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I love that everyone thinks Krin is the bartender now xD @Dark Cloud


Hey, Raine can't QUITE be fully faulted on her case of misidentification. After all she WAS also trying to pay for the damages her improntou arrest of her wayward Guardsmen caused! :D
Commissar Raine - Main Tavern Floor
@Dark Cloud

Finding her way to the bar (and kindly keeping clear of the other patrons for now), Raine waited until Krin was unoccupied before - shaking her head - she fished into a trouser pocket.

"I must apologise for my ... performance, earlier," the Commissar explained in crisp High Gothic, her head bobbing briefly to one side where the table still laid keeled-over and smashed. "I'll ensure that the Guardsmen responsible for their poor discipline are severely punished."

She placed a number of Aquilas - one of the thousands of variants of Imperial world currency out there - onto the counter with an onyx-coloured glove. "For the damages and any outstanding bills my men had not paid." She thought momentarily before, placing her cap on the table - the winged skull leering above the brim - she placed another coin across to the bar. "And for the stiffest stuff you have that won't put me on the floor in one go."
Intro done. Apologies for the broken table, but a Commissar doesn't brook insubordination or fisty-cuffs. Even if you ARE drunk!
The Commissar


The door to this nameless tavern banged back on iron hinges; the newest arrival on the landing heedless of the pairs of eyes that swung her way as she calmly stepped through and swung the door shut again.

She cut a menacing figure among that eclectic crowd, being clad in a severe-cut red and black uniform overcoat. An iron cuirass topped by a two-headed eagle gleamed from her chest as the remaining rain water sluiced across and down onto the floor and her knee-length jackboots. There were few identifying marks on this woman to tell exactly who or what she was. But to those who were in the know, their hearts would have sunk as the the brunette's darkened eyes glowered from beneath her peaked cap.

She was Severina Raine - Commissar, 11th Antari Rifles of the God-Emperor's Imperial Guard. And she was here to ruin someone's day.

Her gaze swept across the various tables and booths that populated the ground level until she located who she was looking for. Placing a black glove on the pommel of her power sword, she calmly strode up to one of the tables and sternly cleared her throat to the three men who sat around it.

"Gentlemen," she curtly cut in, interrupting the trio's game of cards. "You're overdue back at barracks."

The Antari Guardsmen froze. One of the men dropped the cards he was holding out of shock, while another - wisely - immediately got out of his seat and left, leaving a credit behind where he had been. The third man, back facing to the Commissar, made no move.

Severina glowered, her burrow furrowed beneath her cap's brim. "Guardsman Verrak!" she reiterated. "You will return to barracks immediately."

Verrak turned in his seat. "Naht until ah finish ma game." the man slurred, his breath reeking of overindulgence in alcohol.
"Giles, don't!" his compatriot warned, scraping his seat back in preparation to leave.
"Ah, sha' down!" Verrak rumbled clumsily to the other.

Severina's patience broke.

A hand shot forth, grabbing Verrak by the lapels and heaving him out of his seat, sending the latter violently clattering onto the floor. Verrak - despite his state - struck back, shoving the Commissar out and away from him and cracked a fist forward. Years of Scholea training took over for Raine; she ducked the clumsy blow and hammered a fist into Verrak's chest. Verrak landed, back first onto the floor, his inebriation rapidly giving way to blinding rage as - with a shout - he shot to his feet and charged forward.

A fatal mistake. A second blow sent the man flying back into his table, sending both man and the booth's contents to the floor with a violent crash. Verrak's will to fight finally gave out; concussed and bruised, he could only stare stupified as the shadow of the Commissar cut into his vision again, swallowing the tavern's lighting in his sight whole.

"90 days confinement to barracks, penal duties and loss of month's pay, Guardsman Verrak. Consider yourself fortunate that you're not up on a charge of assaulting an Astra Militarum officer!" Severina growled. She shot a glare to the other Antari and gestured to the fallen Guardsman. "Get him back to barracks, Guardsman Eckhart, or you will be joining him!"

As the two men limped out of the tavern, Severina removed her brimmed cap and shook her scarred head sadly to herself. Realising that the brief exchange of blows had caused some damage to local property, she tucked the cap underneath one of her jacket's arms and strode up to the bar counter, intending to settle the matter.
OK, got my character app up. Hope she doesn't become a handful.
Commissar Severina Raine




"Your lasgun’s power cell is full; you haven’t fired a shot! Jonah Vir, I find you in dereliction of your duty to the 11th Antari Rifles, to the Bales Stars Crusade and to the God-Emperor. The sentence is summary execution; do you have anything to say in your defence?"

