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Vinson Massif, Antarctica

The sky darkened above Antarctica's highest peak. The sound of the clouds rumbling brought a frown to William Johnson’s face. It was his forty-seventh ascent up Vinson Massif and he’d never once known the clouds to look so heavy and dark. Every part of him felt like they should turn back, but the small expedition group he was lead were only six hundred feet from the top and he knew well enough they wouldn’t turn back now – even if he ordered them to. He had to hope that the heavens didn’t open on them before they made their way back down.

“<Sounds like lightning.>”

Pierre was the most level-headed of the four civilians in Johnson’s group. He was a French extreme sports enthusiast that had traded in banking for a life of risk. He was also the only other person making the climb that had any experience on a mountain. Johnson could tell from the look on Pierre’s face that he knew the clouds were a bad omen.

“<Lighting is the least of our worries. If there’s a downpour there’s no way we’re making it back down the mountain in one piece. It’s tough enough making the descent in good conditions.>”

The Frenchman nodded anxiously and continued to trudge behind Johnson. The Americans following after them were struggling for breath. Despite what they’d been told months before the expedition, none of them had bothered to prepare for the expedition, least of all the forty-two year old that seemed to think climbing a sixteen thousand foot tall mountain would be as easy as running a half marathon. They were morons to the last of them but Johnson was used to it. He’d been leading men with more money than sense up and down these slopes for decades.

There was another loud crack from the clouds above them. This time the group stopped as the rumble of the thunder made the entire mountain shake. They could almost feel it in their chests. They stared at the clouds, scared stiff of a coming maelstrom, until one member of the group pointed a finger towards them.

“Can you see that?”

“We need to keep moving,” Johnson called back to them bullishly. “The weather is not going to get any better and I know you didn’t come this far to turn back now so we need to keep moving.”

“<There’s something falling.>”

The anxiousness in Pierre’s voice caught William’s attention. He stopped despite his reservations and peered up at the object that was falling from the clouds. It was tough to make out among the swirling winds. He reached for his mask, pulling it away from his face, to better see the thing falling from high above them.

“It must be a bird,” Johnson muttered. “What else could it be?”

Pierre braved the bitter winds by plucking the mask off his face also. “<A bird? At this height? That doesn’t make any sense. No bird can survive in this cold.>”

Another shock of lightning in the distance shook the mountain. This time William was forced to hold Pierre’s arm to stop himself from losing his footing. The other men murmured in disbelief as the brief moment of clarity the lightning had provided revealed the object’s true form.

“<It looks like a person.>”

“That doesn’t make any sense,” Johnson said with a shake of his head. “It can’t be.”

A sudden gust of wind sent the object barrelling towards the men. The closer it got to the five of them, the clearer it became that Pierre was correct. It was a person, as improbable as that seemed, and it was heading straight towards them. Johnson shouted a warning to the civilians, yanking on the rope that bound them all together in an attempt to move them out of the falling body’s path. A particularly unfit member of the group struggled to jog out of its path and the Frenchman Pierre shoulder-barged him to the ground at the last second.

The body landed with such a heavy thud that it felt almost like another thunderclap. The mountain shook, jarring the sheet of snow that was resting on top of it, and Johnson looked up at it with despair. If the rain didn’t get them, an avalanche surely would. Some snow knocked loose but to his relief the sheet held and the shaking mountain seemed to steady beneath them.

Pierre made his way towards the body and used his gloved hand to lift its head. “<It’s a man – and he’s still… he’s still breathing, William.>”

“Have you been living under a rock for the past year?” An American shouted over at Pierre. “That’s not a man, you idiot, that’s Superman.”

The American tried to turn the man over but was unable to lift him. He signalled to the others and his friends trudged through the snow to help him. In unison they bent their knees and rolled the body over to reveal a tattered, blood-splattered costume that bore an insignia was familiar to all of them. It was Superman, alright – though there was something different about him. His face was flecked with stubble and there were thick streaks of grey hairs along his temples.

Pierre eyed Superman’s wounds anxiously and then looked at the expedition leader Johnson for direction. “<What do we do? He looks hurt.>”

Johnson reached for the radio on his lapel. He was about to call for help when he noticed that Superman’s eyes had opened. They were glowing red. The first word was barely out of Johnson’s mouth when his jaw was disintegrated by a beam of the Man of Steel’s heat vision. Blood splattered across the snow and sprinkled Pierre’s face. He let out a scream as the expedition leader fell to the ground with a thud.


