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I've added some background music to the 1st IC post, for a little added flavor.
i love that remix omg i was actually using it while writing too xD
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i love that remix omg i was actually using it while writing too xD
i left it open ended but i can still make stuff happen as well!
Indigo spun around when he heard the sudden snaps of twigs and leaves followed by a big whump, catching the sight of Dan falling on the forest floor. There she is. Hawka hadn't gotten far ahead of them at all, what a relief. Or not, because she was just about to hit Dan with something nasty, it seemed. "Hey! Hawka!" Indigo fished around for her pokeball, dropping it in the process instead. Damnit!
Although it seemed like Hawka was about to charge Dan and angry over being tripped upon, such was not the case. Rather upset about something else, instead of charging directly for Daniel or retreating towards Indigo, she made a beeline into the bushes just as Indy managed to grab her pokeball. He wiped the sweat off his brow and groaned, feeling his heart rate shoot up again. Agh, why doesn't she listen? Hearing her soft peeps, he peered through the dense brush.
There was another pokemon! Indigo didn't know the name, but it reminded him of the Rattata in Kanto. This creature seemed to look vaguely like some kind of rodent with puffed out cheeks and large incisors. The eyes were even red like Rattata had, although much more intense. Hawka seemed to be talking to the pokemon. Though it was hard to tell from a human's point of view, she was in fact reassuring the pokemon, who was wagging it's tail and squeaking fiercely.
Who's that pokemon- oh wait I have a pokedex. Indigo retrieved the device and switched it on, the screen coming to life with a soft blue glow. An image of the pokemon appeared front and center, so high quality that it could even be zoomed in on to see the very bristles of fine fur. There was a text caption underneath but the pokedex began to speak.
Patrat, the Scout Pokémon. Using food stored in cheek pouches-" and Indigo quickly muted the dex. Alright that's annoying. Let's see... They use their tails to communicate with others... He frowned. She looked mad before... Is she arguing or something? "Hawka! Are you bothering that Patrat?" The Patrat in question jumped up before retreating into the tangled green and brown of the forest. Hawka shook her head fiercely, chirping, running back to Indigo and pecking at his laces angrily.
"You can't just go running off. Don't get mad at me," Indigo protested, then paused, suddenly feeling as if he were being watched. And indeed, they were. The Patrat had come out of the woodwork so to speak, and they were everywhere. And they weren't too sure about these humans in their forest. "Um... Wow there are a lot of you, aren't there?" He rose up from his crouched position and some of them scampered back into their hiding places. But some stayed, curious. A few held looks of polite interest while others seemed to be waiting for some eventual misfortune to happen.
"Let's make sure we don't disturb them..." Indigo said.
Although it seemed like Hawka was about to charge Dan and angry over being tripped upon, such was not the case. Rather upset about something else, instead of charging directly for Daniel or retreating towards Indigo, she made a beeline into the bushes just as Indy managed to grab her pokeball. He wiped the sweat off his brow and groaned, feeling his heart rate shoot up again. Agh, why doesn't she listen? Hearing her soft peeps, he peered through the dense brush.
There was another pokemon! Indigo didn't know the name, but it reminded him of the Rattata in Kanto. This creature seemed to look vaguely like some kind of rodent with puffed out cheeks and large incisors. The eyes were even red like Rattata had, although much more intense. Hawka seemed to be talking to the pokemon. Though it was hard to tell from a human's point of view, she was in fact reassuring the pokemon, who was wagging it's tail and squeaking fiercely.
Who's that pokemon- oh wait I have a pokedex. Indigo retrieved the device and switched it on, the screen coming to life with a soft blue glow. An image of the pokemon appeared front and center, so high quality that it could even be zoomed in on to see the very bristles of fine fur. There was a text caption underneath but the pokedex began to speak.
Patrat, the Scout Pokémon. Using food stored in cheek pouches-" and Indigo quickly muted the dex. Alright that's annoying. Let's see... They use their tails to communicate with others... He frowned. She looked mad before... Is she arguing or something? "Hawka! Are you bothering that Patrat?" The Patrat in question jumped up before retreating into the tangled green and brown of the forest. Hawka shook her head fiercely, chirping, running back to Indigo and pecking at his laces angrily.