Age:
Late-30s, Terran Standard (estimated)

Gender:
Female

Occupation:
Commissar, 11th Antari Rifles - Imperial Guard, Imperium of Man

Skills:
Knowledge and capability in military command and discipline - in line with norms of the Imperium of Man’s Commissariat and Imperial Guard - adequate markswoman and a fierce duelist. Basic survival skills, but nothing extraordinary.

Personality:
Outwardly, Severina is the picture of what a Commissar should be - no-nonsense, harsh yet fair, and an inspiration and intimidation for her fellow soldiery. Beneath that fascade, however, Severina is still a human woman; virtues, flaws and all. In particular, she does feel the weight of her responsibilities weighing on her; particular attention is paid to the names and faces of those that she has lost during the Crusade, or the faces of those she was forced to dispense the Emperor's Justice (ie: summary execution for cowardice) upon.

In short, if you are someone who is dutiful to your ideals and doesn't run when danger comes knocking, the Commissar will fight by your side. Try and hurt her, fall below her standards, or impose your beliefs on her or others she cares for and you won't even register the bolt round erupting from her sidearm 'Penance'.

Biography:
A political officer charged with the maintenance and leadership of her assigned regiment, Severina has known nearly nothing outside the cold confines of her Progeniship on Antares and the grinding years she had spent involved in the wars that criss-crossed the Bale Stars area of conflict. One of two daughters to her mother - the latter serving as the last incumbent of the title of Lord-Militant in command of this Crusade - Severina stifles her fears of failure and letting herself and her regiment down behind an iron facade of discipline and duty.

As the conflict against a Ruinous Powers cult known as 'The Sighted' - which the reclamation is charged with destroying - has ground on, Severina has allowed herself few attachments with her ward-regiment. Further and further, however, the conflict had began to show signs that not all as is what it seems. Subversion by the enemies of Man - and the vices of mankind's own flaws - were constantly everywhere; even as far as the very top of the Crusade's leadership.

Whether Commissar Raine and the 11th Antari will survive to see the Crusade's conclusion, however, is yet to be seen ...

Likes:
Nothing out of the ordinary. Just find any common ground as best one could and all will be well.

Dislikes:
Over-indulgence in vice, laxity, unnecessary fighting and cowardice. The last is usually summarily answered with a bolt round through the offender's skull, if warranted by Raine.

Fears:
Betraying her oaths of loyalty to the Imperium of Man.

Weaknesses:
Has the same likelihood of and vulnerability to falling victim to disease, death and other slings and arrows of outrageous fortune that the universe can hurl at a human being.

Other:
Information on wargear carried by Commissar Raine, for reference:
’Penance’ (Bolt Pistol)
’Evenfall’ (Power Sword)
Refractor Field Generator

Theme Song:
"Retribution (Asteria Trailer)" by Legio Symphonica

Hello all. Been in and out of RPG for many a year, saw this and figured I'd give it a go. If that's OK?
1st Fuyuki (Royal Navy) Battle Squadron
Off the Coast

@Paradox Witch@floodtalon


At first, when the circle of magic appeared in the sky and her flotilla's shells were swallowed up in the abyss, Fisher was puzzled. When her Master began to invoke her oddly-named attack, however, the Servant's heart stopped. Breaking into a run from her spot on the bow, she began to charge for Dreadnought's citadel, shouting at the top of her lungs, "NO, MASTER!! WAIT!!"

The crash of Carly's 'magical cannon' threw her off; the Strategist was forced to throw her arms across her face, stopping her eyes from being blinded as a massive blast of energy tore from just in front of her fleet and streaked towards the coastline. Eventually, the cacophony of light and heat died down, allowing Fisher to lower her arms.

She really wish she hadn't, as her eyes fell on a smog and fire-covered section of coastline. Realising that the entire harbor had been gutted, Fisher's characteristic anger flared. In a trice, she was at her Master's side, hauling Carly off the deck by the shoulders and shaking her violently.

"You BITCH-BORN WHORE!!" the Fleet Admiral railed, her face blueing to near-violet. "Just what business did you have to override MY orders to the fleet?! And not only that, while I opted for a carefully planned bombardment of the outer harbour area, you went overkill and very well may have destroyed both our reinforcements and the ONLY foothold we have on this benighted land!! Give me one good reason why I shouldn't-"

"Admiral, ma'am!" A shout came from the main deck. The Ensign calling up to his commander was waving his peaked cap wildly and gesturing to the smoke-filled seaside. "Look!"

Trembling with barely kept in-check anger, Fisher set Carly down and stalked towards the edge of the bridge snatching up her binoculars. Panning across towards where the remains of the harbor were still burning, she caught the pinprick, winking glare of-

... A signal lamp?!