The Frenchman instinctively started running. His frozen feet were trudging through the blood-splattered snow when a gust of wind sent him barrelling to the ground. He lifted his face from the snow and noticed that in the blink of an eye Superman had torn through the rest of the group. They hadn’t even had time to scream. Pierre’s heart was pounding in his mouth as the red eyes of Superman rested on him.

Pierre screamed out for mercy in every language he could speak. He was using his hands to claw his way through the snow in vain as the Man of Steel approached him. His world turned upside down suddenly as Superman lifted him from the ground as easily as if he were weightless.

Superman stared down at the dangling Frenchman through blood-red eyes that were teeming with malice. “Where are the Fantastic Four?”
The four paragraph rule exists for a reason. Don't try to be creative in getting around it because all that's going to happen is your sheet won't get approved until you can condense your character's history to four paragraphs.

Also, as much as I understand that some people on this site seem to enjoy writing sheets almost as much as posts, could we save posting sheets for Season 2 until the season has actually started? If you have specific questions regarding an idea you have, direct them to the GMs via private message, don't crowd-source them in the OOC thread. It can (unintentionally) dissuade other people from putting their name forward for characters because they feel like they are "taken" before the season has started.

That's not how we run this here ship.
And with that rather meagre conclusion, consider the F4 wrapped up at The Raft and for the season.

It's not much, but I think it's fair to say I'm all written out after the past couple of days. I'm still sitting on my epilogue, of course, so I'm hoping I'll be able to follow that whimpering conclusion up with something slightly more impactful.
"Thank you. For showing me... the way back."

The Raft, New York

Amid the carnage, Scott Free’s words had given Susan Storm reason to hope. If Free could claw his way out from beneath Darkseid’s control, then perhaps anyone could. Though their world was out of their reach now, perhaps there was hope for it yet. Sue comforted herself with that thought as she held her brother Johnny’s hand tightly between hers. He was still unconscious. Deep unconscious at that. With the Surfer defeated, the other heroes had made swift work of holding what remained of The Raft together and the Fantastic Three had joined Johnny on the other side of the bridge.

“He’s gonna be alright,” Ben said confidently as he stared down at the Human Torch. “It’ll take more than a little supernova to put Matchstick down. The kid’s tough.”

Reed nodded in agreement. “Ben’s right. Johnny’s vitals are already looking encouraging. There’s no reason to think that he won’t come be able to recover from th-”

“I know that.”

Reed seemed taken aback by the abruptness of his fiance’s response. He looked to Ben for some kind of explanation, but was greeted with a shrug. Sue was still holding Johnny’s hand as tightly as she had ever done, staring down at him protectively, whilst the two of them watched on. After a few moments, Reed summoned up the courage to speak again.

“What’s wrong, Sue?”

“Nothing is wrong as such. I mean, not nothing – look around us, there’s clearly plenty wrong. I just… Nothing is going to be the same again, Reed. Whatever happens, there’s no way we ever go back our lives the way they were. Not the way they were back home, not even the way they were here before Hammond attacked. Things are going to be different now, for all of us, and there’s nothing we can do to stop that.”

“Differen’t don’t have to mean bad,” Ben piped up from behind Reed. “Different can be good sometimes, Suzie. I mean, I’m as torn up about the craft being destroyed as can be, you know that, but that doesn’t mean that our lives are over and done with. We can still go on living.”

Sue shook her head. “Not the way things were.”

Reed opened his mouth to speak but stopped as he noticed that Sue was pointing out into the street. She hadn’t so much as turned her face to look where she was point. Reed followed her finger’s path and noticed several television trucks that were packed up across the street. Their cameras were pointed directly at them. From behind the cameras, came half a dozen voices shouting Reed’s name at him. He stared at them unblinkingly for a few seconds before he realised his mistake. One of Reed’s stretchy arms pulled Ben in front of them to block the cameras views.

“So the world knows that we’re back,” Reed shrugged. “So what? They were always bound to find out sooner or later, weren’t they? What were we meant to do? Spend the rest of our lives hiding in SHIELD facilities. Maybe this will be a good thing for us. Maybe we can finally starting living a-”

“It’s not us that they’ll think have come back home, Reed. It’s them. Their Fantastic Four – their Reed Richards. We won’t get our lives back because our lives here don’t exist. We’ll have to live out their lives in the public eye until our dying days. Is that what the two of you want? Because it’s definitely not what I want and I can’t think it’s what Johnny would want either.”

