When are you planing to start? ^_^
Aeron Acantha and Artemis Dwyn do not look 15. Is there a reason your going to put on their bios? Artemis's explanation make since kinda. Just wondering, cause if you just had a hard time finding the right pic, I can totally go hunting if you want any help!! Finding OC pic to match descriptions/age is my favorite!! --This also goes for anyone else needing help finding a pic ---
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Both of your characters personalities are bland and one-dimensional, not thoroughly expanded. Also, the part where Aeron is named a “magical” name should be removed, as well. The whole mythology thing is not so much as a wizarding thing, but just an unspoken theme of J.K. Rowling. Hermione Granger, despite being a muggleborn, has a mythology name. I have my reserves with the whole mother-was-abused thing. If you are able to write it realistically and accurately, then it is allowed, but if you over-do it then I rather you not. And Artemis’s biography also needs to be more expanded on. Also, just for aesthetics, can you remove the things I have placed in parentheses, indent the listing in the electives and clubs on both, as well as fill out the second name section for Aeron and make the biography gray instead of white since it is easier on the eyes. Thanks!
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I agree. I like small groups the most.
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Awh, I understand. Tell your nephew a random teenager from the internet said hi.
Sooo gais...I just got my haircut, and I'm tired af. I will laze around and hopefully read the IC posts.
Edit: The characters will be killed off, and their zombies will forever stay alive! Roaming the school halls.