Two hulls suddenly burst out from the smog and Strategist heaved a sigh of relief; it seemed that the last two destroyers (as well as several dozen smog-covered and clearly banged-up, yet alive Marines) had all made it out. What she did not expect, however, was the third shape that loomed in the blackness beyond, punctuated by a menacing series of blasts from its horn and the signal it now flashed to 'Dreadnought':

HMS DREADNOUGHT, HMS QUEEN ELIZABETH REPORTING FOR DUTY.



Fisher lowered her binoculars and looked back at Carly. "I owe you my most heartfelt apologies, Master," she added apologetically. "I won't doubt you again, but please run anything you need to do by me BEFORE you carry it out." She grinned wryly, beckoning to her. "Come now. We have a war to win and a world to save!"

A sentiment, then that it seemed the newest arrival - judging from the (late) telegram shoved into her hands by an out-of-breath rating, followed by Servant Tesla showing up out of the ether - shared. The Fleet Admiral appraised the situation that the Servant of Electricity explained, as well as the radio images that Tesla threw in as visual aids, before nodding sagely.

"Very well. Follow me to the chart-room in the citadel's lower deck; I want to hear and see everything you've just summarised in as much detail as possible." She nodded to Carly. "Mistress, it's best that you follow as well."

'It's safe to say, then,' she thought bitterly to herself as she cycled the bridge's hatch-wheel and responded to a Lieutenant's salute. 'That both the Grail and salvation for my homeland are now well and truly out of reach. Then again, if we all die here today and end up doing nothing to stop whatever evil's been unleashed here ... I suspect it would no longer matter anymore ...'






(a temp'd Odysseus post to be added here)

HMS Dreadnought
4 miles off the Coast of Fuyuki

@Paradox Witch@floodtalon




Admiral Fisher's small fleet had just consolidated their position and had begun to form up further off the coast when the sounds of gunfire echoed from the shoreline. The Servant snapped her eyes landward and brought up her binoculars; other watch officers, likewise, did the same, searching for any sign of the interlopers.

The flare and spatter of muzzle-flash caught her eyes and the Servant felt her lips twist up in revulsion. The mysterious trio had progressed far faster then she anticipated and were, even now, showing little signs of slowing down. Despite many of the Marines maintaining their firing lines in the buildings and thoroughfares - placing well-aimed Lee-Enfield rifle and Lewis and Vickers machine-gun fire on-target - the enemy showed little sign of being wounded. One Marine jumped from a sandbagged firing line his section was ensconced behind, bayonet fixed to his Mk. I SLR, and charged one of the creatures. Though the blade struck home, the creature didn't appear to have been wounded; the unfortunate Englishman was now on the receiving end of potentially being torn to pieces.

Strategist lowered her glasses and turned away from the engagement, her eyes momentarily downcast. She hated this; she knew that in war, she'd have to make calls that would result in men being sent to their deaths, but still, she hated having to make such a call. She took a moment to compose herself, then turned her mind back to the grisly task at hand.

"CTN Bacon!" Fisher called to her 2IC. "Signal to all ships: 'Engage at will'!"

As Strategist's order rang out across inter-ship Morse transmitters and via 'Dreadnought's signal lamps, the fleet - continuing to sail at reduced speed West along the coast - acted. The screening destroyers readied their two-apiece 4-inch and twin 12-pounder guns, while the Invincible adjusted its main guns' elevation. All of them would be shelling the outer Harbour area; at best, it was hoped that they could slow the oncoming Laeus' and allow the last of the ship-building by the docks' piers to be completed - not, however, without cost. The submarine E21 lurked at periscope depth beneath the darkened waters nearby, ready to surface and add its small compliment of surface firepower (or to evacuate anyone stranded on land) when called for.

Dreadnought, however, had trained its broadside elsewhere; acting on earlier intelligence, Fisher had deduced that the co-ordinates Tesla had supplied indicated that either the source of this infestation - or other survivors - had been gathered at those coordinates. As such, she ordered Dreadnought to drop a continuing salvo of 12-inch High Explosive shells away from that position - if pulled off, this will likely take the pressure off anyone fighting in the area.

'At least,' she reflected as she took her leave from the bridge, 'That is the theory.'

Arriving on the bow deck and perched by the jack's unadorned pole, the Admiral stood at ease and placed her gloved hands behind her back as her eyes fell on Fuyuki. She quietly surveyed the all-but-condemned city - briefly wondering to herself if this was how the gods of war felt and saw Man when the latter flailed at itself in their self-destructive throes - before she puffed up her chest.

"FOR KING, COUNTRY AND THE PEOPLE OF FUYUKI, COMMENCE FIRING!!"

Fisher remained unfazed at the thunder-claps and heat waves eminating meters behind her back, as for the second time in that hellish week in Fuyuki's history...

The sky above the Sea of Japan shattered.


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