Ben sighed. “What choice do we have, Suzie?”

Her shoulders sunk in defeat. Despite her reservations, she almost knew already how this was going to play out. Ben was right. Though every part of her disagreed with it, they really didn’t have much of a choice at all. She would have to pretend to be the Sue Storm that grew up with a father around – and worse still, she would have to live up to her promise to Namor. Her mind raced with all of the millions of potential unintended consequences of their remaining in this world she’d suppressed. This was it. This was their lives now – and, perhaps in more ways than one, there was no going back.

And then unexpectedly Johnny’s hand tightened around his sister’s. Sue glanced down towards him and his eyes had crept open somewhat. She flung her arms around his shoulders and let out a relieved laugh but Johnny’s exhausted eyes seemed confused by all of the commotion. He waved his sister away from him.

“What happened?” Johnny asked in a voice that was so weak it was almost silent. “Did I get the Surfer? Did I save everyone?”

“Too right you did, kid. You shoulda seen the way Chrome Dome went down after you lit his shiny behind up like the fourth of July.”

Johnny smiled weakly before drifting back into unconsciousness with a smile on his face. “Good...”

Sue shot Ben a disapproving look and he shrugged his shoulders. “What? What did you want me to tell the kid? That he swung and missed? Let Matchstick have his moment. When he wakes up in the morning, he’ll barely remember what he had for breakfast this morning, let alone a little white lie. Gimme a break, Suzie.”

Another wave of camera flashes interrupted their conversation and this time Ben's large torso wasn't enough to block Reed, Sue, and Johnny from their path. Sue attempted to shield her brother's face from them in vain, despite knowing he'd likely been photographed hundreds of times during the fighting, until finally Ben lifted the wounded Storm into his arms.

"Let's go home."

"Home," Ben muttered as he scanned the New York horizon as if looking to be directed. "Remind me, Stretch, where exactly is that again?"
Understood. Still, it opens up some other avenues and changes some stuff I already wrote


Okay, great. I'm glad to hear that our sprawling, at points chaotic event has opened up avenues, rather than closing them.

On the avenue-closing note, a little @Lord Wraith shaped birdy tells me the last Thor post – and therefore penultimate main MME post – is done. We're happy to wait on anyone that's doing clean-up/side mission stuff to get finished to put it up, but unless said parties announce themselves in the next hour or two, we'll be forced to push on.

So here's your chance.
Okay. Consider that my last post with the Surfer saga barring any other post Surfer interaction.

Gotta rework my epilogue otherwise.

I did not write it expecting the Raft to be totally destroyed haha


It's not totally destroyed. Just heavily damaged. Certainly repairable over the three month period given enough political will on the city's part.
"I will send you back to your master, broken and begging for him to end your life.”


The Raft, New York

The Surfer coughed. Another mouthful of silver blood came splattering from his mouth and onto his chin. He was laid on his back on the battlefield with a piece of lumbar jutting through his chest. If the Surfer could feel pain, he was certain he would be in it. Yet as long as there was still the power cosmic running through his limbs, the Surfer would go on. Whilst his Lord Darkseid’s wishes remained unfulfilled, no physical labour was beyond the herald’s reach.

“CARL CREEL? JUNE MOON? BARBARA NORRIS? YOU SEEK TO LAY THEIR PAIN AT MY FEET?”

The herald’s pink hands wrapped around the piece of metal lodged in his chest. He pulled hard and without a noise dragged the metal free. The wound did not bleed but there was now a gaping hole in the Surfer’s chest. Its edges were pink and fleshy and now the herald’s silver coating seemed to be retreating even from his torso.

He rose to his feet and approached the Asgardian with a hand outstretched. The God of Thunder swung yet more angry fists in his direction but this time the Surfer invoked his intangibility to pass through them. The strain of doing saw even more of his coating slip away from him, but he did not need much more power to see to it that the god’s true tormentor was revealed to him.

“LORD DARKSEID IS NOT THE AUTHOR OF YOUR PAIN, ASGARDIAN – NOR I ON HIS BEHALF. IF YOU SEEK THE TRUTH, YOU MUST SEARCH CLOSER TO HOME.”

