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Good, Its a good film but there is no war, I will add a outside threat probally however. Also when you post ideas can you say which faction you would be to help me work out the story line.
Okay... That sorta makes sense


They tell us we were the the only ones who survived the war. They built a wall around the city to keep out threats to us. This city was once called Chicago but now it is mostly known as the city. We are split into five factions. We are raised in one of them until our sixteenth birthday. Then we are presented with a test. It judges our personality. Then the next day we preform a choosing ceremony. At this ceremony we take a knife and cut our hand. Then a drop of blood is dripped into a bowl. There are five bowls with a substance inside that represents a faction. Once you choose there is no going back.

[hider=My Spoiler]The main factions/hider]

*Erudite,* the one and only faction dedicated to knowledge, intelligence, curiosity, and astuteness. It was formed by those who blamed ignorance for the war that had occurred in the past, causing them to split into factions in the first place. Their substance for the Choosing Ceremony is water. They wear at least one piece of blue clothing as they believe blue simulates the mind. They are the cities librarians, scientists and teachers.

*Agnegation,*being the one and only faction dedicated to selflessness and forgetting oneself for the sake of others. Their substance in the Choosing Ceremony are grey stones. They wear simple grey clothes with the only luxury being a watch, men cut their hair short while women put their hair in buns usually. They reject vanity and selfishness. They are civil servants and the ones trusted to run the govenment.

*Dauntless,* the faction dedicated to courage, bravery, and fearlessness. It was formed by those who blamed fear and therefore, cowardice as a cause of the problems society faced. It tries to fight cowardice by giving preparation and the ability to act during fear to its members. 
The members generally wear provocative black clothing, are pierced, tattooed and have a tendency to seek thrill and action. Their substance in the choosing ceremony are black coals. They are the warriors and peacekeepers. They are the only ones allowed to ride the train which they enter and exit by jumping on and off while the train is moving.

*Amity*, the one and only faction dedicated to peacefulness, kindness, forgiveness, trust, self-sufficiency, and neutrality. Amity was formed by those who blamed war and fighting for human nature's faults. Their substance in the Choosing Ceremony
 is soil. They wear red and yellow generally but there is no scrict dress code. They are the farmers and counsellers.

*Candor* is one of the five factions
 in the world of Divergent
, and was formed by those who blamed duplicity and deception for human nature's faults. Because of this, the Candor are known to value honesty, and their symbol is a set of unbalanced scales bound by a circle. Their substance in the Choosing Ceremony
 is glass. Its faction colors are black and white, and those are the colors they wear. They run the law courts.

[hider=Other factions] Divergent, Not actually a faction. They process traits of more then one faction and are feared. Erudite has started publicly hunting them down.

Factionless, These are those who don't belong. They are homeless and are supported by Abnegation for food and water.[/hider]

If you wish to be a faction leader, PM me and tell me which faction along with a character sheet, If I approve I will send you a link to the wikia page of that faction so you can understand more about it.

All Character sheets are to be put on O.O.C. And I will approve them there.

[hider=Character sheet]Name:
Age:
Birth Faction:
Current Faction:
Personality:[/hider]

So tell me what you think. This is a fanfiction of a book trilogy and film. If I see enough interest I will make this a actual roleplay.
Sorry Tryed getting this on Interest checks but it put it on roleplay lists.
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liferusher said
thats a good one


Well its a good point.
Well this is a highschool rp. That means theres always that girl who most boys fancy. As for the babies that depends what state the academy is in. I mean in Britain the age of consent is 16 but in America where the school is based it varies. That is a good question really. What state is Athalia in? Because laws vary per state and in Wales the drinking age is 18.
Right, Ironed the kinks out of my character finally.



Name: Kenshi Brett

Age: 17(Second year)

Gender: Male

Species: Human(Druid)

Powers: He can command things sacred to the Celts using the welsh language. This includes Iron, Bronze, The natural elements as well. He also can control his luck. This is due to his close relationship with Celtic deities. It depends on his emotions however. For example. If he is angry he is more likely to have a accident like stubbing his toe. If he is in a good mood than he has quite good luck.

Weaknesses:  He has a long ancestrial bloodline of druid and priests. Due to this his blood smells and tastes more desirable to vampires. He wears hoodies as this helps hide the scent.He also has a fear of spiders and falling.

Personality: He is very proud of his welsh heritage and learnt the language long before he discovered his spellcasting ability. He is depressed at tthe death of his parents. He gets aggressive easily at anything that offends them, or at least the memory of them. He is a good person at heart. He can be cheery when he wants to be.

Background: At 16 His house burned down. He was locked inside his bathroom. The house was wrecked but he was found coughing heavily, but amazingly unburnt. He was left orphaned and alone on the streets. One day some people tryed mugging him. As they took his money. They decided not to leave witnesses. One of them took out a knife while the other light a fag. In his frustration he screamed out in welsh. To his surprise the flames from the cigarette lit up and started burning the one who was watching. He decided to experiment. He yelled in welsh again. The knife did not come to him. But a iron pipe did. He managed to beat the other guy over the head with the pipe. Killing him. He fell to the floor. Ashamed at what he did. It was in that state that someone walked up to him. Touching him on the shoulder he told him about a school where they would teach him to use his power.

Studies: English, Maths, science, welsh and British history.

III

I scrapped the dhampyre bloodline.
Should I repost or edit the existing character sheet post?
Its frustrating trying to do it with my phone. But kay.
Sorry about that. (stupid phone) A druid is a celtic priest. He has power over things considered holy by. The ancient celts. Like fire and iron Thats the reason the steel knife did not fly into his hand(handle first, the blde would hurt) Also if you did look properly you would notice I mispelt lit in the part "light a fag." I tryed to change it but my stupid phone bugged out and would let me scrowl down to edit it.

It is a pain. I will probally Edit it so its more presentable on a text editor.
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