Sage said
By tanky, I merely meant he wouldn't shy away from pain and is more likely to charge than speculate whether he can handle te damage or not. The attack would damage him as much as it would anyone else, but his reaction to the damage is what makes him "tanky", it's just pain tolerance.For the chakra increase, that does not stack with the KG. It is caused by the KG which gives him chakra outside of his body. And the "high chakra" thing is relative. It doesn't mean I have more chakra than a Jounin (although your chakra levels can't really be increased by training...), it means for a genin he has more chakra than average. If that's not allowed, you're stating that all genin have exactly the same amount of chakra. For the clones, there was no change from the original character sheet from the first Generation. Actually, Kisheto was accepted in the first Generation because I explained that he doesn't have a good control over his chakra, so he uses clones to compensate by limiting his ninjutsu usage to clone Taijutsu and combos. Don't think of his chakra as "he can use more Jutsu in battle", but more like "he can use a stronger technique as a base technique", such as shadow clones. Because shadow clones is extremely draining, if he used it to the extent in which any genin used their "signature" or "fundamental" Jutsu, it would be even since their techniques would probably be proportional to their chakra levels.
As for your response for the Tank thing: Change it's description, so it will reflect what you just explained properly, otherwise people will become confused.
Chakra - I have a few notes for that. First of all, Chakra Control belongs in skills, not Special traits, seeing it can be trained. As for his Chakra levels, you need to change it to a proper description of his chakra levels. Big Chakra levels, Above average Genin's Chakra levels, something of that sort.
A note I have on both the Chakra levels and the Kekkei Genkai - I am sorry to say that because he is a Genin, I will refuse to accept that he will have both big chakra levels, even if they are not as high as it might appear to be, and let him have a Kekkei Genkai which allows him to gain chakra from outside forces. So, in order for me to consider allowing it, I must request you will either change the Kekkei Genkai so that the control over it (The amount of chakra the user recieves from outside forces) will be decreased and then enable him to recieve more as time passes and he trains it, or that you will lower the regular amounts of chakra he has.
Kekkei Genkai - Except for the point I have made above, I find the Kekkei Genkai is a bit confusing for me. The user recieves chakra from outside forces, known as spirits? While I am fully aware there are jutsus that can allow the transfer of souls (
Spirit Transformation Technique) and then recieve chakra through those spirits, there are a few things which seem very odd to me about Kisheto's Kekkei Genkai (And please feel free to explain youself on each note I give here):
1) How are they able to reciecve chakra from the outer plane and from spirits, let alone make contact with them? That alone seems odd to me.
2) How is it capable of increasing someone's Chakra Control when that is a skill? (Unless the spirit gives him extra knowledge every time he uses it.)
(Please feel free PM'ing me and fully explain to me the KG, so I will be able to completely understand it. Back at the time I was not a full GM and only a IC GM, so excuse me if I did not look over things the way I do now.)
I also would like that your explanation with Shadow Clone Jutsu doesn't make too much sense. How did he "Accidenly" learn a jutsu, and Shadow Clone Jutsu allows people to be capable of learning new jutsus with more ease, not make it harder for them. It also does not make a lot of sense he will be capable of creating many more clones than the average shinobi, due to one single fact you wrote in his CS, which is his poor Chakra Control.
One last thing I would wish to note is his Custom Jutsu, the Void Field. I will have to refuse accepting that due to the fact it is not C ranked as you claimed, but B ranked in my eyes, if not slightly higher. An invisible to the naked eye shield which can completely block Kunai through the use of outer body chakra alone is something that is a lot more powerful than you might think, and I could easily see it become a shield to make jutsus weaker due to the fact its Pure Chakra. I understand he needs to focus at certain points to be capable of completely blocking the kunai, but that would also indicate that his chakra control is a lot better than you say.
At the end, you may want to change his Chakra control, and please do explain his KG to me properly, through PM.
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