The Surfer’s hands grasped Thor’s head and a sudden shockwave of power cosmic passed through him. As with Iris West earlier in the contest, the herald’s power delved deep into the Asgardian’s memories and sifted through them. Carl Creel’s attack on Marville. June Moon’s enshacklement to the goddess Amora. The pain of Blake Donaldson’s love Barbara Morris. All these memories and more were sent tumbling through Thor’s mind.

And through the carnage a figure appeared. One long thought lost to Thor and his kind. He stood in the darkest recesses of Thor’s mind. He was barely visible. The black suit he had wrapped himself in whilst meddling in the affairs of mortals had been discarded. Now the architect of Blake’s many trials was revealed to him. A sudden shock of lightning illuminated the figure for but a second.


It was Loki. Not Darkseid, nor the Silver Surfer, as the herald had explained. Thought long-dead, Thor’s brother had returned – and had brought a maelstrom of discontent and pain with him from the afterlife. The knowledge tore Thor’s inside aparts. The memories, the images, the Surfer was dredging through were like a hot knife being jabbed into the deepest parts of the Asgardian’s brain.

The Surfer’s hands slipped from Thor’s head and the god fell to his knees in pain. He was still trying to process his brother’s part in his suffering – and the physical pain that the Surfer’s mental assault had inflicted upon him – when the herald passed an intangible hand through the still-reeling Thor’s chest. It lingered through his heart as the Surfer prepared to deliver the coup-de-grace.

“YOU HAVE BEEN A WORTHY ADVERSARY, ASGARDIAN. YOUR DEATH WILL BE QUICK. YOU HAVE EARNED THAT KINDNESS.”
>>Drops character mid-season
>>Picks character back up in time for event months in the planning
>>Complains when character does not feature heavily in plans

Someone somewhere is playing the world's tiniest violin.

The Raft, New York

Ben, Reed, and Sue watched on while Thor and the Silver Surfer duked it out like two warring titans. Each blow that exchanged between the two of them felt like it shook the planet. They had seen might before – indeed, they’d stood before a Silver Surfer before, even faced down Galactus – but this was something else. Johnny’s kamikaze attack had lit up the night’s sky but hadn’t been enough to put the Surfer down. They only hoped that Thor would succeed where their brother had failed.

“The Surfer said he was working for Darkseid,” Ben mumbled. “Do you think maybe it’s our Darkseid? Could he have found us here?”

“I’m afraid there’s no way of knowing that n-”

A blast from the Surfer went crashing into one of the Raft’s remaining radio towers and it started to go down. Reed’s eyes locked on it. There were still people inside. He couldn’t tell whether they were prison staff or prisoners, but if someone didn’t help them they were going to drown to death when that tower hit the freezing waters beneath the prison. Within a half-second, Richards’ powerful brain had deduced a means to keep the tower standing. He opened his mouth to bark orders to the others when Spider-Woman's voice cut across him.

"You, skull dude. Mind giving me a ride through the Raft? I'll use what webbing I have left to keep any fracture points we find as structurally sound as I can make them. That will give the rest of you time to get as many people out as possible. Sound good?"

Reed smiled in recognition of the soundness of the plan the teenager had devised. “What are you waiting for? You heard Spider-Woman.”

The heroes burst into action and what remained of the Fantastic Four did their part assisting the stragglers making desperate escapes from the prison. The damage that Thor and the Surfer were causing was almost immeasurable. If the fight went on for much longer Reed wasn’t sure that there would even be a prison left standing once all was said and done. Where would they put the prisoners? Could they hold them all in one place if things really hit the fan?

He banished the thought from his mind as he heard a distant cry for help. A heavy-duty vehicle carrying around a dozen members of prison staff was clinging to a crumbled edge of the Raft. They were usually used for prison transport but clearly the staff had taken refuge inside it once the breakout had started. Reed signalled to Ben and Sue and the trio dashed towards the vehicle without a second’s hesitation.

Reed’s body at once became as taffy and he caught the vehicle in a hammock of his own making. His stretchy arms and legs shook with the weight of the truck but he soon felt relief as Ben’s rocky hands dragged it from the edge of the cliff and back firmly onto dry land. He tore open its heavy doors and the prison staff members came streaming out of it. There were tears down their faces. They had thought they were staring certain death in the face until the Fantastic Four – or three – had arrived.