"You can't just go running off. Don't get mad at me," Indigo protested, then paused, suddenly feeling as if he were being watched. And indeed, they were. The Patrat had come out of the woodwork so to speak, and they were everywhere. And they weren't too sure about these humans in their forest. "Um... Wow there are a lot of you, aren't there?" He rose up from his crouched position and some of them scampered back into their hiding places. But some stayed, curious. A few held looks of polite interest while others seemed to be waiting for some eventual misfortune to happen.
"Let's make sure we don't disturb them..." Indigo said.
No problem! I think I have a funny idea c: I shall make something up! And don't worry I won't auto-hit dan
@TheForgottenArc first I want to say I appreciate your post. However, i just want to caution you against controlling other people's characters.
Typically it is good rp practice to ask someone beforehand c: or you can pitch an idea "HEY is it okay if Dan trips over torchic and maybe torchic can get mad and try to attack Dan?"
Then the person you are responding with would respond accordingly. And you guys would plan out your actions accordingly. It can go anyway but I guess my main point is that it's a good idea to ask first. c:
Its alright tho, you don't have to edit your post! Just please be more careful in the future! :) all in all no harm done!
Case in point, you mention Hawka charges Dan. I don't want to auto-hit, that's when you say an attack connects without the other rp'er permission. So can I say that Hawka bumped her head against Dan's?
Typically it is good rp practice to ask someone beforehand c: or you can pitch an idea "HEY is it okay if Dan trips over torchic and maybe torchic can get mad and try to attack Dan?"
Then the person you are responding with would respond accordingly. And you guys would plan out your actions accordingly. It can go anyway but I guess my main point is that it's a good idea to ask first. c:
Its alright tho, you don't have to edit your post! Just please be more careful in the future! :) all in all no harm done!
Case in point, you mention Hawka charges Dan. I don't want to auto-hit, that's when you say an attack connects without the other rp'er permission. So can I say that Hawka bumped her head against Dan's?
@TheForgottenArcedited! sorry, thanks for being patient xD
@TheForgottenArcAH LEMME EDIT MY POST REAL QUICK THEN LOL
"Rest sounds like a good idea," Indigo replied. They had been walking for around four hours, though truthfully, Indigo didn't want to stop. He didn't want to run the risk of having to camp in a forest at night, and felt that a beach would be much safer. That, and a feisty Hawka he felt was sure to get into trouble if they stopped moving for too long. Speaking of... He looked around.
Hawka was nowhere in sight.
His heart plummeted. SHOOT! He took his eyes off her for two seconds-- ugh! He couldn't even hear her peeping. Where had she gone? When had she decided to go on her own way? He'd just seen her a minute ago! His heart was racing. "Alright, Dan, I think Hawka got ahead of us. Maybe we can press on for a little while longer? Maybe Twigs can rest in his ball for a little?" This was urgent.
Hawka was nowhere in sight.
His heart plummeted. SHOOT! He took his eyes off her for two seconds-- ugh! He couldn't even hear her peeping. Where had she gone? When had she decided to go on her own way? He'd just seen her a minute ago! His heart was racing. "Alright, Dan, I think Hawka got ahead of us. Maybe we can press on for a little while longer? Maybe Twigs can rest in his ball for a little?" This was urgent.
@TheForgottenArc per your post, how long have they been walking? twiggy was holding on for how long? because i have no reference for time lol. maybe in the future you can mention something like "Twiggy had been pulling and tugging at his shirt for at least an hour" or something. just helps make it easier for me to make my next post!
maybe they've been walking for like 3 hours? i think that's a reasonable time to get tired by.
maybe they've been walking for like 3 hours? i think that's a reasonable time to get tired by.
@TheForgottenArc I hope it wasn't too metagamey that indigo figured Dan was acting a little off. I figured since they were good friends indigo might be able to notice after some time. Let me know if i need to change it!
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