent from the other side of the world. Or am I the only one that caught that?

From the wiki!

Twilight tells her friends that Zecora is a zebra and that she comes from "a faraway land".

The everfree forest is the next door neighbor of ponyville.
oh yah. They have trains. Steampunk is possible in MLP
Hot air ballons? Steampunk!
pedal powered flying machines!
All it would take is one little push to throw Equestria into the age of SteamPunk
During war technology shoots through the roof.
Now wait a second! Ten minute job my butt! Honestly, this is going from constructive criticism to outright rude. The player-made events of the IC should not decide whether a character is acceptable. I read the history. I know the rules and I know my gods were too much now. I will be making a new character and will spend the rest of the day on it. This time i'm going to discuss with you what I think you might not like so this doesn't happen again.
Plus, I can point out so many flaws in your 'stick to MLP' plan, like the fact Zebras come from the other side of the world, not the Everfree forest.
Then i'll stick to what I know, a regular ol' pony! O3O
... Well, the technology thing is a bit much i know that, he isn't the god of technology. I'll fix that. His main power is probably too much for his tier. I can't say much for what is going on in the roleplay but I will read into it. His appearance is too general for one, also very... cliche for a god. I think i'll give him a more down-to-earth appearance as well... maybe tan fur with a black mane and tail, and silver eyes? His military I can see why it would be unwanted.
And he might come off as already settled in. I see now. I will change this immeidiately.
Name- Marbles

Species – Alicorn

Gender: Male

Appearance: white fur with unreadable runes inscribed onto it. His mane is wild and unkempt and a silvery grey, along with is tail being the same way. His wings are a coppery color. His cutie mark is a closed book with a brain on the cover.

Spheres of influence: Mind, Knowledge, and Memory, Science, Technology. (if these last two are taken I will get rid of them)

Seat of Power: Manehatten.

Abilities:
Reading of minds: Can collect knowledge from mortal minds and read their memories. He can also read the minds of Alicorns, but must have physical contact with their forehead to do so. And they must be willing to let him.
Unmatched Illusionist: Can make mortal ponies see what he wants them to, but can only hold these illusions for so long. a minute to the max.
Unmatched Intellect: The other alicorns envy his immense mental capacity. While he is not the best, he is very intelligent.
Number of followers: Has an order devoted to him with thousands of acolytes and monks ready to die for their leader.

Divine Blessing: Photographic and flawless memory. His head priest and right hand man has claimed this blessing already.

Purpose: He will not admit it, but he came to be worshipped. But he also wishes to bring order to the land through removal of emotion and mortal whims. To have only logic. Think of how Vulcans in Star Trek are. That's what he wants for all ponies to be like.

Divine Flaw: Unable to feel emotion, cold and calculating to the core, almost mechanical in his decisions.
His body is frail and weak, and he is not as tough as other alicorns. Still can take more abuse then a mortal pony, but is weaker then most alicorns.

Other: Has a faction, named the Order of the Mind
Units; Call themselves the Order of the Mind Militia, or OMM for short.
Exiled: monks that felt an emotion, they are forced to fight as cannon fodder on the battle ground. They have their mouths stitched closed and their ears are torn off. They fight with crazed bravery to prove themselves worthy to stand by their god in the afterlife he promises them.
Knights: unicorns in heavy bronze armor, they use magic to fight with sword and shield. Trained from birth through brutal rituals, they are fearless warriors who go into every fight ready to die.
HellFire Turret: A turret that is purely stationary. It bathes the ground in Greek Fire.
SteamBreather: Another defense mechanism. It is a turret as well, it superheats water to a scalding steam then spews it out.
Medic: A unicorn in a protective suit of armour, has medical supplies to heal downed soldiers.
Technician: Drivers of the turrets and, equipped with a repeating crossbow. Usually unicorns or earth ponies.
WarBirds: The pride and glory of the OMM, they are armored gryphons that take bombs into the air and then drop them onto the enemy.
Flak Cannon: shoots shrapnel bombs into the air, useful for taking out mass air units like pegasi swarms. Stationary.
Warrior: Earth ponies in huge sets of armor powered by steam and water. They are powered by water and must stay in range of either a hose or another water source.
Slicers: Huge spinning saw blades that are mounted onto the bottom of a wall to destroy any attempt to climb it with ladders, and then turn the ponies to mince meat.
I know they are powerful, but as you can see only five units are able to travel distance, and only one is very powerful. They are defence heavy. I am willing to lower it down if need be. Just give me the word.
I appreciate your opinion. I am thinking up a new character as we speak that is more acceptable. Thank you.
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