A sudden crack announced that another piece of the prison had been knocked free. From high above them a slab of concrete came spiralling towards the newly-freed staff and they let out a scream. Sue extended a hand and caught the slab in a hard-light construct at the last second. With a flick of her wrist she sent it careening towards the sea and the newly-freed civilians breathed a breath of another sigh of relief.

One of them looked towards Ben, Reed, and Sue with a grateful smile. “Thank you so much. I was sure we were goners. Who are you people?”

“There’s no time for that,” Sue shook her head. “Get out of here. You hear me? You get the rest of them out of here and across that bridge.”

The man nodded modestly and shouted directions to his colleagues. Once they were out of eyesight, Ben turned his face up to Thor and Surfer. They were still caught in a furious tussle that could have been torn straight from the pages of classical mythology – and neither of them seemed to be slowing down.


“I should be up there," Ben murmured as a pang of guilt ran over him whilst helplessly watching the battle from the ground. "Thor shouldn’t have to face the Surfer alone. No one should. Get me up there somehow, Stretch, and I'll make Chrome Dome wish he'd never been born.”

Reed shook his head. “We’ve done our part. If anyone can beat the Surfer on their own, it’s Thor. It’s our job now to help get these people out of here and somewhere safe. If the Surfer’s still standing after that? Then we’ll worry about him – and Darkseid – but not a moment before.”

Ben nodded in acceptance and the three of them dashed forwards once more to provide another group with their assistance. Above them, each blast of power cosmic seemed to dance around the New York skyline like a shooting star – and each punch sounded like a thunderclap.

Let the gods be gods, Ben thought to himself in quiet resignation, the Fantastic Four would put people first, as they had done since the start.
“I would have words.”


The Raft, New York

Silver blood came sprouting from the Surfer’s mouth. The force of the Bifrost Bridge being dropped on him had almost achieved what Johnny Storm’s supernova could not. The herald was barely standing. Yet the challenge Thor posed seemed to invigorate him. He plumbed the depths of his power reserves and steeled himself for the battle ahead. Once Thor had been brought to heel, the heroes would all fall. He was their greatest hope – and if it took every ounce of power cosmic that the Surfer had, he was determined to destroy him for the glory of Darkseid.

“NO MORE WORDS, ASGARDIAN.”

Out of the corner of the Surfer’s eye he saw the Blue Beetle catch the still-falling Human Torch. The other heroes gathered around him to see whether he was still drawing breathe. The Surfer considered firing on them one last time, but the God of Thunder posed a more pressing and immediate threat. Let them have their moment. Now was the time for battle.

Though his silver coating had slipped from his hands and had begun to drip clean from his torso, the power that emanated from his balled fists seemed no weaker than before. It surged with a power so strong that the very foundations of The Raft seemed to weaken with every pulse.

It was almost as if the power cosmic was sustaining the herald, extending what strength his broken body had just long enough to see Darkseid’s will done. The cold, lifeless eyes of the Silver Surfer stared at Thor without a hint of intimidation. The herald would as readily take Thor's life as he would lay down his own for Darkseid.


“THIS WORLD WILL LEARN THE FOLLY OF WORSHIPING FALSE IDOLS. WITH YOUR BLOOD, DARKSEID WILL REIGN SUPREME.”

The Silver Surfer darted towards Thor and sent his hands wrapping around the Asgardian’s neck. The electricity tore at his silver skin but seemed to cause him no harm. He squeezed as tightly as he could, pumping the power cosmic directly into the Asgardian’s body with a determined scowl. Thor let out an angry shout and broke the Surfer’s grip. For the first time, shock crossed the herald’s face.

He was weaker than he’d imagined. A punch sped towards his head that he managed to dodge at the last moment and he saw the intensity in auburn-haired god’s eyes as another was launched in his direction. This time the Surfer managed to parry it. He waved a power-throbbing hand in the direction of The Raft’s tallest tower and sent a blast of energy towards it. It exploded on impact and sent a good portion of the prison tumbling into the sea. The other heroes scattered, alive to the threat to the prisoners and staff contained inside, and assured that his battle with the Asgardian would be uninterrupted, the Surfer sent a hale of cosmic energy blasting towards him.


“COME THEN, ASGARDIAN, THE FATE OF SEVEN BILLIONS LIVES WILL BE DECIDED BETWEEN YOU AND I ALONE THIS NIGHT.”

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