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The Fate of Lucumbro

@Pathfinder I'd be fine with that.

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@Pink Snorlax Probably shouldn't do anything short of one short paragraph but generally I trudt you not to go overboard or underboard. That post you made is good, but even half the length wouldn't be bad. As for max length? Well, no hard cap, but keep it reasonable.

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@Bishop Sure, move him on over. Though, I'm not sure why he would join up with our band of heroes, if you can think of a reason than go for it.

@Dragonbud "The Flopping Lightningfish"? Im not so good with the names thing.

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Oh and @Otakuforreal if you're still interested, MM hasn't showed up so you can take their place. If you do not wish to join any more, please inform me so I can pass the spot onto the next reserved backup.

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It's short, it sucks, but at least you all can post now.

@POOHEAD189 Unfortunately there is none, though I'll certainly keep you in mind if someone leaves.

@Bishop Assuming the "no movement constraints" is just an error you left in, I'd be willing to accept him if you chopped the instant repair. Also he needs a personality section, that too.

EDIT: Oh! So it's pretty much just a flavor thing than, no real "gameplay" type use? Then the repair stuff is fine.

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Fynn

In a sleepy village near the coast Lucumbro, all would seem fine to an outsider. No stories, no rumors, no horrifying tales. It was just a hamlet close to Firebird territory. Even if some of the citizens were standoffish, most would regard this as a good place to live. Currently, it was sunny, clear skies, an hour before noon. There were a small amount of people wandering about outside, running errands or some such. Overall, the perfect place for vagrants.

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Kait Arouraios

One such travelers was Kait Arouraios, who was traveling through, still on the lookout for a master Magus to apprentice. This town seemed promising though, a master by the name of Vivian seemed like she could be convinced to allow Kait to study under her. For now though, she was just stepping out of the inn she had slept in the previous night. Though she didn't have much money, there were fairly large spiders and rats in the cellar, which the student took care of, obviously pointing out the irony in the situation before hand. After said job, she had a free night in the inn, and sleeping in her own bed again felt great.

Kait's first order of business was to get some food, which the inn she had stayed in sorely lacked. But this was a fisherman's town, so there was no way there wasn't some delicious fresh fish to be cooked here, even if she had to light the fire herself. The rat began wandering the streets to find some form of vendor, unsure if the city's layout but still willing to find food.

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@Bishop Well, when you removed stuff, you just added more stuff. The armor is what I have the biggest issue with. It's strong, flexible, and self repairable. That, on it's own, is probably too powerful, but Lightmare also has 2 ranged options, and neither of them require stamina. Overall I'd focus on giving him a very defined role. You could go pugilist, focus on the fist-fighting, or focus on the sunlight attacks, or maybe even the armor.

@Footman That reminds me, I really should write up Highwind city just in case Kait ever returns. Also need to make a "Locals" section in the Characters tab to go with the Important people and objectives. But for now the most important thing is the first IC post.

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@Bishop I like that backstory a lot better, yeah. As for making him more on par with the others strength wise, I recommend toning down his armor, removing two of his abilities, and getting rid of either Weapon Proficiency or Martial Arts, and either Chosen One or Enforcer.

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@Dragonbud Well I was aiming for today, but that might not happen. If that's the case, hold me to getting it up tomorrow.

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@Bishop I'm going to have to say no to Lightmare, as much as I like the name. Every other character is just above average, the most important person on the team is a prince from a foreign land, and even he is about on the same level as other characters. A literal chosen one doesn't gel with the others. He also seems quite powerful, and this is just a personal thing but I dislike powers based on certain factors. We're going to be going into bandit hideouts and dungeons too, so half of the time those powers won't even be usable.

@pure493 Unfortunately, even if MM doesn't show up (which I don't think they are) @Otakuforreal was promised a spot. Unless Bishop declines to remake Lightmare or make a new character, I'll just have to inform you when someone drops out.