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    1. Korbanjaro 10 yrs ago

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9 yrs ago
Current We are each an extra in someone else's movie. But we get to decide if it's a speaking part.
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10 yrs ago
Currently looking for people for The Continental - Hoping we can get some traction going.

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I'm no stranger to writing and roleplays, having written in quite a few over the years. I try to put a lot of thought into my characters, and even more into the projects that I take on, and I hold myself to a pretty high standard. For me, the story is king, not my characters, and I write with that in mind. Inter-connectivity and relationships between the different characters in a roleplay are what make the writing interesting, and that means that writers need to avoid selfishly making their characters the constant center of attention. As such, I try to write by a very specific maxim: Write for the story, not for your glory. If you've got an RP that you think I might be able to add to, please feel free to shoot me a message. Glad to be here!

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I'll be posting soon - Apologies for the delay. Been trying to figure out how I want to get Alter into the story in a way that isn't "And then Alter followed Citrine and Hannibal into the secret underground base."

Expect a post from me later today.
Estylwen said
Alter is accepted.


Awesome! I look forward to rocking it with you guys.
Well, look at this! Awesome. Is there any room left for a former Obsidian hopeful to jump back into the ring? Playing a more desperate version of Alter would be a lot of fun.

I've tossed my character's profile into the Character Deposit.
I would still be interested, as well.
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Alright, I really want to do this roleplay, and I'm curious - Could we just start a conversation between our characters in perhaps a training simulation to kind of get the vibe going? Something that doesn't fully reflect any actual plot, but at least has the characters getting to know one another and laying out some backstory and history between them?

Just a thought.
"Benny, what's your Family like?"

"We hire people with strength," Benny responded. "The ones with brains usually get snuffed out pretty quick, ain't got no room for any ambitious fucks."

He indicated the pictures that Carter was holding. "Those pictures you shows me - we do it like that, but we got more style. Those cuts ain't deep enough," He seemed to beam with a little bit of pride. "I personally put the knife in one end of the neck connect with the spine and pivot off of it just so that..."

Benny's sentence was cut off by a metal coated fist knocking the side of his face, as Reverb entered into the conversation "You sick fuck, is that what happened to the pawn shop girl!? The old man in the fuckin' alley!? Huh!?"

Bit of a rage problem on this one, thought Carter. Going to have to keep an eye on him.

"Those," Benny spat, blood on his teeth. "Were minor infractions, I've done worse. Like I was saying, my family hires brawn not brains - got some issues with those fuckin' Gambettis, a few issues with the Greeks and Russians."

Makes sense. I may have to shake down some of Jugo's men later to get the full picture here.

Draza "The Jugo" Kavaja was the Russian equivalent of the former don of the Castelvatrano family - Ruthless, ambitious, and all-too pleased that the leader of his main source of competition had been removed from the picture. It was no secret that he was attempting to muscle in on Italian turf...

That was certainly an angle that Carter hadn't considered - If Jugo was pushing in on the West End, could it be he was weakening the competition? Could it be Jugo was trying to get a push in before someone, like say, Anthony Gambetti, got a foothold?

There were far too many factors to consider, here. And Carter would not be able to get much more usable information, especially if Reverb's violent displays were any indication.

Carter took note of the young man's outburst as he drove his elbow into a nearby shelf, driving a considerable dent.

Now there's evidence to leave at the scene. Sloppy.

Attention back to the perp at hand.

"Mr. Tramunte," said Carter calmly. "You've certainly given me a few things to think about."

Carter reached into his belt, and pulled a small item from it - An injector. He calmly placed the nozzle just under Benny's right armpit, while placing his other hand around the man's collar.

"This," said Carter. "Is a subdermal tracking device." He pulled the trigger, shooting a pressurized burst. Benny winced slightly. The area had a small mark on Benny's skin. Barely noticeable.

"You son of a bitch!" Benny was not amused. "What the hell did you just do to me??"

"It's a simple tracker. I'm curious about where such a gentleman like yourself is going to end up, and this'll let me keep an eye on you."

Carter turned to Reverb.

"He's all yours. Take good care of him." Carter walked to the back of the store, and stepped out, being sure that the door was locked.

With that, Carter walked towards the back of the shop, and pushed open the door, allowing the rain to patter on the ground as his walked away, the plumbing shop door slowly closing with a soft "click."
You know, we could always Shanghai it, and just write things up without him. It would certainly take a little effort, but we've got some of our own strings - Let's just see how things go, and if we have to write around some inactivity, we can do that.
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