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@pkken I'd still make the flight completely exclusive to while he's in his battle suit, other than that that part's looking better, I'll wait to see what Nightmare and Charlie have to say

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Interacting with @Kalas

"Marius."

He said with a small, flickering wave of his hand. He noticed the girl entering the room, attempting to give a smile if it was noticed. Seeing her fidgeting he frowned a little and his eyes glossed over with a slight red hue. His pen suddenly sprung up on the desk, writing out a message on a piece of paper which tore itself from his book, travelling across the room and laying itself neatly in front of Momo reading:

"
Second row
blue hair
come say hi
"

His vision looked back up to Karma with a smile

"Guess I'm showing my hand already, huh"

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She glanced back around the room, snapping out of her daydream. Catching in the corner of her eye the paper floating her eye twitched a little, already intimidated by quirk use in the classroom, as she shuddered a little to shake it off. Swapping hands to her right, she pressed it into her cheek and rested, revealing a red mark in the shape of a fist on her left cheek. Her gaze swung from person to person as she yawned again, smacking her face a little with her free hand as punishment for staying up too late.

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Interacting with @Kalas

He looked to the guy who sat down next to him, slowly lowering his foot from tying his shoelace. He raised his eyebrows and blinked, a little taken back by his announcing tone, feeling bad that nobody else responded.

"The important thing is we all managed to get this far... Let's try to keep it that way."

He reached into his bag, pulling out a notebook with a pen clipped to the spine ready for any quick starting of class. He slid the pen from the spine, spinning it around his thumb rather intricately, failing every few times he attempted to do so. He appeared to take much care in doing this, however looking back to Karma every now and again not wanting him to think he was ignoring him.

"What did you say your name was?"

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@pkken Yes, being almost identical to a canon character is a big problem. There's going to likely need some large changes to make the character more unique and slightly less super-powered from the get go.

- The amount of force your wind has/weight it can lift is rather high, it'd be better if at least at this stage in the rp that was cut down so you'd be knocking over robots in the entrance exam rather than picking them up

- The intricacy of control your quirk allows over the wind basically makes it a telekenetic quirk, which we do already have a character based around in this rp

- The flying is something I'd recommend against unless the entire battle suit was dedicated to it, like a full wingsuit, without the hard metal defense that seemingly would be clunky and not nearly as aerodynamic as the description suggests.

The main problem is this character is almost identical to a canon character which has opportunity to appear in the rp, so we need some large degree of originality. Do you have any ideas of changes you could make?

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@olcharlieboi might wanna change the join status from Apply in that case

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A dainty figure scooted its way through the doorway and darted to a seat in the back corner, away from the window. The sound of her movements was more like a shuffle than footsteps. She sighed with relief, laying her head within the makeshift bosom of her arms. a slight clacking sound could be heard from the corner of her glasses contacting the table. She dumped her bag on the hook attached to her desk and lazily looked around, yawning at the realisation she was one of the early arrivers. She considered joining the conversation, her gaze wandering to the wall next to her. She grinned, rubbing her thumb on it, revealing the badly covered up scribblings from a previous class. She bunched her cheek atop a fist, learning about the drama and classes that came before, giggling a little at some of the nicknames she made out between crude drawings of people's nether regions.

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The strap of his bag slid effortlessly from his fingers and onto the hook of a desk in the second row of the classroom. He almost fell back into the seat, rocking it back slightly, pressing the heel of his right foot on the edge and beginning to re-tie his shoelace. His eyes scanned the classroom finding only a few others so far. Deciding it harmless to eavesdrop on the conversation next to him, he focused his attention on new people entering the room. He smiled a little seeing familiar faces. Taylor, a childhood friend as they both moved to Japan from Great Britain as toddlers, and recognising Connor from the same entrance exam area he was at. He thought for a moment, not remembering how well he did. A small imaginary figure of himself shrugged in his mind, dismissing its importance as his eyes shifted between the conversation he listened into nearby and the doorway.

vasdfgh

@Buddhaapparently ;) I wanted to see if you got any kinds of additional powers with making the thread but apparently... not really

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@olcharlieboi Wouldn't you basically just not tell him what your bigger fears are? That way his hallucinations are likely to not be as severely crippling as you expect

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@Eklispe I'd second this, as closing your eyes can also negate his quirk it seems

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Wanted to make sure i knew how to make a topic